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It's time for the real mc to experience the PINE
yo, normal rules, 5-15 lines, and brother, no hateing pleze
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yo, u only got 15 mins from check in, u spit first this time dogg....
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yo, u commin or what?..........
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hello????..................................
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heres this mic take this shit and shove in ur ass, fucking thow your body in a tank with sea bass/ break btoh of your leg so that you have to get a cast, u won't get no food so face it ur gonna have to fast//-1 i might just as well be a psycho path killer, and we'll see who is the blood spiller/ fucking slit your thoat make n it much iller, and be a nitrous gas filler//-2 full your mouth with gas, lite it up like ur ass/ move to antoher country and get a pass, port! they don't want you there and send you back rite fast//-3 grab this shit like money and kife, it rite fats! grab my knife/ stab you til you can't stand! oh there ur wife, fuck this shit and take both of your fucking lifes//-4 fucking take some fucking pills, and see how many kills/ that i can make as the blood spills, i don't have nothing more that will fill//-5 |
yo mike, get off your throne, my tanks to fast get cought by those sea bass/
i'll kill you like hannable, cause i'm a canable, so thanks to you, i wont fast./ your still a rook not cut out for a flyweight, and i condone, this wont end up a STALEMATE/ fuck man, you'll dig out a knife, kill me, and my wife?/ well there is 2 problems, i dont have a wife, and you'll be 6 feet under cause i'll take you life with your very own knife/ i just knocked you out with fists and feet, i'm the only rapper who cant be beat/ and you, what a joke, thinking you could beat me, the on the onle, PC/ there will be blood and strewed across your room, i'll rip your flesh from you body, like the paper from my wall/ cut off you dick and put in in a doggy bag, makes good treats for my pup, cause its so small/ well thats it, i dont need to spit no more of this shit/ i'm out. |
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opener:Pine structure:both weak~tie wordplay:Pine punches:Pine personals:none really. finisher:Real my vote:pine- he came a lil harder both of yall need to work on ya structure aiight yo will sum 1 plz vote on these plz http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=82876 and http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=82737 |
thanks for the vote of confidence, but could you vote on the site as well.............................
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heres this mic take this shit and shove in ur ass, fucking thow your body in a tank with sea bass/
break btoh of your leg so that you have to get a cast, u won't get no food so face it ur gonna have to fast//-1 ^^ ^^ spelling errors detract the punch BOTH but it was still failry effective stab you til you can't stand! oh there ur wife, fuck this shit and take both of your fucking lifes//-4 fucking take some fucking pills, and see how many kills/ ^^ ^^ stab you till you cant stand? weak as hell and had no real pick up afterwards PINE well there is 2 problems, i dont have a wife, and you'll be 6 feet under cause i'll take you life with your very own knife/ ^^ ^^ the fact that you dont have a wife is irrelevant to this battle if you woulda deleted that you might have had a good punch lol cut off you dick and put in in a doggy bag, makes good treats for my pup, cause its so small/ well thats it, i dont need to spit no more of this shit/ i'm out. ^^ ^^ i hate it when people end a verse with *IM OUT* it saddens me overall you both were on the same level and it was apparent nonetheless the winner is the real mc and by teh way BOTH OF YOU SHOULD BE FORBIDDEN to use the word KNIFE...... but good battle guys please pay back the favor on hot ice vs hazy or libba dee vs hazy if you want a vote GIVE a vote |
yo willibob007, if i won most of the catagories then why did you vote for the real MC?..........
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i clicked on the wrong thing soz dawg i dont kno how to change it,
i clicked on the stop button an tried to change my vote but it wouldnt let me sayin i already voted. the screen that sed u have voted didnt cum up though so im sorry my bad |
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its ok dude, this battle aint nottin to me......
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aight ima say real slipped by wit this one, but heres my explanation
flow-tie structure-tie vocab-pine wordplay-real punches-tie personals-real overall-real props to the both of ya, but real took this peace...... |
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should be 3-1, billibob007 clicked the wrong button, but oh well.
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keep voteing people...............
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