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~Lady Divinity~ vs Mary Jane
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5 barz (thats 10 lines) no feeding explained votes no hate votes battle after check-in |
aight im checkin in
who spits first? ------------------------------------------------------------------- |
Sorry To Freepost But
.................................. Check Your PMs Mary J .................................. |
I got ya pms hun and they responded to
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CHECKIN IN!
THIS BATTLE WILL BE GOOD TRUST ME! 13 th Desciple THANX FOR SETTIN' IT UP BOO! GOOD LUCK MARY JANE CUZ U'LL NEED IT HOMMIE! |
ok who spitts first?
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i will
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aight ill be waitin
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((( ~LaDy DiViNiTy~ Picks Up The Mic!)))
“Nice Pics!” Mary~Jane Left A ‘PMS’ Stain , your raps~plain ash~grain and thats the "end of you", like i just wrote your last~name!!!// she 's gettin dragged~away like a bitch~chained to the frame of a car in the fast~lane// ~1~ no~doubt you get "punched~out" like your leavin'~work// believe~my~words, you'll be leavin~earth or sweeped off it like unneeded~dirt// ~2~ Illiterate ~ Female~ Saying Unarticulate Crap Like 'Anorexia' is 'Phat'// Im laying This Down Plain, U F*ckin’ 'Suck' and I aint Being 'Ironic' wit Dat// ~3~ I CONTROL U like COMPOSERS, Put U Threw Pain By Pulling Out Your Nose-Hairs 4 Closure// Bitch Is 'Taking pictures' of Her whack 'Rap' to get Her-Self some 'Exposure'// ~4~ Place A 'Ceramics' Ontop Of ur CRANIUM so you can say your 'Head-Strong'// Ya never say things 'Right' strangle ya wit tha cord~ofa~mic now ya Definitely 'Dead-Wrong'// ~5~ ~P.S…. EASY ON THE BIRTH CONTROL PILLZ!~ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/att...=&postid=804359 |
here it goes
Anotha bitch gets swell~headed, `self~centered` now hell~headed my felt~presence belts~sentences, `housin` you like `rentin tenants` you aint nice, I`m `so~tight`writin lyrics that can `(K)not tie` constantly~winnin spittin words `gettin re(a)d more` than `stop lights` Lady~Divinity you started this shit, now im gon` finish You couldn`t hang wit my `bars` if ya name was `Guiness` I`ll `swallow` ya wackness, then `shit it out` to `pass tha truth` you so ugly, playin `co-ed ball` is the only way `dudes make a pass~at~you!` you just got fucked~up, someone tell her to stop~speakin Cuz Divinity only `layin the law`, when fuckin `multiple policemen` no beef gurl but votes needed |
YUP NO BEEF!
JUST A BATTLE..... VOTE! VOTE!VOTE!!!!!!!! .................................................. .................................................. .. |
okay....props to both on this battle.....i enjoyed it...i'm uppin this
shit for yall lazy asses to start voting....quit bullshittin......and come wit explained votes...... |
Aight lemme lay it down for ya....
Punches: Divinity Flow: MJ Multis:Divinity Wordplay: MJ Personals: None It was fairley even, but Divinity just came harder. Nice battle both of you. |
aiight
structure:lady divinity punches:tie personals:tie flow:mary im really feelin both these verses an both u girls killed it but mary jane gets my vote only by a whisker though aiight peace will sum 1 plz vote so this can be shut down aiight http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82245 peace |
wtf... how the fuck did mj get the vote
DAFUKKOUTAHEA!!!!!! .................................................. .................. LEARN TO VOTE! AND READ! |
F*CKIN CLIT RIDA... U ONLY VOTED 4 HER CUZ I MERKED U!
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willybob or w.e u voted 4 her cuz i merked u so ur vote dont count... --------->It was fairley even, but Divinity just came harder. Nice battle both of you. NOW THATS A REAL VOTE!!!! 1-0 |
LMAO @ the pic you posted divinity... i hope you aint tryin to start beef or nuttin... hip hops all luv girl u needa chill
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LoL.... Glad U Like It!
P.S G I dont do net beef like some peeps ~one!~ .................................................. ..... VOTES NEEDED! |
Cerebral has to say something.Mary Jane's last line got that ass. Breakdown Complexity=MaryJane Flow=Lady Divinity Wordplay=Mary Jane Vocab=Lady Divinity Structure=Mary Jane Punches=Mary Jane Multis=Mary Jane Overall=Mary Jane Damn Girl You Got Some Skills >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>ONE<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< |
WTF????????
.......................................... LOL DAMN THESE NEWBS CANT VOTE |
damn dis was too close for me to vote on but i will give tha ladiez thurr propz they both killed thiz shit
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holy sheeeeit a chic fight
vote mj cuz..both had good wordplay, divinity had tha 1 personal of this battle but wasnt really that good, mary jane had much better flo and her punches were more to tha point...and l.d. had some played shit props though 2 ill femcees |
TOO CLOSE??? HOW DO U PPL THINK SHE WON??
