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Mary~Jane 09-30-03 08:15 PM

Mary~Jane vs Bionicle
 
werd heres the thread, ill spit once u check in

10 lines
no dr/hate/crew votes

yall know the deal lets rumble

.|Bi0niclE|. 09-30-03 08:25 PM

check-in
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Mary~Jane 09-30-03 08:57 PM

I smoke on~tracks, flowin~fast, blow right~past, make ya~crash
I kick ya~ass, `beat you wit a news camera` give u a `broad~cast`
Cause Mary Jane is `ill from conception`, like `cancerous sperm cells`
whippin herbs tails, spittin solid steel bars like jail cells
Bionicles trash~in~a~bin, you`d be the devil if wack~was~a~sin
Your `chances~are~slim`, like if you ever seen `Fat Joes ass~in~a~gym`
I blaze this~bitch, wit clenched fists, your verbally dis~missed
Ya style is like `closets wit no hangars`, you cant `clothes the dis~tance`
How u gonna say you destroyin witout~mercy, when I got you screamin DONT HURT~ME!
Oh please, you look like the teenage terminator wit herpies(look at his sig)

.|Bi0niclE|. 09-30-03 10:08 PM

.| how can herbs vote this non vet who uses ` ` to damage her concept |.
.| i'm beyond vexed, keyboard must have a symbol attraction the way she bonds ~ text |.
.| hurry veins and bury brains to discover the roots of mary jane |.
.| ur like sheet glass that can't cut cuz ur unable to carry pane(pain) |.
.| do whats right n lose, u will with that weak text shit |.
.| u hectic biter! it's time to come clean like army inspections |.
.| more filler than me, u're one ugly fucker, this bitch is scary |.
.| and i will beat her close to her death like mistaken obituaries |.
.| talk is dead, u're a Scottish insomniac, kilt your dreams |.
.! menstrual cycles consist of pee pods, i guess i had to spill the beans !.

Mary~Jane 09-30-03 10:10 PM

nice spit bio now time for votes

GameTime 09-30-03 10:23 PM

damn this was an ill battle

Flow-bionicle
personal-Mary Jane, Bionicle came ill but a tad bit false cuz MJ aint ugly -despite the fact that fake eyebrows kill me (they look fake...are they??)
wordplay-draw

it all came down to punches...read it over again and decided that
Mary Jane's last one was tight..teenage terminator...indeed

vote-Mary Jane

the final thing came to punches

GameTime 09-30-03 10:24 PM

but how do i vote on the poll???

.................................................. .................................................. ......
GameTime..

Mary~Jane 09-30-03 10:32 PM

nah they aint fake lol... u cant poll vote in elite unless ur a registered voter or some shit

bone crusher 09-30-03 10:46 PM

this was basically even so i took away everything and left the faults which was mary jane's last bar was wack and fat joe lines are played but the rest was origional, bionicle's opener was personal but it wasn't that hard hitting and mostly had more wordplay than punches, nothing was played so i gotta give it to him for that and he was also origional, didn't win by far but
my vote is to bi0nicle

.|Bi0niclE|. 09-30-03 11:05 PM

.|a newbie's 1st time votin in E.F.L.|.
.?what are tha odds?.
.|out of all the battles|.
.|what a coincidence :) |.
.|oh now he's offline|.
.!uppin for votes!.

Mary~Jane 09-30-03 11:12 PM

lol, by the way nice battle bionicle :)

and uppin again just for fun .

13th Disciple 09-30-03 11:27 PM

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Northern Touch. 09-30-03 11:40 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by GameTime
damn this was an ill battle

Flow-MaryJane
personal-Bio
wordplay-draw

it all came down to punches...read it over again and decided that
Mary Jane's last one was tight..teenage terminator...indeed

vote-Mary Jane

the final thing came to punches

well to me something else that influenced my decision was bio's 5th and 6th line shit and inspections dont rhyme...

Hey tight battle though crazy Multi's from both of ya's oh and ps Mary Jane where you ffrom.???

