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The Entertainer 09-29-03 02:14 PM

THE ENTERTAINER vs s1iCk (MUST SEE)
 
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due date: 8pm
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thats all



peace

s1iCk 09-29-03 02:38 PM

i'll jus drop rite now:

yo i back wut i say cuz im the biggest shit talker/
been sick since darth vader was still anakin skywalker/
i turn this clown into a death row artist,this nigga jus stupid/
when i hit him wit 2 bars i leave his fuckin "I's (eyes) Crooked"/
when it comes to rap, u dont know wut im about/
u couldnt spit "hot shit" if the devil crapped in ur mouth!/
i only gotta scribble shit,you think of raps wit all ur mite/
if u wrapped ur rhymes in "spandex" they still wouldnt be "tight"/
yeah im new to this site, but on the streets im bonafide/
u like a "pizza pocket" nigga, "soft and gooey" on the inside/
real recognize real,it seems like you've been ignored/
the only place this faggot "thugs" is on this fuckin message board/
wut u cryin?did u get ur feelings hurt?/
u can rap jus cuz u wear "ecko" pants and t-shirts/
tell u what we can do, it'll only take a second/
i go over slap ur mom and u can put a "dubb"(W) on ur record/
yeah right,u "soft" like baby shampoo/
dogg, if i was retarded i'd still come wit "smarter" drops than u!/
face it, going against me was jus fuckin "brain-less"/
ur name's just "the entertainer" cuz ur gonna die "name-less"

no beef, good luck!

The Entertainer 09-29-03 07:28 PM

Your a Joke what is "ITT" u want? Im battlin a "Clown"/
This bitch is more pussy than soccer players fallin down/
(The ITTs a clown)

Like 80% of Priests Im Moleste U like a little Girl/
U "Aint ready for this" like Jail Convicts sent back into the real World/

Im "Phater" than chicks Spinnin around 2 make themselves Hover/
My skills are "Higher" than Holacaust Jews "Piled up Top One Another"/ (R.I.P)

U gettin beat More than a girl this mornin by a dude in a Nilone Mask/
Exceptin this u were "Sucked In", like "Little Nickys Devil Flask"/ (sum girl got jumped today)

Winning this battles rare, like hearin Will Smith on a CD-Cuss/
Weaker than babies in "Wombs", Sick Spits u could never "Feed-Us"/ (get it)

Ur like one Giant old navy commercial, simply just a FAG/
My spits r dirtier then goin "Down Town" on a bitch whos on her Rag/

You have a lot to learn s1ick, your skills are Imature/
Ur spits are like "R Kelly" wit "Girls", Ya shits still Pre-Mature/

Im stimulating more heat then two dykes who always Fondle/
You just cant compare to me Like burger king Fries Vs Macdonalds/

This guys "Cheaper" than MC31's new user name "2 Cents"/
Very funny spits, but they more basic than Applied Students/

THats all im finished, now u more speechless than a Munk/
Your kinda like MUCH MUSIC dawg, your mearly a Straight Punk/!


VOTE

The Entertainer 09-29-03 08:01 PM

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Emerge 09-29-03 08:19 PM

it WAS a good battle but entertanier fuck up the last 4 lines shit was weak it slick took it with punchlines and creativity entertaner got the structure but all in all slick had him in every aspect then the finisher came and entertaner did not even show up for it fukin dumbass!!!!!!!!


vote - slick-

The Entertainer 09-29-03 08:24 PM

r u joking

Stfu u hater

Ur an idiot, If my ryhmes were wrapped in spandex i sill wouldnt be tight?

U dont no shit u fuckin idiot, u dont know punchlines, thats why ur names HERBAL

The Entertainer 09-29-03 10:13 PM

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The Entertainer 09-29-03 10:48 PM

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Munkydude87 09-29-03 10:52 PM

Entertainer flowed better, hit harder, and had an overall better flow.

Hit my battle up :)

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82598

s1iCk 09-29-03 10:54 PM

This guys "Cheaper" than MC31's new user name "2 Cents"/
Very funny spits, but they more basic than Applied Students/

THats all im finished, now u more speechless than a Munk/
Your kinda like MUCH MUSIC dawg, your mearly a Straight Punk/!

c'mon dogg, before u talk about punches look over ur shit...no beef jus straightenin shit out...and if theres a problem we can do it on audio to figure it out..

The Entertainer 09-29-03 11:00 PM

U picked ou tmy worst two lines

and U probably dont even get the Much Music line, and im not going to explain it

Listen, when you've beatin ppl like dacurse, execution, or mystikie then come talk to me bout punches, fag

blackguy 09-29-03 11:16 PM

Entertainer it seems like your clownin on everyone else besides S1iCk
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s1iCk 09-29-03 11:22 PM

ok whoever those people are i dont know them but u seem to be very enfatuated with them, now stop dickriding , if u really want it lets do audio...or would ur accent impede u from doing that?

gotaloveforrap 09-29-03 11:27 PM

aight holmes, let me break down this battle how i saw it.....

structure-entertainer
flow-tie
punches-slick
wordplay-slick
vocab-tie
personals-slick
overall-slick

aight props to the both of ya, but slick took this, good battle and no beef

yo if u have the time can u check out my latest open mic?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82558
thanx

peace.....

