The Stalkers Intuition (ft BiZZUrk n HAZY.)
 

*biZZUrk*
Excuse me miss you stole my heart and dropped your wallet
So beautiful in an ugly world, as I follow you home from college
I see the pain beneath your smile and the things on your shelf
You can use my help, hello there; I know you better than yourself
Ure perfect for me if only you knew, ure my crutch and my cushion
You shower me with meaning; seeing your bush from the bushes
I never thought I’d find you, you’re the cure for my cancer
Is that a new perfume? Don’t resume I already know the answer
My obsession is healthy and I assure you it’s nice and legal
Lets talk about your fetishes at Starbucks as we sip cappuccinos

*hazy*
Chill took me over to my left I saw him lurkin--hands down his pants he was jerkin--
Dressed in black ... I feared a homicidal attack--but the murderous intent he lacked--
His eyes undressing me-testing me- a flirtatious giggle-
I worked all my clothes down and rubbed my hands up my middle-
Gracious I felt for being watched--the thrill of touching and I've been caught--
Outside my window is where he stood--id reach out n touch him if I could--
With my adrenaline revving I laid upon my bed-- pondering the thoughts that flooded his head--
Exhibition-a masochist's tradition- I displayed myself as if I were a limited edition--
My hands through my hair the moans escaping-- turned on at the thought of him raping--
My purpose was simple to get in ecstasy's binds...there was a reason I left open my blinds.............

one reply is a good thing you kno

Dat was a bomb ass collab.
Bizzurks verse kould've used a lil elavation, but Hazy came on and merked da shyt outta da thread.
No disrespect to bizzurk just keepin it real much luv holla at my shyt too.

vverd-pley

thought biZZUrk's verse was weak when i was reading it, so was expecting hazy's to be weak, but it destroyed biZZUrk's, the structure and flow was much better, i was just feelin it more...........peace....no hatin......aight

only thing that let ya down hazy woz ya font colour...........wot

ha Ha hA HA...................

this wasnt a battle you guys
geezuz actually bizz's verse was way better if it was

we worked together as partnas yall shouldnt be crituqing on who's is beta

by the way i love purple and pink

^HEY, YOU GUYS FORGOT TO POLL!
lmao, this is not a battle
just a bomb diggy collab
upp'n for votes............................I mean feedback, lol

^lmao, I need elevation? check your sig dawg
If those were your rhymes then ure in no position to talk

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damn yo... dat jawn wuz nice...
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Lol syke naw...
I wuz feelin bizzurks verse... derres a certain werd... imagery?
i dont know but i coukd picture da shit he wuz talkin about... it wuz nice... I could also picture wut hazy wuz talkin bout... lol...
dat wuz some ill shit... didnt know a verse could make u horny...
overall i liked it all...
Bizz's wuz liek a story and hazy's wuz like a porno.. real cute... lol
holla 1

this shit was hot and i was like wtf??? when i saw the post before mine critcizing bizzurk...

i actually thought his hit harder myself...

Excuse me miss you stole my heart and dropped your wallet
So beautiful in an ugly world, as I follow you home from college
I see the pain beneath your smile and the things on your shelf
You can use my help, hello there; I know you better than yourself
can you not see how well worded this is...i mean this is just a taste the rest was crazy

bizzurk had nice wording,nice imagery,nice flow, and story theme...

hazy- hit that twist and made it seem more reality and hit it with a diffeent aspect...i thought yours was worded well with nice wording,nice imagery,nice flow, and story theme...

hot ass collab keep dropping...

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thx for the feedback Inertia
and word to young P
Hazy's verse gave me a hard-on too, lol

ewwwwwwwwwwww nasty boys put ya thingy's back in ya pants

sicko see i told you bizz you read my first line?

ya hands down there jerkin

I KNEW IT pervs
lmao

HAHAHAA, this shit made me laugh. funny as hell. nice stuff from both of you two, nuff talent.

^lol at hazy
I'm not the one who came up with the topic though;)

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wow...Bizzurk was tellin' a nice lil' story...soundz like you got experience...;)...and Hazy'z verse gave me a hard on...can I rape you??????

^lmao
if she says yes to the rape request
then is it rape?

no its not rape........
and NO you cant DUMMY


i love rock n roll so put another dime in the jukebox baby........

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JUST FOR YOU!

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uppin' like skirts for voyer camz..

This collab was really really good
Flo and story telling was perfect
I liked the topic as well
Keep drop'n

haha, ok
bizzurk: everything was on point...was a real good story telling peice...the imagery was there...hot ass drop...

hazy: came off good also, again everything was on point...nice drop...the imagery was there also...

hot ass colab...both of ya keep dropping...

if either of you get a chance could you go over my latest open mic...i could use some more feedback...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83967

wow...the topic blew me away
the approach by Bizz was nice
both flowed very well, easy read
good drop...topic was nice...

if you would be so kind
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84636