P.s. Check my battle with an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82775

Northern Touch. 09-30-03 11:44 PM

Unfortunately I can't vote although alldig said I can so... if any mod or admin see's this post please give my vote to Mary Jane... Sorry about the inconveniance...

Avalon 10-01-03 12:05 AM

actually to clear it up... BIo's lines do rhyme...

text shit...
inspections...


now say it... fuckin idiots... I hate to say this but... some of you kids are fuckin idiots... Mary J's my girl and what not... and I told her this earlier... but Bio won with his first 2 lines... Mary... honestly had no real punches... a few disses... no punches... but seriously... his first 2 lines won... sorry...



Vote: Bio...


Avalon...

Strategies 10-01-03 12:27 AM

This was a tight ass battle.

Multis=Both
Wordplay=Both
Punches=Bionicle,last line killed it
Personals=MJ
Vocab=Bionicle
Creativity=Bionicle
Complexity=MJ
Structure=Bionicle

Overall=Bionicle

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>ONE<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<

GameTime 10-01-03 12:39 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by .|Bi0niclE|.
.|a newbie's 1st time votin in E.F.L.|.
.?what are tha odds?.
.|out of all the battles|.
.|what a coincidence :) |.
.|oh now he's offline|.
.!uppin for votes!.




i dont get it....


GameTime...

.|Bi0niclE|. 10-01-03 11:53 AM

.|...............................................u ppin.............................................. .|.

TriX 10-01-03 12:12 PM

I felt the Fire in both verses!!
Breakdown:

Opener -
.|Bi0niclE|.
Closer - .|Bi0niclE|.
Consistency - Tie
Punches - Mary~Jane
Multis - .|Bi0niclE|.
Personals - Tie
Flow - Tie
Metaphors - Mary~Jane
Wordplay - .|Bi0niclE|.
Complexity - Neither
Structure - Tie
Creativity- Tie
Intensity - Tie
Humor - Tie

Overall: .|Bi0niclE|.

.|Bi0niclE|. 10-01-03 02:49 PM

.|...............................................u ppin.............................................. .|.

C_Drama 10-01-03 03:53 PM

I think MJ got dis

but here's da breakdown

Flow = Bio
Punches = Bio
Multis = Both
Metas = MJ
Wordplay = Bio
Structure = Bio
Personals = MJ
Creativity = Bio

MJ I aint got nothin against u gurl an all, but i have to be honest

Vote = Bio

hit dese battles up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82689

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82689

Avalon 10-01-03 04:54 PM

^someone check that vote...


"I think MJ got this"


and then later...


"Vote bio"



Hum... *scratches head* you kids and your voting...

.|Bi0niclE|. 10-01-03 07:18 PM

.| ever since 3 O' Clock i've been wondering what C_Drama's vote really meant |.
.| i now experienced the deepest brain storm |.
.| which leaves me to say he's confused |.
.|........................................well uppin......................................|.

.|Bi0niclE|. 10-02-03 01:34 PM

.|...............................................u ppin.............................................. .|.

SmokaJoka. 10-02-03 03:04 PM

^^uppin wayyy too much...lol....but here's a breakdown....

MJ had this with multis and flow...u both were basically tied in vocabulary.....Bio had better personals, punches, and wordplay.....so here's how i see it....

Flow - Mary Jane
Vocabulary - Tie
Metas - Bionicle
Wordplay - Bionicle
Creativity - Bionicle
Complexity - Bionicle
Violence - Bionicle
Multis - Mary Jane
Punches - Bionicle
Personals - Bionicle

pretty one sided when a REAL breakdown is done....u both did pretty good...but Bio got this by a football field...

peace
4:20

youngblood 10-02-03 04:40 PM

yea i also think Bi0nicle took this one wit....

better punches....better wordplay.....

just overall a better verse....MJ u came decent.....

but just not enough to take Bi0nicle....so my vote.....

goes to Bi0nicle.....

yep...
pz....

->Je@!<-


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