The Entertainer 09-29-03 11:32 PM

Stop with the D/R newbie votes

If u cant vote poll, then dont fuckin post

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s1iCk 09-30-03 01:40 AM

do i smell a bitch in sumone???how can i have dickriding votes if this is my first time here? dumb bitch, that nigga had 135 posts so its a fair vote...if anything niggaz is dr yo ass...

Emerge 09-30-03 02:07 AM

man fuk ure stupid ass entertaner matter a fact how about u battle me and show me wat "punchlines" are all about cuz i want to see wat the fuk u have to say u piece of shit ure fukin garbage homie fa real

and just for kicks and giggles fuck slick too

entertaner u fukin fag u must be a gay bar stripper wit a name like entertaner and dont say shit about my name hoe u dont fukin know me or know wat my name means mutha fucka u coudn scratch the surface wit a fukin shoverl


BRING IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

FreSh_EmCee 09-30-03 02:16 AM

vote entertainer....better verse i rekn...nice flow...better flow allround
nice verses from both of u's...
yeh
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bout dat eh??
vote=entertainer

peace

Trah Siph 09-30-03 08:04 AM

close but I vote for the entertainer, marginally took it withn his punches, better flow etc............................



Vote: Entertainer

The Entertainer 09-30-03 08:59 AM

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s1iCk 09-30-03 12:07 PM

hahaha, "better flow", ITS TEXT!!!!!!!!!!!, NO ONE HAS A "BETTER FLOW" ON TEXT, TRY TO FLOW WHAT HE WROTE ON TO A BEAT!? U COULDNT DO IT...

The Entertainer 09-30-03 01:08 PM

Fuck a beat

why do u think im doing text?


r u a dum ass dude?............................................. .............................................

CarsonJet-2k4 09-30-03 01:13 PM

both were of poor stature.....slik im suprised....
u changed ur name to be a newbie an u dropped like one.....

entertainer.....
half ur lines were dumb....soccer players fallin down
an half didnt make sense.....preists dont moleste girls

slik i give u this vote simply on the fact that the other kat dropped mad wak-

but str8'n ur act up.......
vote-slick

Both...Hit Jet up wit an honest vote on this battle...thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82498

Capcom 09-30-03 01:22 PM

Man Slik worked yo ass entertainer....Like muh man CarsonJet said, half them punches you spit didn't even make sense, although that Womb/Feed us line was pretty dope though....Overall slik just out punched u here with punchlines & personals.....

Vote = Slik

The Entertainer 09-30-03 01:30 PM

can we all say

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Rappad 09-30-03 01:31 PM

Vote=entertainer

Honestly, I thought he took this by a long shot...flow punches wordplay everything

This battle was weak though....both of you gotta elevate

BROOKLYN 09-30-03 01:53 PM

BOTH WAS WACK & PLAYED
ENTERTAINER WAS NO BETTER WITH HIS 1 LINED VOTES
I GIVE THIS TO SLICK BETTER STRUCTURE & I FEEL HIS FLOW WAS LESS OFF & LESS ELEMENTARY
ENTERTAINER SHOULD LEARN TO STOP HIS D'R BEFORE HE START THROWIN NEWBIES
VOTE=S1ICK

s1iCk 09-30-03 03:19 PM

yo Carson, i dont know u dogg, i havent changed my name, its my first time on this site, so u must have me confused...

s1iCk 09-30-03 03:20 PM

and entertainer, wack fake mc's say, "fuck a beat" mufuckas that cant rap...so there u go, im a "dum ass dude" like u said, but at least i can flow...

CarsonJet-2k4 09-30-03 03:22 PM

mayeb i do.......have u confused...could be why ur not that good...

sorry for the assumption........

C_Drama 09-30-03 03:25 PM

I give this one to Entertainer, more complex, creative and stronger disses

Slick's disses were iiight, Entertainer shit was no killer, but it alot more than Slicks and some were somewhat impressive

i liked da jew/haloucaust line

Flow = Slick
Punches = ENtertainer
Multis = None
Metas = Entertainer
Wordplay = Entertainer
Creativity = Entertainer

Vote = Entertainer

s1iCk 09-30-03 04:28 PM

maybe...u do got me confused carson...who knows...peace...and it was weak but take a look at what time the post was made right after the battle thread was posted, that shit was right off the top of my head, this nigga all day to post....im jus sayin since everyone who criticized said the battle was "weak" on both sides...

menolin 09-30-03 04:35 PM

yo every 1 sl1ck killed out here he had everthing better, the other nigga dropped a tight verse, but sl1c was on fire he heated the spot,



the line that did it for me was:
yo i back wut i say cuz im the biggest shit talker/
been sick since darth vader was still anakin skywalker/
~well i thought it was a sick line~


aiight peace


an hit this up:yo i back wut i say cuz im the biggest shit talker/
been sick since darth vader was still anakin skywalker/

menolin 09-30-03 04:36 PM

never mind the last line, i thouht i was postin a link.............................................. ...........
willibob Vsmokkybong, peep it an vote........................


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