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An']['hropoLog¥ 10-04-03 04:18 PM

][\/][.O.B vs Hypnotic
 
8 lines was it?
Just spit, ill spit sumtime, dont matter who goes first
No D/R
Explained votes


Payce

Hypnotic u MUST vote on ][\/][.O.B vs XL4REAL or we cant do this, so drop an honest one, thanks

An']['hropoLog¥ 10-04-03 04:58 PM

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An']['hropoLog¥ 10-04-03 06:54 PM

10 lines, MODS wont allow any less

Every1 luvs MOBS 'Style', im like 1 big popular 'Fasion Trend'
Hyps 'Too Slow' for this, 'A.D.D Kids Tryin to Comprehend'
My spits are always 'Fresh and Colorful', u can call me 'TIDE'
This battles like 'Grilled steak' Tacos, it'll 'Lean to one side' (MINE)
Ur Incapabal 2 Entertain, puttin ppl asleep like the Man wit Sand
Battlin me is 'Suicide', your a Soilder Runnin Threw 'No mans Land'
When I called U out ya shoulda pretented it was sumtin u didnt C
Like 'Blinds on the Street' Ur dumb for trying 2 'Come across Me'
Ill leave u speechless unable to spit shit like Tongues to a Winter Rod
Hyps Records more "Overated than Brooklyn", and he wants to be a Mod

Sir Cedrych 10-04-03 09:25 PM

uhm....im settin the rules

10 lines
no d/r
no crew
no hate
250+voters post
no quote vote
no unexplained
must be structured votin
that means no 1 line vote so break it down
i'll key soon

Sir Cedrych 10-04-03 09:33 PM

I spit betta 'shit' than u, ill make ur 'feces' envy me//
Like 'zap', ur 4 'computer love', this fag make love to his 'pc screen'//(nice song)
I'll kill a MOB like 'Johnny cage' rip ur 'torso' from ur 'waist'//
Misplace ur 'pupils out ur eyes' so u can say ur 'seein' my flowz 'straight'//
This cat dont 'want it', like' refusing' himself to b messed wit
Pop 'sleepin pills' in my drink and im still gonna be 'restless'//
'Test this' like success to 'algebraic expressions'//
Raise ur hand' was a mistake to this battle 'merkin u was my lesson'//
Im 'alterin ur agenda' so u can have a 'change of plans'//
'bite' flowz from my hands, I'll 'banish' tha w from u in this battle,put it at the t'op of ur avatar:BANNED'//

Rappad 10-04-03 09:50 PM

ok breakdown

MOB-

Every1 luvs MOBS 'Style', im like 1 big popular 'Fasion Trend'
Hyps 'Too Slow' for this, 'A.D.D Kids Tryin to Comprehend'

^^weak opener..like add kids trying to comprehend I think you meant...which makes it more clear/better, but still kinda weak

My spits are always 'Fresh and Colorful', u can call me 'TIDE'
This battles like 'Grilled steak' Tacos, it'll 'Lean to one side' (MINE)

^^lol...funny

Ur Incapabal 2 Entertain, puttin ppl asleep like the Man wit Sand
Battlin me is 'Suicide', your a Soilder Runnin Threw 'No mans Land'

^^ok....didn't like it too much though

When I called U out ya shoulda pretented it was sumtin u didnt C
Like 'Blinds on the Street' Ur dumb for trying 2 'Come across Me'

^^first line wack...second ok


Ill leave u speechless unable to spit shit like Tongues to a Winter Rod
Hyps Records more "Overated than Brooklyn", and he wants to be a Mod

^^lol...very nice finisher....best bar of your verse by far...nice personal

Hypnotic

I spit betta 'shit' than u, ill make ur 'feces' envy me//
Like 'zap', ur 4 'computer love', this fag make love to his 'pc screen'//

^^eh...decent opener..kinda weak

I'll kill a MOB like 'Johnny cage' rip ur 'torso' from ur 'waist'//
Misplace ur 'pupils out ur eyes' so u can say ur 'seein' my flowz 'straight'//

^^first line was nice...second played

This cat dont 'want it', like' refusing' himself to b messed wit
Pop 'sleepin pills' in my drink and im still gonna be 'restless'//

^^ouch...nice punch

'Test this' like success to 'algebraic expressions'//
Raise ur hand' was a mistake to this battle 'merkin u was my lesson'//

^^wow...very nice

Im 'alterin ur agenda' so u can have a 'change of plans'//
'bite' flowz from my hands, I'll 'banish' tha w from u in this battle,put it at the t'op of ur avatar:BANNED'//

^^this was ok...kinda weak finisher

Overall
I rate this bout 7.5-6.5 in favor of hypnotic....

