LM vs catastraphe
 

yo i don't got long either. let's do it
10 lines
no bullshit or crew hate votes
chek in and start

Yo who do you think you are, usin your corny ryhmes to try and diss me/
It sounds more like your horny and tryin to kiss me/
See here your battlin a renegade who's plannin a raid on your pride/
After this is finished whenever you hear the LM your gonna go run and hide/
You coward, stand and fight like a man, maybe then you can get some fans on rb/
You'll die in vain coz despite your efforts you aint as hard as me/
You said 10 lines max but i'll murder you in less/
Coz theres no way you are gonna get yourself out this mess your in/
So just give up and throw your ryhmes in the bin bitch/.

Before i said i said LM i was mean't to say name. So it was mean't to say "you hear the name LM your..."
Uppin for votes....

let me think of it, i got dis nigga+lookin shook+in da blink of it/
from too much masterbation not enough confontation even gettin smoked by a ciggarette/(v-slim)
i can't figga it, u wanted a battle+but r still starvin wid a rattle+/
fuck summin quick u culdn't upset me even if u brought ya ammo/("i can't stop upsettin people" is his biography)
wack as ya are narrow, and dats+strictly to da bone/
plus ya lines bring as much pain den tryin to whip me with a comb/
please ya aint ill, matta fact+but it's da facts+dat kill/
LM's in Loving Memory i wun't mention da sad will/
speak of da devil, i got ya by da horns+just gotta+apply da force/
and blow ya off da map wid my raps have ya jumpin high as a horse/

gunz up hoes down nigga

Uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Get this battle done with and vote

Can we get some votes in here please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ok both verses were wank.......LM you have to keep ya lines tighter for a better flow, there too long and less to the point....catostrophe's shit hit better and his wordplay is better but his flow was wack aswell

Ima give it to catosrophee for his hits but it was a close but weak battle......

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wack battle

LM had weak structure and flow.....catastrophe at least dug deep to diss this foo....kinda wack but he tried....better flow and overall better verse
vote-catastrophe

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Catstraphe won this pretty easily........LM just sucked, elevate homey...............

Vote = Cats

this one shuld be ended alredy wtf-----couple more votes wuld be coo----thanks0^0

be honest too i'll get ya'll back when i see a link-----

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Thought i'd help ya cats out...

This was a weak battle. I think cutastraphe has some ok flow. More battles dawg and you'll be killer. LM came weak on this really didnt feel what he was saying. Need to hit harder LM, cause Cutast got this win by da second line...

vote=cutastraphe

I didn't think this battle was that good, it was quite weak but I'll break down and vote anyway:

Flow:Cut
Structure:Cut
Multis:no-one
Wordplay:Cut
Punches:Cut

Both verses quite weak and both need to elavate.............can become better y'all if you read the tutorials in W.E.C

Peace

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