The-Marvel-Arm Vs Willibob007
 

10 to 16 lines
no d/r
no hata
no crew
VOTES
spit as soon as you check in no fucking about.....you spit now you dont leave and come back until yo've finished.

yo yo checkin in dawg, ima writin my shit now i'll drop im writin my shit now,


be about 10 mins



willibob:~typin flames~

Ayo I "Stay Wit Bars" Like "InMates", Give Concusions Wit Men Fates/
You Beatin Me Is "UNLIKELY" Like "Seein OPRAH Wit A Slim Waist/

This Fake "Ja" Betta "Back Down" Cuz Scriptz'll Smack Clowns
Fall Back Dunny....Or Shit'll Get "Ugly" Like "WATCHIN SHAQ FROWN

I Pack Rounds But Fuck Shootin 'll Murder You Verbally
Raps Leave You Wit "More Stitches" Than "50 EARNED IN HIS SURGERY/

Like "Burglary Im "In And Out" Sick Without A Doubt
Seems Like I "ReWired My Body System" The Way Im "Shittin On This Kid out the mouth/

Like "Mouth To Mouth Resesitation"...."Takin Ya Breath"...No Hesistation/

You Defeatin Me Will "Neva Happen" Like "Catchin BLACK PEOPLE AT KKK CELEBRATIONS/


aiiyo u betta spit 2 day


aiight peace

scriptz@ is my homeboy, he fuk n e body up,

an came in2 this battle wit a new style an structure

willibob go try out in the contagious crew forum my homie xl4real would like yo shit....good verse maine!

checkin in

naw i couldnt roll wit a crew cos my shit is inconsistant, i could be spittin heat at one moment an come up wit lines like
"i rip ya soft ass like wet paper, then i search for moms ass an muthafuckin rape her"

if ya know what i mean

You couldnt be refined if you were distilled for years,
Ya battle my mind while im the sum of all your fears.
Ya old and left behind forced out the game by ya pears,
As my spits hit you pussy... im-coaxing-your-tears.
Trying to check a mate holding condoms in ya pocket,
You couldnt elevate if you were strapped to a rocket.
If you were spitting time I would go back and stop it,
and if this game was ya business you aint making any profit.
Think about it man you got no blueprint designs,
You might aswell go for a black album and retire ya mind.
Even if you painted streets you'd have no decent lines,
and the only bars you see are the ones you are behind.
You've drained yaself like superman fighting kryptonite,
You got nothing left for me to hear ya skills taken flight.
Wrestling is what ya good at, on the floor with guys,
Like jeepers creepers ya head is empty cuz im looking through ya eyes.

aiight all we need now is some votes,


nice drop dude


we'll leave it to the ppl



aight peace out

just go and try out seriously im not consistent either......go on go on go on go on go on go on go on...............just try out and them decide.......as long as your into hip hip and your active its all good.

how do i 'try out for them' just go in2 the section an spit or wat,.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..........................................



why u not rollin wit the krew dawg,

yep thats it,,,,,,,,,,,,,contagious try outs
go for it you never know dawg.............................................. ..............

aiight enough of this shit,


lets get the votes first.........................................aiig ht.........upin................................... .......

good battle, very good, and very close...................

BREAKDOWN OF VOTE:
Flow:Marvel arm
Structure:marvel
Punches:willibob
Originality:willibob

Overall: Willibob

Punches won this battle, but marvel came strong tho..............

Hit this up:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82883

cheers

aiight yo y'all uppin 4 more votes............................................. .........................................dont sleep on this.............................................. ..

Good battle here....Breakdown

Punches: Willi
Persoanls: Willi
Multis: MA
Wordplay: Willi
Metas: Willi
Flow: MA

Vote = Willi

Good shit here, but willi ripped it plain and simple, his punches had me lol for a second..

Hit my battle up vs. Lyrical Cyanide
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83004

uppin...............................4 more votes.................................u cant sleep on this shit...........................

I Pack Rounds But Fuck Shootin 'll Murder You Verbally
Raps Leave You Wit "More Stitches" Than "50 EARNED IN HIS SURGERY/


that was a nice line willie i think perhaps your best

Ya old and left behind forced out the game by ya pears,
As my spits hit you pussy... im-coaxing-your-tears.

this was nice by you marvel
this was a close battle
marvel had better structure
and hiswas easier to read
but overall ima go with willie do to his nice punches they hit pretty hard compared to the milder ones of marvel

and by the way pay back the favor wit my n libba dee

it would mean alot

thanks
hazy
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Punches-Willi
Wordplay-willi
Metas=Willi
Overall=MA
Vote=Will his verse was way hotter than marvel i felt his shit and it was a nice tite verse

aiiyo uppin 4 vote.............................................. .................................................. ..................................

uppin............................................. ..uppin....................................uppin.. ....................

4th time uppin.............................plz vote on this battle so i can start a new battle.............................plz............ ......i wanna nova battle..................................

Flow: MA
Structure: MA
Punches: Willi
Personals: N/a
Creativity: Tough choice....Willi
Originality: Yet again Tough...Willi edged
Overall: Gotta go with Willi

Very close battle guys...good read. That's the best verse I've seen you drop on this site MA....good shit. When I get 100 posts I'll come back and hit up the poll.

Vote ~ Willi

yo this was a good ass battle foos breakin shit down like this:

Flow - Marvel Arm, but willibob is right behind him, just want as good..
Punches - Willibob had some good ones, Marvel Arm had a few too but willibob had more, better ones...
wordplay - Willibob got this, but Marvel is close
Usage Of Skillz (multis, structure, ryme scheme) - Marvel got this but i was feelin willibobs style tho

VOTE - Marvel arm, BUT it wasnt a robbery or fuckin rapin wit words it was real REAL close tho, keep up the Goodness

Punches: Willi
Persoanls: Willi
Multis: will
Wordplay: Willi
Metas: Willi
Flow: MA
structure: MA

vote-willi