severe lyrics Vs OLI_DOGG(MUST SEE)
 

ok man.u spit 1st.8 linez.ill get bak at cha.1

ok ok here we go

yo,
i'll tell u now i got the magic stick like harry potter and his magic wand
ur a fake, like a black girl thats a natural blonde
u need to elevate, step ur rhymes up a notch
ur whiter then those dudes on malibus most wanted....B-Yatch
ur verses are like lil kids nersery rhymes bout the a-b-c's
i rhyme better then eminem, and he rocs the mic with E's (eaze)
(time to end it)
like my lyrics were in brail, the way people feal-my-rhymes
people think ur a jealous fishermen the way u wanna steal-my-lines

ite man not bad but check dis shit.

ok severe lyrics im gna injure you *severly*,
ill pounce with my lyrics boy, so you better fuckin *fear me*,

ill spit my lynes twice, so i make sure you fuckin *hear me*,
after i finnish my rap i sign it of, with im "sorry i beat you" and i meen that *sincerly*,

this peadophile likes to do stupid shit, like merkin lil *kids*(check profile),
he takes them home and, produces them in his porno *vids*,

*syke*, fuck that im up for a *fight*,
oh and *right*, i dont throw punches ill just hit you, on the *mike*(mic).

lets hav sme votes.pz

OK UPPIN (1).CN WE HAV SME VOTEZ PLS...................THX......................... ..............................PZ

uppin 4 votes (1) and jus to let u no oli it took 1 day to reply and like 20 min to drop after i saw it clown

drop a fair vote on severe lyrics vs tek

OLI_DOGG'S POLL IS RESET
FOLOW RULES NEXT TIME

-BROOKLYN

y man wtas up wid dat dawg?............................................. ....................................pz

thank u man............................................... .....................................i was up 3 1 til i got reset thx dawg.................................pz

yo dawg i cnt cus dat dick ur battleing sed i cnt vote man check da rulez hes a bitch man............................................... ....... hit my otha battle up man wid blasta ..................pz

ite uppin 1................................................. ................................................pz

uppin 2...................................plz vote man............................................... .............................................pz

u oli took this....

both verses were okay...........
i liked the last ones of oli more......
but u both played alot....i dunno

vote: oli

please look at this:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81852

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=78934

k plz can we hav sme votez plz plz .............................................upinn (3)...........................thx yall...................pz

ITE UPPIN (4) PLZ DNT LET DIS DIE I H8 IT WEN PLL DNT VOTE PLZ DIS SHIT OVER MY SHOULDA THX............................................... .................................................P Z

Oli took this one with pretty well. Good battle though. Both keep elevatin. vote=oli
check this out

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83447

uppin(2).......................................... ...........................................
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OLI took this...no doubt about it. Neither verse had any REALLY hard hitting punches. OLI threw a lot more though. Structure wasn't bad from both. Both had somewhat choppy flows. You guys are close to each others level...so it was a good battle in that aspect.

Vote ~ OLI_DOGG

Elevate and keep it up.

ITE LETHARGIC THX MAN PM ME 4 A BATTLKE CUS WE NEED 2 DO DIS............................................... .................................................. ...............PZ

ITE UPPIN (5) LST 1 PLZ PLZ VOTE ON DIS DNT LET IT DIE PLZ..................................THX YALL.............................................. ....PZ

I think oli took this, sorry severe but he was a litttlt too good for you, although you wasn't brilliant oli


Flow=oli
punches=oli
Structure=oli


close shit but oli dogg wins

hit this up with an honest vote, and If svere gonna vote, don't beef with me, I don't wa\nt beef, just elavate a little and you'll be aiiiight

THX MAN............................................... .................................................. .................................................. ................................PZ

severe
i'll tell u now i got the magic stick like harry potter and his magic wand
ur a fake, like a black girl thats a natural blonde
~second line made me laff 5/10~

u need to elevate, step ur rhymes up a notch
ur whiter then those dudes on malibus most wanted....B-Yatch
~u need to elevate 3/10~

ur verses are like lil kids nersery rhymes bout the a-b-c's
i rhyme better then eminem, and he rocs the mic with E's (eaze)
~nursery ryhmes line are played, 3/10~

like my lyrics were in brail, the way people feal-my-rhymes
people think ur a jealous fishermen the way u wanna steal-my-lines
~nice line better than the rest of ya verse, 7/10~

Oli dog:
ok severe lyrics im gna injure you *severly*,
ill pounce with my lyrics boy, so you better fuckin *fear me*,
~not the best of openers 5/10~

ill spit my lynes twice, so i make sure you fuckin *hear me*,
after i finnish my rap i sign it of, with im "sorry i beat you" and i meen that *sincerly*,
~aiight 5/10~

this peadophile likes to do stupid shit, like merkin lil *kids*(check profile),
he takes them home and, produces them in his porno *vids*,
~lol, nice personal 7/10~

*syke*, fuck that im up for a *fight*,
oh and *right*, i dont throw punches ill just hit you, on the *mike*(mic).
~nah 3/10~

Severe:18/20
Oli:20/20


severe: u need to elevate, jus keep battlin an doin wat ya doin, try to come up wit lines that arent played dawg, like 'nursery ryhmes' lines.

Oli:i seen some of ur other battles, that are aiight, this is probs ur weakest, u need to work on ur openers an finishers.


hit this up wen ya hav a chance plz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84191