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ArtikQlit VS X Ecution
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10 Lines Max No Crew, Hate Or D/r Votes No Bitin/Feedin Due: 30 Mins Afta Set Up Chekk G'Lukk |
iight this is ma check in ill have ma shyt up in a bit.........1
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lemme revise this verse..and keep repeatin how Im gonna eat you/
some say fuck alcohol...cuz all I needed was a round to beat you/ this kid wanted to test, claimin he's rugged, flow leather/ now he represents Plastic Surgery... he Nose Better/ With this battle, mos def your sure to struggle/ cause I don't gotta cut your dick off to prove Urine Trouble/ I'll replace those pimples on your face with hot shell casings/ then stomp your face till it looks like a Picaso Painting!/ i Knock u out come face me n ill portrait ur ass, get Framed/ shove an Empty Cash Register up your Ass" cause ain't SHIT CHANGED!/ |
waitn for artik................................lets go
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iight..srry i'm a lil late..
Time to beat this Kid, and so this will be More-Of-A-Winnin'-Streak I've heard ya Timid-Speech, ya just not touchin' much Sorta-Like-A-Midget's-Reach This Kid actin' like he Birthed-The-Site, I'll "cut ya wrong" like a Clumsy Surgeon-Might Always clamin' ya Verse-Is-Tight - Ya like an over confident Zebra, Still Thinkin' Ya Earned-Ya-Stripes when u read what i verbalize itll burn-ur-eyes u couldnt bust any knowledge if ur sperm-was-wise ***Finisher*** The hall of fame's Strippin'-Ya-License cuz´ ya not Spittin'-The-Nicest, and I'm Beginnin'-To-Like-It Better get Equipped-With-A-Sidekick - Think ya winning? Better change ya thoughts Like Manipulative-Psychics DONE! |
Good battle this is a tough one but i think Artikqlit took this one from this line:
This Kid actin' like he Birthed-The-Site, I'll "cut ya wrong" like a Clumsy Surgeon-Might Good battle all in all Work on your finishers! |
iigh iight.............
wut time is it .................... ................... VOTE TIME........LETS GO................1 |
Nice Battle
Break down Wordplay: mos deff execution Punches: execution Flow: both multies: Ark Metas: execution personals: execution Execution, ya had alot of nice wordplay, sorta weak, but sorta sick at the same time, just elivate A dawg u need to start tryhin more, thats all i gota say i know ur better Can u gusys PLEASE hit his up, its gettin slepped http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83338 |
wordplay - artic
flow - artic structure - xecution punches - xecution personals - none enjoyability - TIE vocab - artic Overall - VERY CLOSE battle and too ok verses, but articQlit takes its by doing better in more categories |
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Wow.. Battle Of The Metaphores Right Here..
Personals - Niether.. pretty much stuck to ya metas Wordplay - Art.. was feelin his more Punches - X Metas - Art.. when it comes down to it, he took this Multis - Art.. Blew you away here Close Shit But In The End Ima Go Wit Artikqlit |
Time to beat this Kid,so this will be More-Of-A-Winnin'-
Streak I've heard of ya Timid-Speech, ya just not touchin' much Sorta-Like-A-Midget's-Reach ...................That Shit was ill.............................................. With this battle, mos def your sure to stuggle// cause I don't gotta cut your dick off to prove Urine Trouble// ....................................That Shit Killed It.................................. Vote X-Ecution for better punches |
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X- lemme revise this verse..and keep repeatin how Im gonna eat you/ some say fuck alcohol...cuz all I needed was a round to beat you/ ^^pretty creative opener....decent this kid wanted to test, claimin he's rugged, flow leather/ now he represents Plastic Surgery... he Nose Better/ ^^lol, funny, but not hard-hitting With this battle, mos def your sure to struggle/ cause I don't gotta cut your dick off to prove Urine Trouble/ Urine trouble, urine deep shit, these lines are played as hell....have no more effectivness anymore I'll replace those pimples on your face with hot shell casings/ then stomp your face till it looks like a Picaso Painting!/ ^^um.....no man......bad bar..very bad.... i Knock u out come face me n ill portrait ur ass, get Framed/ shove an Empty Cash Register up your Ass" cause ain't SHIT CHANGED!/ ^^decent closer Overall-6/10 Artiq- Time to beat this Kid, and so this will be More-Of-A-Winnin'-Streak I've heard ya Timid-Speech, ya just not touchin' much Sorta-Like-A-Midget's-Reach ^^good use of multis...kinda played though This Kid actin' like he Birthed-The-Site, I'll "cut ya wrong" like a Clumsy Surgeon-Might Always clamin' ya Verse-Is-Tight - Ya like an over confident Zebra, Still Thinkin' Ya Earned-Ya-Stripes ^^lol...this was nice... when u read what i verbalize itll burn-ur-eyes u couldnt bust any knowledge if ur sperm-was-wise ^^lmao...simple but funny as hell The hall of fame's Strippin'-Ya-License cuz´ ya not Spittin'-The-Nicest, and I'm Beginnin'-To-Like-It Better get Equipped-With-A-Sidekick - Think ya winning? Better change ya thoughts Like Manipulative-Psychics ^^damn.......hell of a finisher Overall-8.5/10 Vote=art good battle... |
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flow: artikqlit
punches : atikqlit metas: altikqlit over all: artikqlit nive job to the both of you. |
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