The Aftermath vs M.A.W.
 

rules:
5-15 lines
no dr hate crew votes
The Aftermath spits first
xplain votes
I'll spitt tomorow or later if u haven't spit by 2morrow

ok I ain't gonna wait no longer...
I'll spitt first!
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fuckin faggot you was online all day//
but you were a pussy and you walked away//
you can get smacked and chocked cuz u didn't wrote shit//
I knew that you was scared cuz I smelled clit//
even if you still spitt you're still a bitch//
I hope you're not claustrofobic cuz I put your face in my ass//
you fuckin newbie if you wanna rep you gotta stop jazz//
u still gotta learn a lot move to the W.E.C. (wackness emergency centre)//
get a betta name and stop battling cats like me...

what the fucks wrong wit u aftermath?
spitt or loose on a fucking no show...
now don't be pussy>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>.

^^^ u cant lose on a no show but yo hit this up and ill bb
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83212

man.....i didn't know it all happens this quick.... shit.....

Fool, I was always gonna show, you think i'd let you off like that?/
I'mma walk all over ya ass like you was a fuckin doormat/
The only time you smell clit is when ya mothers walking by/
She's sweatier than a mosh pit, an ugly bitch you can't deny/
Yo, if you wanna battle now, spit something decent up next/
I'll still stomp ya shit, whether its cypher, audio or text/
This fool gets more laughs than an episode of the simpsons/
You got about as much lyrical skill as homers got wisdom/

voting
 

yo.....u gotta enter 100 fucking characters?!
Shit....this site got some rules......
Uppin for some votes man....

poor battle................but neva the less, I think, M.A.W won this.............................................. .............................................
Puches, flow, structure were better by M.A.W.........

VOTE:MAW

Hit this up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ght=dark+cursiv

first uppin............................................. .................................................. .

Man that battle did suck

flow: tie
punches: aftermath
personals: aftermath

vote: aftermath

nice battle anyways

what the fuck man?
why the you say:man that battle did suck
and at the end:nice battle anyways
what's wrong with you,goddamned

MAW your verse was whack ass hell.Aftermath edged with disses,
personals and punches.There was no complexity in this battle or
creativity.So my words tto ya'll are "get better".

Vote=Aftermath

Uppin....
 

Yeah, the battle was pretty weak.....it was a kinda quick 2 minute freestyle from both sides man......

Still Uppin anyways.....

^^^word
this was my first battle in 4 months or sumthing so it was like a wack come-back...
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don't sleep yall
uppppppppppppppppppppppppppin
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MAW your verse was whack ass hell.Aftermath edged with disses,
personals and punches.There was no complexity in this battle or
creativity.So my words tto ya'll are "get better".

Vote=Aftermath
^^ I agree with Cerebral MAW your verse was mad weak and this newbie stole the victory with some weak punches

BEST LINE -

Yo, if you wanna battle now, spit something decent up next/
I'll still stomp ya shit, whether its cypher, audio or text/

But both of you's need to work on it peep my battle with LUNGS
~1~

voting?
 

Man...what is it up to? do only poll votes count as well cos ppl aint poll votin....
Still uppin anyway

*Steps in Frontlines for the first in a few weeks......... lmao*

Ok this was weak.....both of u , ....but aftermath took this, cuz he had some better punches, ...vocab was weak on both sides, ...u need both elevation....

Vote = Aftermath

flow-aftermath
punches-aftermath
personals-both(not many)
overall-aftermath

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83083
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=severe+lyrics
^^can I get some fair votes on them^^

man...
 

Yo that verse was wack but it was literally a 2 min keystyle.
i usually battle at ionic.instanceart.org/forum - lyricist lounge
(sorry if u can't put addresses but edit that out rather then my post plz man)peep this verse i posted last night vs Catastrophe and give me some feedback.

Verse
Man....I know this kid aint no herb but he's still gonna bleed/
Rip this fool outta the floor... fuck a herb, this kids a weed/
Put lyrical in front of ya name and you've a pretty good description/
If you ever pen a rhymebook, it'll be wack....that's Non Fiction/
One look at my rhymes got you rubbing ya eyes in disbelief/
Refreshing ya page won't make it any less tight chief/
I'mma torch-a you son, burning ya skin to first degree/
But i guess you're used to the sensation since contracting V.D/
Ya crew ain't menaces to society, just boyz in the hood, baby boy/
I'm comin straight for ya jugular like you was Siegfried and Roy/
Swift Xecutionas....your group of fools will never last/
Just like ya boy Divinci, it seems you're livin in the past/
Punk....I'll properly, possibly, punish ya verse philisophically/
Cos 'you've achieved a degree that precedes all wack emcees' probably/
You aint a real dog....you're just undercover like Tim Roth/
A professional choke artist, while others spit you just cough/
Cats Attackin The Aftermath, Shit...This Rookies Only Postponing His Elevation/
Workin all night on ya rhyme, suffering from sleep deprivation/
And still ya vocab and wordplay are below average, you can't match me/
I'll murder you over n over like Itchy does Scratchy/
Cos ya shits played n more repetitive than reality t.v/
Ya ratings gonna drop without an originality c.v/
This fools a Village People fan, a real homosexual bigot/
Either that or theres some village thats missing its idiot/
You need a fuckin miracle but i'm the saviour from up above/
I make you a black eyed g, n you still ask me where's the love?/
Wack rappers are an endangered species, since the penalties capital punishment/
This herbs the opposite of Pun, seriously lacking lyrical nourishment/

Peace


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