Even though MOB had a very nice finisher...I just didn't think he had anything else really hard-hitting, whereas hyp displayed consistency throughout his verse and has 2 very solid, hard-hitting bars/punches

Vote=hyp

major props to both though

Sir Cedrych 10-04-03 09:51 PM

edit rules:

unlimited amount of posts can vote my fault,but we dont want newb votes and no 1 line votin please....anywayz i cant find the link to ur battle wit xl so gimme a link

Sir Cedrych 10-04-03 09:53 PM

thxs 4 the vote man......good verse mob....may the better textcee win.....................................

Passivist 10-04-03 09:56 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Rappad
ok breakdown

MOB-

Every1 luvs MOBS 'Style', im like 1 big popular 'Fasion Trend'
Hyps 'Too Slow' for this, 'A.D.D Kids Tryin to Comprehend'

^^weak opener..like add kids trying to comprehend I think you meant...which makes it more clear/better, but still kinda weak

My spits are always 'Fresh and Colorful', u can call me 'TIDE'
This battles like 'Grilled steak' Tacos, it'll 'Lean to one side' (MINE)

^^lol...funny

Ur Incapabal 2 Entertain, puttin ppl asleep like the Man wit Sand
Battlin me is 'Suicide', your a Soilder Runnin Threw 'No mans Land'

^^ok....didn't like it too much though

When I called U out ya shoulda pretented it was sumtin u didnt C
Like 'Blinds on the Street' Ur dumb for trying 2 'Come across Me'

^^first line wack...second ok


Ill leave u speechless unable to spit shit like Tongues to a Winter Rod
Hyps Records more "Overated than Brooklyn", and he wants to be a Mod

^^lol...very nice finisher....best bar of your verse by far...nice personal

Hypnotic

I spit betta 'shit' than u, ill make ur 'feces' envy me//
Like 'zap', ur 4 'computer love', this fag make love to his 'pc screen'//

^^eh...decent opener..kinda weak

I'll kill a MOB like 'Johnny cage' rip ur 'torso' from ur 'waist'//
Misplace ur 'pupils out ur eyes' so u can say ur 'seein' my flowz 'straight'//

^^first line was nice...second played

This cat dont 'want it', like' refusing' himself to b messed wit
Pop 'sleepin pills' in my drink and im still gonna be 'restless'//

^^ouch...nice punch

'Test this' like success to 'algebraic expressions'//
Raise ur hand' was a mistake to this battle 'merkin u was my lesson'//

^^wow...very nice

Im 'alterin ur agenda' so u can have a 'change of plans'//
'bite' flowz from my hands, I'll 'banish' tha w from u in this battle,put it at the t'op of ur avatar:BANNED'//

^^this was ok...kinda weak finisher

Overall
I rate this bout 7.5-6.5 in favor of hypnotic....

Even though MOB had a very nice finisher...I just didn't think he had anything else really hard-hitting, whereas hyp displayed consistency throughout his verse and has 2 very solid, hard-hitting bars/punches

Vote=hyp

major props to both though


said it all.

Vote=Hypnotic

Artikqlit 10-04-03 09:58 PM

VOTE - MOB

Hyp . . . Ur DOPE At Audio But This Is Anotha Ballgame . . .
Mob Had Betta Punches Nd Werdplay . . .
Flow Wuz Good For Both . . . Betta Structure From Mob . . .
Hypnotic Had Multies Nd Mob Had Metas
Pretty Close Battle

Artikqlit 10-04-03 09:59 PM

NVM LoL
Forgot Mob's In My Crew
I Won't Poll

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Good Battle Tho

Passivist 10-04-03 10:01 PM

Shit, didn't read the rules. My fault yall.

I vote Hypnotic because his verse was better in flow and punches. Mob had a few punches which his best was The taco bell line, but he did not have enough to battle out Hypnotic.

Vote=Hypnotic

Sir Cedrych 10-04-03 10:03 PM

^^thank u for explainin tha vote instead of a quote much appreciated..rmember no 1 line votes

that means:

mob or hyp won wit better punches

Sir Cedrych 10-04-03 10:10 PM

uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

$tyle/$witch 10-04-03 10:18 PM

tight battle
 
both of ya'll came tough...though when i vote i look fo sum undergound/crazy shit....dats exactly what hypnotic brought in dis battle...MOB u wuz on it den u started lack'n...

ok breakdown

MOB-

Every1 luvs MOBS 'Style', im like 1 big popular 'Fasion Trend'
Hyps 'Too Slow' for this, 'A.D.D Kids Tryin to Comprehend'

^^weak opener..like add kids trying to comprehend I think you meant...which makes it more clear/better, but still kinda weak

My spits are always 'Fresh and Colorful', u can call me 'TIDE'
This battles like 'Grilled steak' Tacos, it'll 'Lean to one side' (MINE)

