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both unbeaten, til now Dark Cursiv V Mary~Jane
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no crew votes no dickridin no feedin You spit first as in rules set good luck gonna be ill |
aight im checkin in bout to spit it up
btw.. its all in luv lol im sure i dont gotta remind you, i just dont want somethin like lady divinity happenin again where she got all mad anyways... spittin now |
Aiiiight, no beef or nutn, lookin forward to seein ya verse, lets battle in love for the game............peace............................. ..........
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You bout to get `walked all over`; like tha people `under~tha~stairs`
Try `sleepin on Mary Jane` and you`ll wind up wit `nightmares` Your battle ego is real~wrong, so lets be real~dawg You got plenty of `room for improvement`, wit nothin to `build~on` Just re~lax, step back, and watch as I`m killin these~cats You must be `butterfingers` Cursive cuz u `cant seem to grasp these~facts` `Drastik~measurez` want me in their crew, cuz all they get is `plastic~pleasures` When will you stop askin?~never; y`all are `second string` like `patchin~sweaters` Dont matter what that whore~said, I leave u bitches `more~dead` Dark Cursive? I`ll `PRINT` loser on your fuckin fore~head |
Alright, posted my shit now:
Check this: You Whole style is weak bitch, ya only flow is ya period stain/ I'm about to hit this whore lyrically as hard as a fuckin train/ How can I read you, multi's don't decide the winner of this shit/ Punchlines decide this shit, so take a good look at the weak punches you writ/ Battle rap, your oestrogen versus my testosterone, male hormone/ Check ya pic transvestite, I don't condone,what is shown/ Male on female violence, beat this trick up it ain't nuttin/ She PM'd me before askin for dry anal hard fuckin/ So you about to get bitchslapped, pull out the gat and shoot ya kneecaps/ Your punches are indirect, your wack, I'll verbally K.O ya and that's a matter of fact.............................. No one sleep on this shit.............................................. .................. |
aight good verse... just one thing to say... that period stain line is PLAYYYYYYYYYYYYYED... ok i got it out... lol good shit cursive lets see now about votes
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while we at that, no beef but your punchlines are indirect and don't make sense.....................good battle..................plus ya spelt my name wrong............
Only kiddin, that line is played but still, my other lines were strong...............................lets see how the votin goes............peace |
So you about to get bitchslapped, pull out the gat and shoot ya kneecaps/
Your punches are indirect, your wack, I'll verbally K.O ya and that's a matter of fact.............................. i liked tht line. was real good but i loved this line When will you stop askin?~never; y`all are `second string` like `patchin~sweaters` Dont matter what that whore~said, I leave u bitches `more~dead` Dark Cursive? I`ll `PRINT` loser on your fuckin fore~head i think mary jane got this, even though very rare ounches i think the multis ruined it slightly (cos theres so many) but it still beat cursive. sorry dawg but it was a good spit. my vote-mary jane |
if you dont take those pics out of your sig i may come to your home and shoot you.
..jack mehoff!...what? ..AND YOU THOUGHT U WERE SAFE... !!!!!!........what? |
i thought both MC's came wit heat
but i think this was a close battle punches:Tie flow:Dark srtucture:Dark meta's:Mary Jane Multis:mary jane but my vote goes to: Dark |
honestly, I thought MJ took this
Dark came softer than MJ did on this and tho MJ disses aint solid cold.......it made sense Dark, her shit hit harder but who knows? I may be seduced by MJ's sig lolol Vote = MJ hit dis battle up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82075 |
oops, hey mods, i poll voted the wrong person, i hit Dark instead of MJ, if yall see this you can make amends to it
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dont worry bout that the mod will fix it
1-1 right now and uppin this bitch --------------------------------- |
uppin
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Poll fixed..............
Battle is at 1-1 now......... Upping for votes for these cats........... |
i think we have a new great text'c on dis site.......
an there name aint in cursiv...... maryjane took this in every category imaginable- her lyrics are like her pics....hot............................. best femcee i've ever seen on here....includin dem warlord chiks- much respect-pc*1* vote-mary~jane |
Taking a look at the structure MJ had better overall everything love the multi play that is a true sighn of an emcee, plus she's hott a little young I think but hot so my vote MJ
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good looks yall pale horse dont forget to put it in the poll :)
anyways uppin ----- |
Punches- I suppose the same...but MJ edged this
W/P-MJ(easily) Complexity-MJ Flow-MJ Vote-Mary-Jane Pz |
yo m-j got dis beta punches n flow.
cursiv laked in dees. gd battle yall. vote=mary-jane.. pz................................................ .................................... |
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Way to represent ma...... Like whoa...... Now vote damnit............ End this.................. |
Shit.....
Mary~Jane Took This... Punches- Mary~Jane Multies- Neither Vocab- Not Much Wordplay- Mary~Jane Vote=Mary~Jane |
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damn that was a tight battle from both of yall i think MJ's punches were deffinetly harder and she had better flow DC had some hot punches too but the lines sounded strechted -no beef- My Vote -MaryJane
hit it up honestly NO D/R NO Hate -http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=82035&perpage=15&pagenumber=1 |
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