Gods Journal (Mystik Mind, T.D.C)
 

Gods Journal

ThugzDoCry
Livin Tisseu's humans, ...like cadle, are we bein studied from above?,
bein tested, by pain, ..cost by life, trusts, friends, and love.
This live aint forever, ..to bad some times, i was hopin it was for eternal,
but lately im feelin like a puppet and thinkin the world is just gods journal.
Reflections so called troubles, givin in to the rejections of obstacles u face in life,
feels like failure, so u turn to god,ur family, ur friends or to ur wife.
Religion is for many a way of expression, ..but olso a way to hide,
behind real life but u cant say nuttin bout that, than u touchin their pride.
The problem isnt religion ,but the people who believe,turnin in to their own colonel,
they change aspects to their own visions by just adjustin gods journal.

Mystik Mind
What Happens When Things Go Wrong, Who Do You Blame..
Say Next Time You Do Things Different, Yet They’re Always The Same..
Whether It’s Inner Belief Or Outer Showings, Shit Never Goes To Plan..
Where As Every Night I Pray To My Number One Fan..
In Gods Journal It Tells Me How To Live My Life, How To Go Straight..
I Know What Is What, Right From Wrong, I Have No Need To Contemplate..
I Choose My Fate, In Gods Name I Will Fight For My Beliefs..
And If I Get Knocked Down, I Will Never Accept A Defeat..
For I Know That Gods Journal Will Show Me The Fullness Of The Light..
If I Follow This, I Will Never Be Dull, He Will Make Everywhere I Go Bright..
As I Proceed To Follow His Way, Why Do I Decide To Do Whats Wrong?..
For I Am A Sinner, And This Cruel World Is Where I Belong..

This was really good

Thugz this is the best open mic i seen from you...nou doubt

Mystik mind you came equally nice with really dope lines...alot of thought behind them...First i seen from you

For I Know That Gods Journal Will Show Me The Fullness Of The Light..
If I Follow This, I Will Never Be Dull, He Will Make Everywhere I Go Bright..

^^liked that line there :)


Reflections so called troubles, givin in to the rejections of obstacles u face in life,
feels like failure, so u turn to god,ur family, ur friends or to ur wife.

^^Thugz your flow was very tight there...very tight inner multis...

...::Overall::...

This was dope...Thugz you've upped your open mics alot :)...Mystik Mind you done yourself proud...Looking for more stuff by you

Pz

Preciated Duckie :)


Uppie^^

Wordizzlelizzlefashizzle
this was the gizzle Open Mizzle

Good Lines from Both Mistik and TDC

Mistik, You had some dope lines in there, A nice flow, structure needs a tinsy winsy bit of work, but you'll get there

I Know What Is What, Right From Wrong, I Have No Need To Contemplate..
I Choose My Fate, In Gods Name I Will Fight For My Beliefs..
^nice


Thugz......One of the best, if not the best verse I've read from you. Your flow was definately shining, and your writing has progressed I see.

Reflections so called troubles, givin in to the rejections of obstacles u face in life,
feels like failure, so u turn to god,ur family, ur friends or to ur wife.


dopeness. Good Shit Guys!
and that...is cool

^^Slept on damn ^^up

^^Werdizzle..

Oh Yeh...I Have Written Open Mics And Topicals Before...This Is My First One In About 2 Months..

I like this piece..........
really felt both mc's part and they were both ill.......

topic is nice and you stook to it well whilst holdin gud structure........

sum tight lyrics and vocab which is needed for a piece to be good.........

nice flow but mystik lost it at 1 stage, his lines were long throughout but then went short once but once doesn't matter................

gud piece and keep elevatin y'all.............

Peace...................................Fiori

dope piece
props to both emcees...
nice structure and wordplay but it was a bit short .
but it's ill though....
8/10

Aight...Thanx For The Comments...

Uppin For More...

What he sayin ^^

dope from top to bottom..this is by far the best piece TDC has ever done...good work mystik didn't dissapoint or make the overall piece week as a follow up verse...good job..Legend worthy..fo sho

Aight...Comments Much Appreciated..

Legend Worthy...I Like That!

this is the shit right here ^^^ definate legend material

it was without a doubt a jaw dropper i felt it pops and everythingcame flawless and on point

thjat was good, liked it and it was interesting.............................

7or8 out of ten

Jup:)

That was a good drop on both accounts. Good flow and vocab. You guys complimented eachother nicely. I was feeling it-

TDC- The problem isnt religion, but the people who believe, turnin in to their own colonel/
they change aspects to their own vision by just adjustin gods journal (very nice)

MM- Say next time you do things different, yet they?re always the same/
Whether it?s innder belief or outer showing, shit never goes to plan (also very nice)

You guys collaborated excellently. Keep it up.

:) Werdizzle preciated

this was a decent piece... the rhyme scheme & volcab were kinda
simple... it wasnt a bad piece... the concept was pretty good...
Overall not bad


Peace

Thnx ^^ preciated

And Up^^

Very tight piece...

I hate colabs for some reason though...

That's why I peeped ya verse called, "Little Piece" from several months back...

This one was pretty good though...
Hard message to digest, but that's the meaning of being deep, I suppose.
Makin fuckers face reality.

This did.

I liked the closer from Mystik...

We belong here...

Very true...

Peace

Iite thnx for the feedback

Up^

Open for more feedback..

The problem isnt religion ,but the people who believe,turnin in to their own colonel,
they change aspects to their own visions by just adjustin gods journal.

I couldn't have said it any better.... great collab... great concept... very original... hot shit....