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Mary~Jane vs Bionicle
werd heres the thread, ill spit once u check in
10 lines no dr/hate/crew votes yall know the deal lets rumble |
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I smoke on~tracks, flowin~fast, blow right~past, make ya~crash
I kick ya~ass, `beat you wit a news camera` give u a `broad~cast` Cause Mary Jane is `ill from conception`, like `cancerous sperm cells` whippin herbs tails, spittin solid steel bars like jail cells Bionicles trash~in~a~bin, you`d be the devil if wack~was~a~sin Your `chances~are~slim`, like if you ever seen `Fat Joes ass~in~a~gym` I blaze this~bitch, wit clenched fists, your verbally dis~missed Ya style is like `closets wit no hangars`, you cant `clothes the dis~tance` How u gonna say you destroyin witout~mercy, when I got you screamin DONT HURT~ME! Oh please, you look like the teenage terminator wit herpies(look at his sig) |
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.| i'm beyond vexed, keyboard must have a symbol attraction the way she bonds ~ text |. .| hurry veins and bury brains to discover the roots of mary jane |. .| ur like sheet glass that can't cut cuz ur unable to carry pane(pain) |. .| do whats right n lose, u will with that weak text shit |. .| u hectic biter! it's time to come clean like army inspections |. .| more filler than me, u're one ugly fucker, this bitch is scary |. .| and i will beat her close to her death like mistaken obituaries |. .| talk is dead, u're a Scottish insomniac, kilt your dreams |. .! menstrual cycles consist of pee pods, i guess i had to spill the beans !. |
nice spit bio now time for votes
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damn this was an ill battle
Flow-bionicle personal-Mary Jane, Bionicle came ill but a tad bit false cuz MJ aint ugly -despite the fact that fake eyebrows kill me (they look fake...are they??) wordplay-draw it all came down to punches...read it over again and decided that Mary Jane's last one was tight..teenage terminator...indeed vote-Mary Jane the final thing came to punches |
but how do i vote on the poll???
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nah they aint fake lol... u cant poll vote in elite unless ur a registered voter or some shit
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this was basically even so i took away everything and left the faults which was mary jane's last bar was wack and fat joe lines are played but the rest was origional, bionicle's opener was personal but it wasn't that hard hitting and mostly had more wordplay than punches, nothing was played so i gotta give it to him for that and he was also origional, didn't win by far but
my vote is to bi0nicle |
.|a newbie's 1st time votin in E.F.L.|.
.?what are tha odds?. .|out of all the battles|. .|what a coincidence :) |. .|oh now he's offline|. .!uppin for votes!. |
lol, by the way nice battle bionicle :)
and uppin again just for fun . |
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well to me something else that influenced my decision was bio's 5th and 6th line shit and inspections dont rhyme... Hey tight battle though crazy Multi's from both of ya's oh and ps Mary Jane where you ffrom.??? P.s. Check my battle with an honest vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82775 |
Unfortunately I can't vote although alldig said I can so... if any mod or admin see's this post please give my vote to Mary Jane... Sorry about the inconveniance...
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actually to clear it up... BIo's lines do rhyme...
text shit... inspections... now say it... fuckin idiots... I hate to say this but... some of you kids are fuckin idiots... Mary J's my girl and what not... and I told her this earlier... but Bio won with his first 2 lines... Mary... honestly had no real punches... a few disses... no punches... but seriously... his first 2 lines won... sorry... Vote: Bio... Avalon... |
This was a tight ass battle.
Multis=Both Wordplay=Both Punches=Bionicle,last line killed it Personals=MJ Vocab=Bionicle Creativity=Bionicle Complexity=MJ Structure=Bionicle Overall=Bionicle >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>ONE<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< |
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i dont get it.... GameTime... |
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I felt the Fire in both verses!!
Breakdown: Opener - .|Bi0niclE|. Closer - .|Bi0niclE|. Consistency - Tie Punches - Mary~Jane Multis - .|Bi0niclE|. Personals - Tie Flow - Tie Metaphors - Mary~Jane Wordplay - .|Bi0niclE|. Complexity - Neither Structure - Tie Creativity- Tie Intensity - Tie Humor - Tie Overall: .|Bi0niclE|. |
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I think MJ got dis
but here's da breakdown Flow = Bio Punches = Bio Multis = Both Metas = MJ Wordplay = Bio Structure = Bio Personals = MJ Creativity = Bio MJ I aint got nothin against u gurl an all, but i have to be honest Vote = Bio hit dese battles up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82689 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82689 |
^someone check that vote...
"I think MJ got this" and then later... "Vote bio" Hum... *scratches head* you kids and your voting... |
.| ever since 3 O' Clock i've been wondering what C_Drama's vote really meant |.
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^^uppin wayyy too much...lol....but here's a breakdown....
MJ had this with multis and flow...u both were basically tied in vocabulary.....Bio had better personals, punches, and wordplay.....so here's how i see it.... Flow - Mary Jane Vocabulary - Tie Metas - Bionicle Wordplay - Bionicle Creativity - Bionicle Complexity - Bionicle Violence - Bionicle Multis - Mary Jane Punches - Bionicle Personals - Bionicle pretty one sided when a REAL breakdown is done....u both did pretty good...but Bio got this by a football field... peace 4:20 |
yea i also think Bi0nicle took this one wit....
better punches....better wordplay..... just overall a better verse....MJ u came decent..... but just not enough to take Bi0nicle....so my vote..... goes to Bi0nicle..... yep... pz.... ->Je@!<- |
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