MR. SpitsvsRemix_17
 

aight im at my boy's house Remix_17 and he wants to battle me so wen i spit i'm gonna log off my name and then he goin to log in on his Remix_17 and ya'll tell me who better and vote in front lines so this is bitch slapped and its my cal out to him even thow he is sitten right here aight nigga's here are the rules

no crew
hater
or d/r voters
no feedoffs
no freeposts
no bitin
no recylin
10 to 12 lines max
and i spit first aight nigga's peace

aight here is my check in and my spit

warm up....

yo, this bitch better "laylow" cause he is comen wit a "gay flow"/1

cause i gots more lyrics then his brain can "hold" he will never be noticed even if he wrote in "bold"/2

but i will write in lower case and still be on "top" cause my lyrics are "hot" and his lyrics are "not"/3

and he gonna trie and match my multi's but he's just gonna get his tongue tide in a "knot" and he gonna say my hot "spot" was "blocked"/4 ( get it it was blocked by the not )

but really i stopped the pathage of his "brain waves" and have him get a "migrane" and nock his "train" off the tracks and watch his hole head "concave"/5 ( get train of thought )

so he will be allset for "holloween" but he really didnt have that much inside his sckull it was "hollow" and the size of a "pea"/6

thats why he aint gonna reach the ten "line" "spit limit"/7

and he gonna trie to spit his "rhyme" and "mimick" "mine" but he really just a "bigit"/8

merkin time......

ya couldnt get the higher vote's even if ya pumped ya lyrics wit "thc"/9

but i will wen i'm comen down and thats why ya cant "see me" and i'm ya idol ya only wonna "be me"/10

and im the one that "brought" ya to this "website" and now we "fought" and watch this bitch be "dead tonight"/11

aight im checkin in i will drop my shit and watch this lil bitch get ripped so all rab battle. com battlers vote on this shit

yo' im< insane> and i spit so hard i give tumors to your <brain> not one but <two> u need to get slap what should i <use> timberland <boot> or nike <shoe> i think i'll go with the air force <2's> im <mental> i'll stab u in the <temple> with a sharp <pencil> then i'll carve my <inatials> in your chest with a <stencil>fuck< this> while im at <it> i'll let my<fist> unload on your<espohgist> you tryied to call me out thinkin it was gona<be>an<easy><victory> nothing is easy when your punk ass just got over a<histarectame> you need to be taught a lesson in in life so go ahead and<learn>YOU MESS WITH FIRE U WILL BE<BURNED>

yo we uppin this shit aight niggas peace and please hit this shit up please need votes my boy remix_17 say he gonna merk me and i wonna find out holla

yo uppin fo da second time aight niggas holla and vote please need votes holla............................................. ...........................

I am not going to poll vote but I think spitts took it although remix wasn't bad just needs to put structure and elevate... GOod battle for remix and bad battle for spits...
Yo when we gonna battle spits....

Remix prob was basically not landing his disses well and a part of his verse spent too many time on shoes lol

room for improvement

Spits, i liked da tongue tied/multis shit, dat had me laughing

and da mimic and train shit was coo too

Mr.Spits hit harder on this

Vote = Spits

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well done spits............reppin good son.....ya merked remix but i see potential in re,mix........jus needs to sort his lini out and shit........nice battle........oh yeah check out a guys verse in tryouts....he's aight so go and put a vote on spits

Yeah I think if Remix worked at it he would be pretty Ill, but Spits took this one easy. Punches harder and more on topic.

Vote: Spits

And drop me an honest vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82767

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Spits had good flows and structures....

Remix, you DEFINITALY lost it with your format....

But Spits still had better punches...disses....little bit of wordplay...but It was still an Aight battle...

Vote = Spits....

Vote on this peeps....DeeP MynDz Vs. Condom_King
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spits got this his verse punches and overalll was way better than Remix he needs to up with skillz hollaz

vote for my battle
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yo im uppin fo the 4rth time aight nigga please make sure to drop an honest vote aight..........................................

yo im uppin fo da last time it is my fifth one so please niggas hit this shit up if use do i will return da favor promise so just drop a link and vote honestly

ok....weak battle....very weak......spits, structure was awful, flow ok, punches were there but didn't hit too hard........wordplay, eh ok........remix, don't use paragraph form, that makes it seem like you're writing an essay. You gotta elevate madly.

I think spits took this with punches, that's bout it, maybe flow too......blah

VOte=spits

hmmm..........

punches - spits
flow - spits
vocab/complexity - spits

basically better all over verse........

vote- spits

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good battle

personals-spits
wordplay-spits
punches-remix
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