Aprentice vs Turbulance
 

iight u fucken herb lets go
8-12 lines
no dr votes
no hate
no bullshit
blind spits we spit at the same time dont duck neither

aight u want ur demise u got it herb

You Up On The Internet Actin Tough Like You Up On This Mac's Cock/
But The Only Time Dis Nigga Gets 'Big' Is When He Holdin Da 'Caps Lock'//
Your Punches Are Weak, Style Is Bleak, But Your An Obvious Chump/
I Talk Shit Wit Style, While Dis Niggas Mouth 'Runs' Like 'Forest Gump'//
Im Da Type To Spit Hot, My Shits Sick Like a Loogey/
You Da Type Dat Gets No Pussy, And Dry Beats At Da Movies//
Are You Delirious Mayne, Ill Serve You Serious Pain/
Only Time You'd 'Lay Someone In Red', Is If They 'Slipped On Ur Period Stain'//
I Leave Smoke In Da Booth, Punch Till You Choke On Your Tooth/
And If We Wasn't Battlin Eachother, You Know You'd Vote For Me Too!//
another newb smoked

am i bitin again apprentice? huh? cuz i merked you?

oh wait this kids ghost already lol


he read my verse and bitched out... what a whore

Wow i didnt think u would b that bad but w.e it is what it is ima get to keyin ma shit and writin it now iight 2mins tops

I pity ur wished sublimity, reppin the commite of merkin infinity/(WHOA)
I pity the "fool", who timidly enters/
and leaves crippled jaws, crippin like Timothy/(south park lol)

I relinquish newb delinquiants, leavin um folded up like, paper crinklin/
turbulence shakin ur screen, ma style u cant see, like u just got 2 blinkin/(its done wit man)


turb my style will lyrically abort ya, verbally court ya/(like prison bitchass lol)
each line carefully constructed, for meticulous torture/

im spittin vet neolithic, ur hott shit looks encripted, and ya homo shit seems vindictive/
ima vet take mo time on ur shit it needs liftin/(elevate man plz)

Style Switch:>
peep my sickness b4 u go, plungin in, my spit u cant bite, like tryin to devour jin/(this homo bit lines from jin)

Ur dismissed fagit raise ur hand b4 u think to speak//(Bitchery)
next time resemble ur avatar, and duck b4 u catch aprentice heat//

vote apprentice
vocab= a
punches= a
flow= t
multiz = none really
creativity= a
vote= apprentice

turb...nice verse..throw sum harder punches..nice tho *props* to both
best line from turb
Your Punches Are Weak, Style Is Bleak, But Your An Obvious Chump/
I Talk Shit Wit Style, While Dis Niggas Mouth 'Runs' Like 'Forest Gump'//
nice...made me smile

Best line from Apprentice
I pity ur wished sublimity, reppin the commite of merkin infinity/(WHOA)
I pity the "fool", who timidly enters/
and leaves crippled jaws, crippin like Timothy/(south park lol)

I relinquish newb delinquiants, leavin um folded up like, paper crinklin/
turbulence shakin ur screen, ma style u cant see, like u just got 2 blinkin/(its done wit man)


cant decide from those lol nice battle ya'll....*props* to both mc's....

errbody hit dis battle up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83210

ER! WRong... what a gay verse lol

let me break it down for you
I pity ur wished sublimity, reppin the commite of merkin infinity/(WHOA)
I pity the "fool", who timidly enters/
and leaves crippled jaws, crippin like Timothy/(south park lol)
^^^Your rookiness shows in your poor use of multis, ending up in a bad first line, timothy punch... it was ok

I relinquish newb delinquiants, leavin um folded up like, paper crinklin/
turbulence shakin ur screen, ma style u cant see, like u just got 2 blinkin/
^^^ more poor usage of multis, what a gay metaphor lol, folded up like paper crinklin.. lmao
the cant see line is played dawg

turb my style will lyrically abort ya, verbally court ya/(like prison bitchass lol)
each line carefully constructed, for meticulous torture/
Actually court is to try to seduce someone, im glad u like me homo but this is a battle board not a matchmaker, more poor usage of multis, lyrically abort ya, verbally court ya... elementary
and your purposely thrusting in big words to elevate to my level, meticulous torture, i know u looked that up in the dictionary lol

im spittin vet neolithic, ur hott shit looks encripted, and ya homo shit seems vindictive/
ima vet take mo time on ur shit it needs liftin/(elevate man plz)
lol me elevate, when ur the one who cant figure out how to fit in multis and use non played punches... once again, trying to insert multis in the wrong places

peep my sickness b4 u go, plungin in, my spit u cant bite, like tryin to devour jin/(this homo bit lines from jin)
oh lord i cracked up at this, first off i nevre bit jin, but thanks for ridin my dick kid
secondly devour is different than byting, but i expect you to say somthing gay like... use your imagination!

