Chritt Rapbattles Mod Diss!!
 

I REPLIED TO NONEEDZ THREAD!!!

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/sagelyricistmusic.htm

Textcees!

huh
chrit is wak
ahahahhahhahahhahaha
battle him then kid
u prlly his alies are sum shit
or sum mod or sumthin
funy tho
u shud merk him an get ya first win

Lmmfao

Damn. Shit was pretty good. Probably one of the best tracks I've heard from an internet head. Quality was nice and your flow was on point 95% of the time. I only really noticed it fallin off once. You went off beat once or twice, too, but it's straight. Good shit. The caps lock and assault charge thing were nice. Haha. Stay up, kid.

[quote]Lmmfao

Sounds like...eThug...

uhhh...this shit was coo...but ya flow was off, more than once...ya delivery was a little off...lyrics were nice, but the verse structure was kinda weak...coo for a little diss...nothin too special...i liked the caps lock line...that once probably hit the best...good shit....


.peace.

this was funny in places, and the beat is ill!

*woosh*

You're Scheme Is Horrible Lmao, Half Of
You're Lines Don't Even Rhyme . You're
Flow Is Crooked, You're Emotion & Delivery
Was About The Only thing Good .

haha liked the punches about him being a text cee,
u had good flow, nice beat, good delivery,
bah u should work on your breathing a lil bit,
but other then that........bhahahaahaahaha funny as fuck punchlines man......................

lmfao . . . chrit you know you my homie . . .


. . . but you just got rode on like . . .









WHOA!

lmao

okay

The only reason my flow is off or I fall off beat at all is because I wrote the diss with no beat, then tried to find a beat to match. Im sorry but I dont care enough about internet beef to spend time on it, I got blazed and bored so I decided to spit this over a beat. If you think I have no flow you can look at the rest of the tracks on my page. (Look at "Sage Verses" probably best example of my variety of styles) I was also stoned beyond belief and my throat was KICKED. You should see the buddah I got right now wooo.. but anyways that affected my breath control because it hurt me to inhale. Lol.

lol.. this is the most feedback I've ever gotten and its from dissing some wack homosexual mod. Ah well this shit was fun. Jokes.

peace

YOU SUCK LEARNTO RAP

shit was ok.... but um if you write it before u hear the beat DONT just rap what u wrote. EDIT it to fit the beat naw mean.... ok stay uip.. now make a SONG that i can nodd my head to... fuck a diss.

nice diss.......you got flows son.......


i dont know who u dissin but that was straight....best cut i peeped here today but i only been threw a couple so far

stay up
look fa me







D

chrit got ripped....the thesis and jesus line was tyte tho...good shit

Ahhh. . it was sort of whack. You was off-beat badly. Missed the snare every 2 bars. I mean I write without the beat sometimes too. . but it doesn't take but a couple minutes to fix it to fit. That is no excuse. Delivery could use work but it seemed delivery and emotion was your best suit. Lyrics were average. A lot of filler and some played shit.

I expected better. . . blah.

lol i was feelin it. made some good points

are you faggots on crack, wtf are you talking about "missed the snare", like every bar in a rap track has to match every drum hit and snare perfectly? that beat has alot of switchups, some bars are longer than others when its switching.

and like I said for the billionth time, I did this shit for fun, I didnt spend time on the shit, I could care less if it isnt the perfect track. I got more important shit to do than waste my time perfecting a diss track about some bitch made textcee that is never going to reply back with anything but a dumb ass text comment (and maybe a nail biting open mic piece!).

its spelled Chrit.......

^That just tore this diss to pieces. LMMFAO

NO IT DIDENT
LADFMAAMNFAOFLLOWA:LF>?>!!AL:DA<FA:DL>@OORLLFAKFMAFLOL!

shit I like this... and agree!

you wasted your time dissing textcees without microphones...


honestly... there just gonna come in here with there friends and talk shit...

the fact taht you have somewhat a sense of rhythm places you higher then them in my eyes...

yeah and because I said you're the only head thats worth a listen!

DONT FORGET NONEEDZ WTF KID SHIT BTICH WJHDAJDSALKD:LQK!JK@!K!

"blah blah blah"

That's all I read from your reply after you started making MORE excuses. Face it kid you fuckin suck. Just go away. This shit wasn't worth my time listening to. And no I'm not just another textcee. I do audio as well so I know what I'm talking about. You have a flow like Master Blaster. Now leave. Thank you come again.

Good Job, a TEXT REPLY

^Master Blaster - Forever iLL

i was expectin some wack shit, i was jsut peepin cuz i noticed my thread was closed due to that rule.... but beat was dope, quality was aiight, but i can tell u know how to mix, echos were on point, most people dont have it echo to the tempo of the ebat... flow was nice........pretty dope shit

Hah - nice shit here.
Flow was on.
Lyrics were on point, disses hit hard.
Nice shit, some of the best I've heard.
Keep dropping.