YoungWhiteThug19 vs. Thugd-Out-Mic
 

Rules:
15-25 Lines
Blind Spit
No Hate
No D.R.
No Crew
No FreePostin

Lets do this.

Checkin in wit this shit. Have my verse in 35 minutes. You post first though.
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checkin..............33333######################## #######3
fosho its a blind spit
whoever drops first drops first
dawg
it mite be me
wut does it matter
u look like a vet
,,.................checkin n

^^ Tru Dat aight im starting right now.

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yo its like dis.......


I'ma do ya like Toni Braxton...make sure ya never "Breathe Again"
too late to reverse ya fate...a hearse is what ya leavin in

White-PAc receive a win...Do or Die couldn't "Picture This"
ya typed a 50 bar novel thug.. my 20'll leave ya scriptures ripped

this quick verse is sicc..enough to leave ya bed ridden
some Exorcist shit,projectile pukin w/ ya head spinnin

Da Mics left grinnin laughin at this lonely punk
ya bitch is "Changin Faces"..do ya mind if she strokes me up

ya never been known to bust..with nutz or with ya wordplay
YOUng couldn't spit shit...he's shootin blanks I heard ya girl say

Switch it UP..

fuck that…this is the meaning of winner take all//
cause in this case, the harder I am- the bigger they fall//
triggerin brawls- I constantly destroy cat’s deploy they wak raps//
I returned to bring the “Ache-man” like Dallas bringing Troy back//
damn tho- you picked the wrong time to enter this battlem wit-me//
facing a vandal that’s got a handle on banter generously//
venomously- quite frightening with my writing//
Younb White pac- don’t excite me, you couldn’t “thrill da mic” sky diving//
no shock to heads, I rock threads- you’ll end up with ya ask kicked//
not to brag kid, but this is the reason THugd-out was a number 1 draft pick//
his only option evasion- persuade em- so this whore knows//
TOO LATE- “Signs” of my invasion left with a gauge imprint in ya “corn rows”//

Yea Lets Go
 

YoUnGwHiTeThUgS VERSE:

"Fufilling" a verse wit rap type -electronics-, neva seen an
*18 Year* old staying "Hooked On Phonics".

I don't create problems, I only squash 'beef.' I know thats a 'relief' to your 'psychotic belief'.

Im the commander in 'lead', wordplay so hard makeing you 'proceed' to 'plead'.

When Im on 'top' I can't lose my 'spot', aint battled in three months and my led pencil tip still stays 'hot'.

I know why "Cumd-Mouth-Dyke" dosent wanna spit -first- because he dosen't want his shit -reversed-, because his shit's 'rehearsed'.

This is aint my real verse, it's just a 'rough sketch', I'm still suprised that this bitch aint 'bluffed yet'.

15-25 don't matter to me, you aint no 'Emcee' - I think we'd all agree that I will "Cradle you 2 Ya Grave" like I was 'Jet Li'.

This nigga keep's (IM'in) me on A.I.M. - asking me questions like how *Gay.I.Am.

Hell yea you crazy, get you a "life". All up on my dick like you was my "wife".

It's a 'drastic measure', and my 'pleasure' to rip you - this is yo 'debut' fo me to 'consume' you.

Everytime I step to the Mic - Emcees step back. I slang cocaine, because Im addicted to crack.

Shit I aint 'ashamed', (TUPAC) in yo avitar - you puttin 'shame' to his 'name', he didn't come back this year because you 'da blame'.

I know you still searchin fo that 'fortune', yo 'miss-fortune' was battleing me because I left yo -illterate- brain full of 'distortion'.

Useing Lotion, thats 'sexual assault' - 1st loss on your record and proud to say it's my 'fault'.

I lost to Mary~Jane but ya know thats a 'practice', this is the real shit - a "RAP BATTLE" 'mal-practice.'

This is more of a diss off of my "MixTape", this knife is bloody, yo lemme 'switch blades'.

FINISHER

"Cash Money Wigga" cuz I get paied all the 'loot', even Mary~Jane is thankin me fo fuckin up this 'fruit'.

this was a good battle...both had great verses i thought....and both verses flowed pretty well also...punches were good by both of them...but i think thugd took this one with harder punches and i was feeling his verse a little more overall...but Young did come hard but Thugd came harder i thought..so my vote goes to Thugd..props to both..

Good Job upp'n fo votes.
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Im gonna have to go with Youngwhite on this one but let me break this shit down for you

I'ma do ya like Toni Braxton...make sure ya never "Breathe Again"
too late to reverse ya fate...a hearse is what ya leavin in
nice opener thugd, and like the rest of your verse, ill wordplay, you definitely excelled in that category over young.

