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Mary~Jane vs ILLunatic
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Ill slice threw ya `mind` like a `diamond` saw
I`m rhymin raw, ill de~`side` your death like eatin `coleslaw`(get it?) you cant `hold ya ground` pound for pound u aint `holdin it down` ill leave you lookin like ya avatar, outlined in white chalk on the ground rip this head, blast you, ive `molded` ya style like `statues` Like `coverin my mouth when I sneeze`, I got mad punches directed `AT'CHU` like the `Allies` ima destroy ya `axis`, `kick you off the atlas` Doc Rivers in training camp couldnt help you to work `magic` Sonned ILLunatic you dead kid why you persist Cuz I made you cry ya `I`s out till _LLunat_c dont exist! |
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My Lines Put Mary~Jane Fairly~Insane Cuz I Spit Cleary~In Fame When I Spit I'm Always In~Game Cuz I Put You In~Pain I'm Squashin Ya Spit Like Ya Clit On RB.com You Do Not Fit Who Knows Maybe Ya Lines Are Bit But Ta Me Ya Lines Are Shit See Girl You Only 18 Gettin Ate Clean Mary~Jane Juss Stick To A-Teens Ya Got Merked On Ya 8th Scene And Now I'm Knockin Ya Slate Clean You Gettin Ripped Cuz Ya Verse Gettin Flipped And Ya Title Gettin Stripped Like In Hockey You Gettin Clipped This 18 Year Old Hoe Gettin Pimped ::Finisher:: Time Ta Finish You Off Maybe I Should Finish You Soft Like A Cloth Livin A Short Life Like A Moth Fuck It You Have Been Deliverd Your 2nd Lost |
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Vote-Mary Jane
easily, her punches hit harder, and she is cute, but thats not the point. She had better punches, the flow needs work, but all this quotin and shit gets me dizzy, so get rid of that but otherwise good battle, both stay up. |
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yea she is, she can do me anyt----- oh ya right, battle, votin MJ hit harder mos def......Illunatic had multis but no disses really, some of MJ disses came out soft, but she basically hit more harder on this one yall both keep elevatin Vote = MJ |
dam good verse by mj...nice creative punches that landed well...disses were good....felt tha heat....wordplay was off the hook..
ILL came nice...did'nt hit as hard with punches...disses were good...was'nt that creative tho... but to me mj had the overall betta verse....vote m-jizzle |
sorry to bother ya'll battle...but umm...i need 2 links of battles u voted on...if u didn't kno about this read tha stickies with tha rules...
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^^^thats a good rule man and a question do you have to post links before you spit or after
i ko'd mary :) |
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...3176#post813176
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...3188#post813188
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Vote=Mary Jane
Punches: mary Creativity: mary Flow: ILL Style: mary multies: Both Mary i luv ya style girl itrs kinda like mine, but werk on flow girl you'll elivate sorry i cant poll but could u hit this up babe http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82951 |
Why are you mother fuckers voting for her because she hot, but i mean clearly illunatic's punchlines hit harder..... I mean yeah, she is hot.. but thats a bunch of dick riders vote=illunatic
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yo i don't like women..........................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!
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How do i know that for a fact? how do i know that you and mary jane are not mysterious lovers?........
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youngwhitethug your stupid like the rest of those nerds that spread rumors like I give naked pictures for votes.. or any of that shit... just computer nerds with green blood(envy)
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Punches: mary Flow:Ill Originality:MJ Sustainability:MJ Oberall Vote: MJ THis was a good battle and MJ only just got it.........................................Illunat ic is sick though, can't hold npothin againsxt him, he is ill but MJ came a lil stronger Hit this up Dark V Herbal http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...3759#post813759 Thanks |
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MJ
Ill slice threw ya `mind` like a `diamond` saw I`m rhymin raw, ill de~`side` your death like eatin `coleslaw`(get it?) ^Yes, I get it, still doesn't hit too hard though....4/10 you cant `hold ya ground` pound for pound u aint `holdin it down` ill leave you lookin like ya avatar, outlined in white chalk on the ground ^^bad setup, pretty good punch....7/10 rip this head, blast you, ive `molded` ya style like `statues` Like `coverin my mouth when I sneeze`, I got mad punches directed `AT'CHU` ^^once again, bad srtup, funny punch, 6/10 like the `Allies` ima destroy ya `axis`, `kick you off the atlas` Doc Rivers in training camp couldnt help you to work `magic ^best bar in your verse...9/10 Sonned ILLunatic you dead kid why you persist Cuz I made you cry ya `I`s out till _LLunat_c dont exist! ^^weak finisher....5/10 Overall-31/50 Illunatic- My Lines Put Mary~Jane Fairly~Insane Cuz I Spit Cleary~In Fame When I Spit I'm Always In~Game Cuz I Put You In~Pain ^^ok multis...but no punch??.....5/10 I'm Squashin Ya Spit Like Ya Clit On RB.com You Do Not Fit Who Knows Maybe Ya Lines Are Bit But Ta Me Ya Lines Are Shit ^^lol...nice....9/10 See Girl You Only 18 Gettin Ate Clean Mary~Jane Juss Stick To A-Teens Ya Got Merked On Ya 8th Scene And Now I'm Knockin Ya Slate Clean ^^not bad...good multis...8/10 You Gettin Ripped Cuz Ya Verse Gettin Flipped And Ya Title Gettin Stripped Like In Hockey You Gettin Clipped This 18 Year Old Hoe Gettin Pimped ^^lol...not too hard hitting but nice multis and it was funny...7/10 Time Ta Finish You Off Maybe I Should Finish You Soft Like A Cloth Livin A Short Life Like A Moth Fuck It You Have Been Deliverd Your 2nd Lost ^^horrible.......worst bar of your verse....3/10 overall--32/50 Illunatic barely won this....close battle Vote-illunatic |
illunatic came with better metas, flow and punches and he staright murdered mary jane on that last line
vote illunatic |
yo ok vote=mj not cus shes fit but she did hit harder man+ she had beta flow n structure.gd battle yall.
hit dis up plz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82810 pz |
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i thought this was a close battle
both of ya came wit heat, while MJ used better wordplay, her setups wer bad, ILL uverse was nice but it lacked in some aspects. i gotta give this one to ILL though structure:MJ originallity:MJ personals:lacked off both- punches:tie opener:Ill finisher:Ill |
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I`m rhymin raw, ill de~`side` your death like eatin `coleslaw`(get it?)
yea i got it ...but you damn near ruined it by putting (get it ) in there watch that stuff gurly I'm Squashin Ya Spit Like Ya Clit On RB.com You Do Not Fit ^ ^ every guy gotta use a clit line when facing a gurl? NO but do they YES i agree with some votes but others i belive where jsut obscure i belive MJ had good punches (some are hard to read De -SIRe) but illunatic had this in my opinion even tho i think mj could have easily taken this if she had not overpowered her own punches |
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