V.A. $lim Vs OLI_DOGG
 

ok man.
jst a quick 1.
6 linez.u spit 1st.
normal rulez.drop quick n ill hit ya bak.1.gd luk.

oli why do you want to be a rapper when your rhymes are weak
you make more money working as a mime that speaks
striv'n to be famous~want'n to be like mike meyers
but in all reality your just an Austin with no powers
and when I'm done you'll be laid up like a vegetable
tha same that parent feed there boys so they wont grow up like you a man with no testicles

yo ill make sure to hit this up wit an honest vote if ya return the favoe on mine aight nigga thanx here is the link



http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82491

man what the fuck is up with this I fuckin post as soon as the shits up and he still hasnt posted its been about 45 min what is he fucking choking on his keyboard

ok man dat verse u wrote was *perfetic*,
and wen i beat u, u beta not cry, jst accept *it*,
listen im a lyrical *masta*,my punches hittin u *faster*,
im gone smoke u up like a *rasta*, da names o_d u aint heard da *lasta*(last),
but dis is da lst of da battle between me and *u*,
so ill finnish of with i no my verse was shit but not as shit as *u*,
faggot.
1

can anyone tell me if that counts as a win since he fuckin left and never posted or does a no show not count as a fucking win

soz bout da delay ad 2 do sumin......................................votes.. .................................................. ................pz

can we get some votes............................................. .................................................. ..............

Both Weak
Tut Tut..........

Cant Vote Coz I Aint Registered 4 Da Polls
Sorry :) . . .

...#Poof#...
Out.

yeh dis shit is week.i did dis in 5 mins but lets av sum votes plz............................................... .................................................. .........pz

can we get some votes............................................. ......................plz......................... ........................................

alright contrary to wat them other fus said i must say that for only 6 lines slim did his own thang oli dog u fukin suck a lot homie that battle wit rookie was a piece of shit u only beat him cuz he is about as effective as condom wit no tip on it anyway slim wins this one that mime line was funny i chuckled

slim totally

can we get some votes .................................................. .................................................. ......

come on peops we need to finish this lets not let it die so plz put in some votes............................................. .................................................. .................................plz

cant anyone fucking vote.............................................. .................................................. ......................

come on people can you just vote to get this one over with dont let it die shit this is my first battle on this site

aiight the best line s in this were

VA SLIM:striv'n to be famous~want'n to be like mike meyers
but in all reality your just an Austin with no powers
~this was a nice line in my opinion~

OLI dog:but dis is da lst of da battle between me and *u*,
so ill finnish of with i no my verse was shit but not as shit as *u*,
~still a weak line~


use more vocab, an structure, i kno u both newb but ya gotta read other battles an elevate ur styles


my vote:slim


hit this up:but dis is da lst of da battle between me and *u*,
so ill finnish of with i no my verse was shit but not as shit as *u*,

4 get the last post i though i had copied a link wen i hadnt lol............................................... ...............................

come on ppl uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. .................................................

i think both verses were wack i just liked oli's setup= vote=Oli

look peep, its kinda hard to vote on battles like this (yaya noobs need to up their recs too)

but...........its a real pain even TRYING to read it......

but, ima be da nice guy and not sleep on dis

Slim came harder on this, better flow to it as well

both of u need som SERIOUS ELEVATION!!!!

vote = slim

come on everybody uppin for votes............................................. ..................................

uppin for votes come yall dont sleep on this .................................................. .......................................