I returned to bring the “Ache-man” like Dallas bringing Troy back//
this line is another example of your ill wordplay, a few things you lack in were really focused punches and personals and vocab.. you need to improve in those categories

young was a lot more elevated in this, he showed it through his nice vocab usage, and the complex punches he had at the end like
15-25 don't matter to me, you aint no 'Emcee' - I think we'd all agree that I will "Cradle you 2 Ya Grave" like I was 'Jet Li'.
although movie punches are played, this one was nice cuz he incorporated the title as part of the punch line.. nice wordplay too

all in all i have to give this to youngwhitethug

i got to agree withMasta C ^^^^^^^^^
thugd came out some much harder both had about equal punches
all in all good battle

This is a good battle. Both of you dropped nicely. Here's my breakdown:

Wordplay- Young White Thug
Punches- Young White Thug
Multies- Thugd-Out-MIc
Metas- Thugd-Out-MIc
Personals- Young White Thug
Vote- Young White Thug

Like I said both of you dropped nicely...that was a close battle...I just think Young White Thug got Thugd-Out-MIc with this one...stay active, both of you.

Pretty good battle here....Breakdown

Punches: Thuged
Personals: Young
Multis: Thug
Flow: Thug
Wordplay: Thug
Metas: Young

Vote = Thug

Good shit from the both of U, but Thug was spittin some fire over there...Made it hard to compete with.

^^ Thank you.

2-1 Im winnin thanx fo the votes.

Upp'nnnn
Dont forget to poll please
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Thanx

2-2
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breakdown
Thugd
I'ma do ya like Toni Braxton...make sure ya never "Breathe Again"
too late to reverse ya fate...a hearse is what ya leavin in

^^played as hell

White-PAc receive a win...Do or Die couldn't "Picture This"
ya typed a 50 bar novel thug.. my 20'll leave ya scriptures ripped

^^wack.....

this quick verse is sicc..enough to leave ya bed ridden
some Exorcist shit,projectile pukin w/ ya head spinnin

^^ok you seem to be picking it up...this was decent

Da Mics left grinnin laughin at this lonely punk
ya bitch is "Changin Faces"..do ya mind if she strokes me up

^^ok...kinda weak

ya never been known to bust..with nutz or with ya wordplay
YOUng couldn't spit shit...he's shootin blanks I heard ya girl say

^^this was ok,I guess...but played

Switch it UP..

fuck that…this is the meaning of winner take all//
cause in this case, the harder I am- the bigger they fall//

^^you tried putting a nice spin on this...but you tried to be too creative and in the end it doesnt make much sense loll...but decent

triggerin brawls- I constantly destroy cat’s deploy they wak raps//
I returned to bring the “Ache-man” like Dallas bringing Troy back//

^^this was pretty good....nice punch

damn tho- you picked the wrong time to enter this battlem wit-me//
facing a vandal that’s got a handle on banter generously//

^^wtf??????this was wack

venomously- quite frightening with my writing//
Younb White pac- don’t excite me, you couldn’t “thrill da mic” sky diving//

^um...riiiighhht.....

no shock to heads, I rock threads- you’ll end up with ya ask kicked//
not to brag kid, but this is the reason THugd-out was a number 1 draft pick//

^^ok....still very weak

his only option evasion- persuade em- so this whore knows//
TOO LATE- “Signs” of my invasion left with a gauge imprint in ya “corn rows”//

^^this was a decent finisher

Overall-Very weak verse...you seriously gotta work on ya punches...3/10

Youngwhitethug
Fufilling" a verse wit rap type -electronics-, neva seen an
*18 Year* old staying "Hooked On Phonics".

^^nice flow...but very played

I don't create problems, I only squash 'beef.' I know thats a 'relief' to your 'psychotic belief'.

^^this was pretty nice...good use of multis

Im the commander in 'lead', wordplay so hard makeing you 'proceed' to 'plead'.

^^flow was horrible here, as was the punch

When Im on 'top' I can't lose my 'spot', aint battled in three months and my led pencil tip still stays 'hot'.

^^weak punch....multis seemed forced

I know why "Cumd-Mouth-Dyke" dosent wanna spit -first- because he dosen't want his shit -reversed-, because his shit's 'rehearsed'.

^^If you hadn't repeated shit this would be a great punch, but it was still pretty good...nice

This is aint my real verse, it's just a 'rough sketch', I'm still suprised that this bitch aint 'bluffed yet'.

^^wack...

15-25 don't matter to me, you aint no 'Emcee' - I think we'd all agree that I will "Cradle you 2 Ya Grave" like I was 'Jet Li'.

^^a bit played...but ok multis again

This nigga keep's (IM'in) me on A.I.M. - asking me questions like how *Gay.I.Am.

^^um...wtf was this?????A punch???

Hell yea you crazy, get you a "life". All up on my dick like you was my "wife".

