Mary~Jane vs revenge_archer
 

no d/r hate crew votes 10 lines check in ill spit first

lets get the ball rollin









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ok im checking in, luck too u............



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(dammint i hate this 100 words min thing!)

My spoken~flows are chokin~hoes, leave `Archer` wit a broken~nose
Like an `Indian witout arrows`; im forced to be `throwin~bows`
My lean~kicks makes spleens~split when I`m droppin `these~hits`
This kids jus` another `easy bite`in a box of `Cheez~its`
(metaphor and 2 punches.. can u find em all? lol)
I rocked~ya~dome, you constantly spittin shit thats `not~ya~own`
I got~tha~flow, like `gay inmates` this kid purposely `drops~tha~soap`
I gave you warning, `battle me~and~your~dead`
Archer wanted wanted `corn rows` so tha dumbass `planted seeds~on~his~head`
I`m sick~of~this, Revenge Archer? I'll kick~this~bitch
Ya spits like `buildin a house wit crap` cuz I leave u `shittin~bricks`
(another double punch n meta)

(good spit sorry wasnt watching da screen i will spit in a sec sorry lunch is ready........................)

Heh...Naice... :D ..

while ur 'throwing-bows', im 'throwing-hoes', picking u up and throwing u 'across-da-road'/

id like to 'beat u', 'eat u' and 'spit u out', but right now im having trouble getting outta da 'nut house'/

'ill-slice-u-open' then ill show the world tht all tht shit was 'pre spoken'(was written before da battle) my ego just 'awoken', wasnt u da one giving ur momma a 'soken' now stop 'a scratching' we knows ur 'acting' get outta da house so u can scratch ur 'pubic louse'/

u is an 'ill mc' u gots aids and 'hiv!' /

(im not making excuses but me has a fever....*shrugs* it was just for fun, yo mary jane nothing personal k?)

aight nice verse





now lets get some votes










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If my Vote Counts...(Quite Obvious who Won)


Flow - Revenge
Multies - Mary~Jane
Punches - Mary~Jane
Personals - None really...
Metas - Tie..
Wordplay - Mary~Jane

Vote - Mary~Jane

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aight mary jane 1
revenge 0


(i can never battle well on forums i have no idea y lol. )

uppin for votes common DUN SLEEP ON DIS!

(good spit sorry wasnt watching da screen i will spit in a sec sorry lunch is ready........................)

damnit y did tht post show up again??????, *ish confuzzeld* anyways

common UPPIN FOR VOTES ALREADY!!

uppin 4 votes























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Mary Jane Took This One With Ease.Nice Multies & Stronger Punches Gave Her The Advantage...Elevate Revenge...

Vote-Mary J

thnx alpha

1-0 uppin








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Mary jane took this cuz she's damn fine















But olso cuz she hit harder it punches...Vote=Mary

Mary Jane took this easily........

better wordplay and punches.....nuttin more to say!

vote: Mary Jane....

look at this...people sleep on:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=78934

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ghlight=xl4real

one more vote please to close this off














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Real Nice Battle.....
I Cant Vote In Poll Coz Ma Post Count....But A Real Nice Battle :)

Well done To Both
If I Was To Pikk A Winner I'd Say Mary....Nice Multies Gurl!!

uppin fa tha last vote









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mary jane ripped this kid


she came harder
with
the
punches,
metas
flow

nice drop of both of ya though


check it out
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82245