^^lol...funny

Ur Incapabal 2 Entertain, puttin ppl asleep like the Man wit Sand
Battlin me is 'Suicide', your a Soilder Runnin Threw 'No mans Land'

^^ok....didn't like it too much though

When I called U out ya shoulda pretented it was sumtin u didnt C
Like 'Blinds on the Street' Ur dumb for trying 2 'Come across Me'

^^first line wack...second ok


Ill leave u speechless unable to spit shit like Tongues to a Winter Rod
Hyps Records more "Overated than Brooklyn", and he wants to be a Mod

^^lol...very nice finisher....best bar of your verse by far...nice personal

Hypnotic

I spit betta 'shit' than u, ill make ur 'feces' envy me//
Like 'zap', ur 4 'computer love', this fag make love to his 'pc screen'//

^^eh...decent opener..kinda weak

I'll kill a MOB like 'Johnny cage' rip ur 'torso' from ur 'waist'//
Misplace ur 'pupils out ur eyes' so u can say ur 'seein' my flowz 'straight'//

^^first line was nice...second played

This cat dont 'want it', like' refusing' himself to b messed wit
Pop 'sleepin pills' in my drink and im still gonna be 'restless'//

^^ouch...nice punch

'Test this' like success to 'algebraic expressions'//
Raise ur hand' was a mistake to this battle 'merkin u was my lesson'//

^^wow...very nice

Im 'alterin ur agenda' so u can have a 'change of plans'//
'bite' flowz from my hands, I'll 'banish' tha w from u in this battle,put it at the t'op of ur avatar:BANNED'//

^^this was ok...kinda weak finisher

Overall
I rate this bout 7.5-6.5 in favor of hypnotic....

Even though MOB had a very nice finisher...I just didn't think he had anything else really hard-hitting, whereas hyp displayed consistency throughout his verse and has 2 very solid, hard-hitting bars/punches

Vote=hyp

major props to both though

agree wit rappad.....^^tru dat

MerKuRy 10-04-03 10:21 PM

Personally I think Hypno won this shit, Better Punches, and Metas...MOB had a nice spit but the majority of his lines were played concepts...Hyp had a couple of played lines as well, just not as much as MOB....

Vote = Hyp

Peep one of my battles in my sig....No I'm not a newb if thats whats you guys Are thinkin I know exactly what I'm talkin about. Peep my Battle vs. DJ Jet and u'll see
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Sir Cedrych 10-04-03 10:21 PM

ok....thank you didnt quote it tho but he did explain why i got a vote at the top .................................................. ..................................

Sir Cedrych 10-04-03 10:28 PM

uppin 2................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .............

-ElocuShun- 10-04-03 10:36 PM

right there aint no need to go through each and every line(rappad)so heres tha breakdown:---
punches=hyp
flow=both...nice
sustainment=both
metas=hyp...just
multis=...
origanality=mob
to the eye=mob...doesnt matter tho
vocab=hyp
aight heres how i see it.....breakdowns are not needed coz i saw this as who hit harder?and it was hypnotic..like art said hyp is a lot betta in audio which counts...so ma vote=hypnotic

make sure ya hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1

Sir Cedrych 10-04-03 10:49 PM

uppin 3................................................. .................................................. ................................................

-ElocuShun- 10-04-03 10:52 PM

aight peeps ive voted on this so at least one of youz cud peep ma other thread that i posted above.cheers.................

Capcom 10-04-03 11:04 PM

Decent Battle But I expected a lil more from U two....Overall I think Hypnotic took it...He was more consistent with his punches and they flowed much better..MoB u had a good verse too but ya punches wasn't really connectin all that hard...had some nice concepts but I dont think they came out quite like u wanted em too.

Vote = Hypnotic

An']['hropoLog¥ 10-05-03 12:17 AM

Pure D/R that is all I have to say



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An']['hropoLog¥ 10-05-03 12:33 AM

Hypnotic i was informed by brooklyn that ui should be battling in ELITE, and so should u, cuz we are both vetrs, so im setting it up in Elite right now

An']['hropoLog¥ 10-05-03 12:47 AM

NOBODY VOTE THIS, IT SHOULDNBT BE IN FRONTLINES, IM RESETING IT IN ELITE LIKE BROOKLYN INSISTED, PEACE...............

Sir Cedrych 10-05-03 02:09 AM

yes do vote on this i didnt agree to move it to elite

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pot1ent 10-05-03 08:33 AM

Flow-=Hypnotic
Punches-Hypnotic(close)
Metas-Hypnotic(close)

I voted for hypnotc for general better ideas of metas and stuff...they had more impact but the amount of them was the same

Vote-Hypnotic


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