^^wow...how played could ya get

It's a 'drastic measure', and my 'pleasure' to rip you - this is yo 'debut' fo me to 'consume' you.

^^flow was messed up here, the first part was nice though

Everytime I step to the Mic - Emcees step back. I slang cocaine, because Im addicted to crack.

^^Ok...diss him, don't compliment yourself

Shit I aint 'ashamed', (TUPAC) in yo avitar - you puttin 'shame' to his 'name', he didn't come back this year because you 'da blame'.

^^wack as hell

I know you still searchin fo that 'fortune', yo 'miss-fortune' was battleing me because I left yo -illterate- brain full of 'distortion'.

^^this was decent

Useing Lotion, thats 'sexual assault' - 1st loss on your record and proud to say it's my 'fault'.

^^lol...pretty good, looks like you're finally picking it up

I lost to Mary~Jane but ya know thats a 'practice', this is the real shit - a "RAP BATTLE" 'mal-practice.'

^^this was pretty good...nice punch

This is more of a diss off of my "MixTape", this knife is bloody, yo lemme 'switch blades'.

^^I liked this.......even though its a bit played...you put a creative spin on this
FINISHER

"Cash Money Wigga" cuz I get paied all the 'loot', even Mary~Jane is thankin me fo fuckin up this 'fruit'.

^^ok...kinda weak finisher


Overall-weak verse...but you picked it up a bit at the end..5/10

Honestly, for someone who is 6-0 v.s. someone who is 37-5, this was weak as hell. I give my vote to young cuz at the end of his verse he started picking it up........but this was a weak ass battle...just weak

Vote=young

yo, both battles were sick, they both had structure, flow, punches, everything for a good battle, but i felt that youngwhitethug19 through some harder punches, and just wanted it more overall.

My vote youngwhitethug19. you had soem sick lines dude.

Thanx
4-2 me but drop yo poll vote.
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i agree wit dat one
Nice battle
but thud out got this one

No Quoted Votes.
-Axe

punches-Thugd
metas-thugd
personals-white
vocab-thugd
structure-niether

vote-thugd

Nice battle, thugd please hit this up ide appreciate it

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83731

^^ Dude that means I won. He was saying I did. lol

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Well To bad aint my fault
4-3 me
sumone forgot to poll it fo rme
i shuda won it already
uppin to get thisshit closed

Its all good bro don't worry bout it.

SwiF'][' -- You a dick rider, saying Hit this up you didn't even put honestly.
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But w/e.. Please vote ya'll.
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Plainy Of D/R Going On Here...
Its Only Obvious That YoungWhite19 Got This
His Punches Was Harder
Flow Was Better.....
But It Was Some Good Shit

* I"M NOT GOING TO POLL VOTE *

^^ I FULLY AGREE

lol upp'nnn fo some votes
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^^ THAST why utold me ya self i was gunna beat u kid
how u gunna say that
I merked u man my shit hit harder
ya shit was choppy as fuk
so dont say i d/r fuked htat
uppi to get this shit done wit
i came much harder peep dapunches an wordplay
bitches

^^ I thought you was gonna beat me bitch, but I am the better VET you was right. Keep doing yo thing homie.. I aint fuckin wit yo shit. Flint Town niggas don't fuck wit ya'll.

999
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^.....
Underated~Overhated, X~Kalibur, 9~Millameter, Sik-Wit-It....And More......
Damn Kid...
Get Tha Hint
You've Been Banned More Times Than
J-Lo Got Married.....
Juss Give Up Already

1000
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I think I should win... But Im out
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That Was To Thugd-Out-Mic

you = even lamer

^^ kid u frontin who is dat man
foreal dont ell me im thsoe cats
ahahha wow thats alot of names fool u trippin kid
u prolyl tlakin to sumone eles
if u talkni to me thats bullshit Ipp have been checked ..dumbfuk i live in da states
uppin for a vote

Nigga.....
You Told YoungWhiteThug19
That You Was Underated~Overhated....
So You Can't Bull Shit Ya Way Outta This One....
Juss Admit It....
You Got Caught

And as soon as the end get back nigga u banned again. To tell u da truth.
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Wordplay- Young White Thug
Punches- Young White Thug
Multies- Thugd-Out-MIc
Metas- Thugd-Out-MIc
Personals- thugd
Vote- thugd

personally i just thought that alltho u could tell he was a newb he did have some sick rhymes...some were played but overall his flow is what had me noddin ma head no dr no hate just my op

I Counted Votes Up... And It Should Be 4-4
Uppin To Get It Closed................................
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Wordplay- Young White Thug
Punches- Young White Thug
Multies- Thugd-Out-MIc
Metas- Thugd-Out-MIc
Personals- Young White Thug

Vote- Young White Thug

he came alot hrder thi sother ki din ma eyes was weak....1