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N.D.eva VS The1
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I'm in it for the long haul, you scandalus, beef against me is like a battle between"Sean paul" VS."Canibus" you couldn't handle this, if you wore a giant catchers glove, so catch this spastic slug, draining out a phony rappers blood, I'm the type of witty guy, whos never lost a rap dispute, i'll attribute your attributes to nothing but a massive fluke, you could crap out some "Hugo boss" and still wouldn't have nice shit, I could fuck your ugly wife and the girl you cheated on your wife with, I'll split your lip so quick with a swift spin kick, the most gifted phsycic in the world cant predict it. I could be an amputee, with one arm and i'd hurt ya, you couldn't throw a haymaker if you owned a farm in "ALBERTA" So if people only knew the issue when this car hit you, they would know why your skin is now scar tissue, as far is you should be concerned i beat you and it's been confirmed, so next time you wanna battle, read my rhymes because you need to learn You wantin to battle me? come on thats like a major diss, I'll tape your face up to a speaker, full blast with a scratched slayer disk |
Wots this ya writin, its like a small fire with a big hydrant//
Soak yourself through wit your own novice assignment// Like a lemming you’ll fall to your death pleading begging// For some one to vote for you, to take with you to heaven// Didn’t know you could go blind from reading bad verses// But my eyes have started goin cloudy, from wak literal curses// If ya lyrics were animals they’d be sheep, pigs and cows// Only purpose for food to keep you full while you browse// Keep practicing ya spittin, and if ya thinking bout quitin// The1 go flee like a cat with a with crazed pitbull almost grippin// Ya Think Ya Spit Da Ill Shit, But Inflict FromYa Larynx To Ya Lips// Eclipse My Ears I Wish! Sound-Like You’ve Had To Many Trips// (acid) From My Ears Blood Red Tears From The Vocal Torment Ya Emit// If I Was The Dog Warden, You’d Be The Shovel Stained Wit Shit// I’ll Clean It Off With Your Own Verse Might Just Break Its Own Li-mit// You Don’t Want A Stray Jacket; You Want A Stray GAG To Smother-It// Sound Like Sloth Off The Goonies Wit Out His Babe-Ruth Choc-o-Lit// In Fact Fuck That, More Like Their Candy Only Half The Normal-bit// I’m Bringin-It To An End, Ya Candles Burned-down-Quick After-Lit// N.D.eva Strippin Back Ya Attempt Right Down To The Very Wick// |
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all i could see here was a lot more harder punches from n.deva..............thats what i base all ma votes on...he also sustained them well......the other guy did have nice similies and vocab tho..eg sean paul line was pretty tight
vote=n.d.eva make sure ya hit this up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83476 |
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NDEVA won this wit better punches, flows, multis, and wordplay...The 1 had some nice Metas but it wasnt enough to beat NDeva's verse
Vote=ND Hit my battles up in My Sig l l l V |
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well lets break this down for the kids!!!
we got flow= The1 we got rhymes= The1 we got rythem= tie we got creativity= the! we got punches= close but The1 and we got the overall= The1 |
shit forgot to vote ma fault
well lets break this down for the kids!!! we got flow= The1 we got rhymes= The1 we got rythem= tie we got creativity= The1 we got punches= close but The1 and we got the overall= The1 |
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who's posted the second vote, and wheres the reason for it
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never mind i just messed it when scrolling down....peace
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N D.Eva had a much stronger verse on the whole. His punches were better and it seemed to flow together nicely. The1 had a few good lines, nice concepts but N.Deva took this one.
vote : ND The1 Is DQ'ed... UPPED Way Too Much. -Axe |
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