.............................................. personal??? she doesent even know me get a l ife |
Tight Ass Battle...Both Ladies Came Wit Some Serious Skills.Evenly Matched I Must Say.Strong Punches,Nice Multies.Both Had Complexity & Nice Metas But Im Gon Hafta Go Wit Lady D On This One...Her Opener Took It
Vote-Lady D Much Props |
the real votes are 2-2
......................... ppl VOTE ON THE DAMN POLL!!!! |
ok on tha reel why you trippin ova this shit gurl? a votes a vote its what peeps feel about it
------------uppin 4 more votes------------------ |
~LaDy DiViNiTy~
Mary~Jane Left A ‘PMS’ Stain , your raps~plain ash~grain and thats the "end of you", like i just wrote your last~name!!!// she 's gettin dragged~away like a bitch~chained to the frame of a car in the fast~lane// ~1~nice intro felt heat right in the beginnin and used good multies and punches no~doubt you get "punched~out" like your leavin'~work// believe~my~words, you'll be leavin~earth or sweeped off it like unneeded~dirt// ~2~damn that was a clever punch in the first line niceness in that and your multies flowed nicely which is a key in using them Illiterate ~ Female~ Saying Unarticulate Crap Like 'Anorexia' is 'Phat'// Im laying This Down Plain, U F*ckin’ 'Suck' and I aint Being 'Ironic' wit Dat// ~3~lol that was funny not really to extreme of a punch but got the job done nice I CONTROL U like COMPOSERS, Put U Threw Pain By Pulling Out Your Nose-Hairs 4 Closure// Bitch Is 'Taking pictures' of Her whack 'Rap' to get Her-Self some 'Exposure'// ~4~LMMFAO damn lol that was nice lol "jus to git sum expousure lol that was tight and still keeping the flow the whole peice good Place A 'Ceramics' Ontop Of ur CRANIUM so you can say your 'Head-Strong'// Ya never say things 'Right' strangle ya wit tha cord~ofa~mic now ya Definitely 'Dead-Wrong'// ~5~[/B]not bad ending nice peice had punches flowed nicely had everythin that is needed for a good battle verse and enjoyed reading it was simple and had the complexity nice job id say a 9.5/10[/B] mary jane Anotha bitch gets swell~headed, `self~centered` now hell~headed kinda lame entrance wasnt heated at all little multi like you werent experienced with them my felt~presence belts~sentences, `housin` you like `rentin tenantsuh not that bad still not that heated for a battle but had good wordplay on this one` you aint nice, I`m `so~tight`writin lyrics that can `(K)not tie` constantly~winnin spittin words `gettin re(a)d more` than `stop lights`Stop lights? lol that was pretty decent i liked that in this battle kinda used lines like that but still decent Lady~Divinity you started this shit, now im gon` finish You couldn`t hang wit my `bars` if ya name was `Guiness` thas like cockyness now your gitten angry in the verse it seems wich was a lil late but still wasnt that bad I`ll `swallow` ya wackness, then `shit it out` to `pass tha truth` you so ugly, playin `co-ed ball` is the only way `dudes make a pass~at~you!`DAMN! That was mean lol i loved that line lolthat hit hard got the job done correctly and flowed well you just got fucked~up, someone tell her to stop~speakin Cuz Divinity only `layin the law`, when fuckin `multiple policemen` this line and the one above were the hardest lines in this whole verse and they hit great they were extremely thought out well and used them the correct way in meaning of persoanls/punches flow was good but couldve been better i give this peice a 9.10 THIS WAS A GOOD BATTLE BUT I GOTTA GIVE IT TOO ~LaDy DiViNiTy~ ON THIS ONE SHE HAD THE BETTER OVERALL VERSE NO HATE JUS EXPLAINING IT THE WAY I SAW IT GOOD BATTLE TO BOTH EMCEES |
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^^^^^^^^ SO THE VOTE IS 4 ME? WHY AINT IT ON THE POLL?!?!?! |
iight mj gets this cuz she fine as hell.........naw im juss playin butchu lookin good ma
but on da reel heer it is fo yall... imma give it to mary jane cuz i think she got it wit better punches, flow and wordplay....but both of u probaly sum of the illest femcees i seen... stay up both of yall |
^^^^^^ WTF U DIDNT EVEN EXPLAIN
JUS READ AND ULL KNOW I WON .............................................. |
damn boo, you really got attitude when it comes to this shit, accept peoples votes
i aint goin around saying OMFG WTF YOU VOTED FOR HER OMG I WIN LOL LOL READ IT AGAIN IT DOESNT COUNT U DIDNT EXPLAIN UR VOTE ^^^^^^ u needa chill... |
LMAO........
MA U KNOW IT AINT FAIR WHEN THE SAME PPL VOTE 4 U ALL THE TIME... BUT W.E IM NOT GOIN AROUND ~ONE!~ P.S I THINK U LOST AGAINST MIC TOURNAMENT! |
first off it aint the same people votin for me lol u need ta chill out
you really are goin crazy ova this take 3 deep breaths and p.s. i dont give a fuck wut u think lol |
IM NOT GOING CRAZY IM JUST BORED AS HELL AND I NEED SOME BITCH TO DISS....
NOW UR REALLY STARTIN IT |
TAKE 3 BREATHS?????
WHAT R U A WANNABE- THERAPIST SPARE YOURSELF THE PAIN ...................................... |
damn you guys start off coo now you wanna beat the shit out of each other damn
i say its a tie so i aint votin hit this up so i could stop buggin lol http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=81821 |
TIE????? I OBVIOUSLY WON... THAT HO SHOULD TAKE HER PIC DOWN ITS MAKIN ME SICK
............................... but ill check ya link out |
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women are pety.....i like how l.d. jacked mary janes siggy steez... jealousy is jus tha younger cuzzo of envy..........food for thought. |
THE SHIT WON'T LET ME VOTE ON YA BATTLE CUZ I AINT GOT 100 POSTS lmao!!!!!!!!
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