DJ jet vs. MerKuRy
 

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chekin in
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merkury

Merkury?...tradin names like Haiku ta MicFury-
Afta im dun wit u ima hafta face a Grand Jury-
simply scurry....
I slice an dice dis Caucasion Rice witta ginsu?-
naw...I merk dis cat str8 up while he stares at me witta broken pencil-
shits suspensfull....
not really, its clearly apearant this kids a recycled vet'
Clealy inept....Look...this kid still cals BET the bet-
Pride torn, 21 years old...RB Net?...dawg grow ur self a life-
How can u claim ur hard when u got 4 kids an a wife?..........
Bitch...step away from the mic'....
Split to a demeanor like twice reduced algorythems....
fell my rythem?...im twice as ILL as u...jus make a quick incision..

DJ Jet 1st of all u dumb fuck...I'm not white
2ndly ya raps suck...Face it Bitch, thats Life
Nor do I have a wife wit 4 illigitimate Kids
But I do have a life...It includes fuckin ya bitch
U duckin me quick, My shit spits like Analysts
Meltin u wit venom more potent than Tarantulas
U cant handle this..DJ Jet the disguised Vet
Went back to newb status..
Then Ran into the baddest and Lost all respect
U Baltimore whore, Take this Loss like a Hoe
Either you lose 5-0 now..or Get banned for wack flows

lolz......look at this........uppin for votes............
lets get em in................................................ ...
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Hmm, breakdown

Punches=Mercury
Personals=DJ Jet
Complexity=Dj Jet
Creativity=Mercury
Multis=Neither
Wordplay=Neither
Vocabulary=Dj Jet
Structure=Dj Jet

Overall=Dj

I have to say Jet's verse was a lil weak but it was good enuff to beat Merk. Merk started off good but lost it toward the end of his verse.

VOTE-JET

DJ Jet 1st of all u dumb fuck...I'm not white
2ndly ya raps suck...Face it Bitch, thats Life
Nor do I have a wife wit 4 illigitimate Kids
But I do have a life...It includes fuckin ya bitch


thats sick.


flow: murcury
punches: murcury
structure:murcury
multis: neither
metas: neither

vote: murcury

lol. Merk's made me laugh. :)

and overall i thought hiz was better. punches, flow, blah. yeah.

but yeah, i admit, i just usualy go for wichever one im feelin more and makes me laugh so w/e , just call me a wack ass bitch! :whacky: :D


DJ Jet 1st of all u dumb fuck...I'm not white
2ndly ya raps suck...Face it Bitch, thats Life
Nor do I have a wife wit 4 illigitimate Kids
But I do have a life...It includes fuckin ya bitch

Yes, that IS sick.

VOTE= Merk

I forgot i couldnt vote till 100 post. sry.
and ne way just wanted u to know Merk that ur 2nd link is to this battle and NOT to ur battle with Hardkor3.







..1.. Mayne

nice drop u two

flow-neither
structure-dj jet
wordplay-both
metas-neither
multies-dj jet
punches-both
personals-merkury
complexity-djet
creativity-merkury
humor-merkury
overall-merkury

good shit tho
merk got it

uppin............................................. ....
anybody notice he fed completely off of all of my verse?
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I didnt feed off ya verse, I just stated the truth, quit tryna vote sway..........................
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Merk Took This.. Punches Were On Point
And Flowed Along With It Nicely..

Vote - Merk

I Know I Cant Vote But At Least I Took The Time To
Give You Feedback here.. So Take The Time To Do The Same
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83657

Finally a tight battle.
Both a good wordplay and rhyme schemes(Merks was lil betta)
Both hit personals hard and both came hard.
I dont know if Jet is lyin or not but Merk get negative points for untrue statements. Good battle but i'll give mine to DJ Jet.

Pretty evenly matched battle on both sides...elevation is needed for both...BREAKDOWN!!!

Flow-Both
Punches-DJ Jet
Personals-Both
Wordplay-Both
Overall-DJ Jet

Vote-DJ Jet

yea..........jet ya structure loses this for....plus the kid hit harder wit punches

punches - merk
flow - merk
overal.......nice newb battle

merkury win.......................PAYCE

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dj got dis man beta wordplay n vocab.close battle yall plz plz hit dis shit up wid an honest vote thx yall http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83529 .................................................. ......pz

definition of feeding.......
(runnin your verse based on my verse)

DJ Jet 1st of all u dumb fuck...I'm not white <fed...i said he was white
2ndly ya raps suck...Face it Bitch, thats Life
Nor do I have a wife wit 4 illigitimate Kids <fed...i said he had a wife and 4 kids
But I do have a life...It includes fuckin ya bitch
U duckin me quick, My shit spits like Analysts
Meltin u wit venom more potent than Tarantulas
U cant handle this..DJ Jet the disguised Vet <bitin....i actually
used this line on him
Went back to newb status.. <bitin....same as above
Then Ran into the baddest and Lost all respect
U Baltimore whore, Take this Loss like a Hoe
Either you lose 5-0 now..or Get banned for wack flows

^The Definition of Vote Swaying

Stop Vote swaying U Lil Bitch...Thats not feeding, I stated the truth, U spit false staements about Me I just corrected em U Fagget...........So quit tryna vote sway and let the people vote

stop whining faggot-
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^Suck My Dick Bitch...........If any1 whining in here its yo bitch ass

DJ Jet: "He's feeding, dont vote for him cuz he fed, I'm telling!!"

Fuckin Sissy............................................. ....................................