Ur dismissed fagit raise ur hand b4 u think to speak//(Bitchery)
next time resemble ur avatar, and duck b4 u catch aprentice heat//
probably your best lines... but ever since i dissed L Prophet with the duck avatar line, its already gtttin played from both of you, lol, but overall... out of 10 ill give this a 3

elevate kid

oh by the way im done wit this site, ive already merked 2 of your kids, and it just goes to show how ruthlessly pathetic this site is because my shit flies past yall heads like a V. i bet yall didnt even understand that either... but anyways, im out, please work on ya game yall

yo uve just been served u homo dont try and sweay votes or ull get reported do somethin like this again and i will personally merk u a second time

turbulence
Your Punches Are Weak, Style Is Bleak, But Your An Obvious Chump/

why did u put "but ure an obvious chump"? its supposed to say "and" dumbass if ure dissin him u cant put "but" and diss him again shit dont make sense

Im Da Type To Spit Hot, My Shits Sick Like a Loogey/
You Da Type Dat Gets No Pussy, And Dry Beats At Da Movies//

that was just really simple too simple even for snoop doggs taste

apprentice
dont explain ure flow so much man cuz then it takes power from it since ure pointing out what us readers are supposed to get on our own na mean?

vocab=apprentice...turb didn show up
flow=turb
wordplay=turb
punches=apprentice good last line
overall=apprentice due to simplicity of turbs verse

youve been merked kid, it just goes to show how the site is one big happy family and anyone who hasnt been here 100 years to suck everyones dick doesnt get votes cuz yall are below me for real, elevate yall and try to understand my shit... because so far it seems noone has.. this sites wack lol 2 kids merked and im already done with yall pz

Ahaha this herb seriously got smoked. And now he's bitchin about it. Keep up the good work apprentice, your shit is always entertaining to read.

IIght yall thx fro the feedback and please stop swaying turbulence......... FIRST UPPINNNN LETS GET SOME VOTESSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

I think apprentice won this..................his experience shone through, but it was very close


Flow:Turbulance
Structure:Turbulance
Punches: Aprentice (only just)
Originality: Apprentice (period line played by Turb)
Sustainability:Apprentice

OVERALL: APPRENTICE (but only just)

I think this kid turbulance has the makin of something great if he carries on.......................





PS: hit this up:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82645

Cheers

lmao.. turbulence man u suck dick...

u used played punches with shit flow an a week meta that is scarecely seen in each battle...

u cum here.. realise ur whack then diss the site...

fuck you man.. u bin merked by everyone here...


I pity ur wished sublimity, reppin the commite of merkin infinity

u see turbulence what we have here is called WORDPLAY'

HE reps the commitee of MURKING infinitee...
but hes saying YOU rep the comittee or MURKIN infinite... which is actually a PUBIC WIG....

if you werent so far up your own ass youd realise this kinda shit an realise ur whack.

peace.

iight man chill wit that^^ no vote swayin in any direction come on yall 2 more votes to k.o. this wanna b vet 2 MORE 2 MORE

K Turbulance dont suck first of all, he had sum ill punches i give him credit for a newb, nice shit dude

breakdown

Flow: Turbulance by far
Punches: Both
Metas: Both
Creativity: Apprentice
Vocab: Apprentice
Complexity: Apprentice
Structure: Turbulance

This was close, not a land slide like every1 seems to be sayin

Peace

Eh Apprentice hit this up bro please, thanks, do it while ya waitin for votes

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83338

Word ^^^ to this vote iight 1 more vote can we get this over wit.......UPPINNNNNNNNNNNNNN222222222222222222222

3rd time uppin LETS GO YALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL DONT SLEEPPPPPP
UPPINNNNNNNNNN...............................

^^^^word

but that other guy did a good job