Aprentice vs. SwiF']['
 

iight
10-15 lines max
no hate
no crew votes
u spittin first
ill spit either 2nite or tomoro
iight g-luck

come on man damn u takin a long time its been allday peep this and spit
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IIght im goin out hit this up and ill spit by tomoro dont duck neither111111111111111111111111111111111111111111

Me Duck?

Ill spit otmorrow or tonite, havent decided yet

peace********************************************* ****

^^^^ yo whiel u cats wait on spittin can u all hit this up
honestly
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83729

CLEAN battle66 htiti up honestly or dont hit it up at lall
ill vote inhere when u all drop

Apprentice and his 'stretched lines', wit 'Elastics' he Fights
Your styles like 'Barks Soft drink', each verse 'Really Bites'
'Wont know wut Hit U', A Golden Eye 'Facility' Soilder snipped Frum 'Air Vents'
I confess Im not a Newb, youve been fooled this here's a JKX Experiment
Im a Vet 'Not yet Exposed', Police deciding whether to 'Strip-Search'
Going out on a 'Sunday Night'? Only place This Kids going 'Is-Church' (church day)
There Aint no 'Friendship' between us, this aint the boarder at 'Bobolo Island' (can/usa)
Im shootin u 'Worse Low Blows' than answerin 2 'What is the Capital of Tailand'?
This line may be a Filler but your lines are just 'Shit', they're 'Fertalizer'
This battle? you 'lost the whole thing', equiped wit a 'Home made Circumsizer'
Ur From Mohegan Gangsta Shit? Thats faker than Pro-Wrestling
And as for Ur Murked List, 'None' those names R Worth-Mentioning
U always Compliment ur own Rhymes! in Brackets he writes "Great"?
But If his lines are so good, why is Aprentice Eleven and Eight?
Im cookin this dude his shits 'Raw', 'seals' served in 'Iglu Huts'
I know ur name is 'Aprentice', but around me there aint no 'Short Cuts'


Note

Personal about him complimentinjg his lines:
He always writes (OMG) and shit like that after his verse lol
funny this

And an Apprentice can be a shortcut for gettin around highschool quicker

And youve all played golden Eye, first board, the facility, u take out a guy frum the vents

That should do it


SPIT

^^^^hehehe iight this should be quick lemme start spittin now it shood be up in a min or two lol wow..................................

What are u laughin at u wack bitch?


Lol apprentice kid? who the fuck are u?

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2 minutes?


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The appetizer:
shut the FUCK up^^ faggot ur dismissed, neverless a bitch,
the way ima rape u, will have u limpin dude/
m not gay its just the newb principle/(new principle)

now raise ur hand b4 u catch multiple roasts, after u dead my spits will fucken scar ur ghost/
its obvious ur personals came from d/r an checkin my posts, ur flow looked hard to most/
but aprentice far from them, my rhymes like cement the way they go hardenin/
Swiffs mouth im skatin and fartin in/(skat:shittin in 1's mouth)

IIght ur just a fucken homo:

if u checked my profile ull see im sik wit it/
my rhymes are like b4 a fight, the way u get quick witted/
disfigured shitake leadin to tearage/
who swiffs an mcee, nah faggot it dont mean miscarridge/
ive added multiple rappin talents, even if u divided my flow Aprenitce is not ur average/

your blessed to even recieve these lines/
ya tic toc flows is walkin invisible mines, rhymes like carpenters they way the entrappin weak minds/

fuck your lines and fuck what u think/
you can go 16 but ur rhymes go nowhere like a roller rink/

I hit you wit multis and multiple head shots, hit u in ur thorox/(lol)
stomachin aprenticekid is like downin a bottle of fucken CLOROX/

LOL, ok, werk on ur flow tho

Upin................Honest Votes............................................. ...................................

kwik breakdown...........

punches=app
flow=swift
sustainment=app
metas=app
creativeness=swift
origanality=swift
vocab=app
im a punches person so vote=appre'

hit this up...........make sure ya do
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83865

Most of Swifts' meta's or "word play" wasn't tight. Sorry dog. some of em...A.K. rhyme scheme didn't seem to go well. But thats what people said about mine but I know my shit flow. A.K. should work on his line organization to make it understandable as possible. He had 1 or 2 tight lines but Swift had like 3 maybe. Swift, to me was just a lil betta.

^^^ u sway again and ill spit another verse u embarasment to life.............................................. .................

aight peeps i voted on this so can one of ya cats look at the thread that i posted.............................cheers......... ..........

.................................................. ....................app ya dint poll vote on my battle.............................sorry for more postin............................

this was pretty weak


punches:none
flow:none
structure:swift
personal:aprentice

vote-aprenticekid cuz swift said this
"This line may be a Filler but your lines are just 'Shit', they're 'Fertalizer'"

LOL OK?

u dont nkow how to vote, dont ever post one on my battle again

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i thought this waw a aite
battle
aprrentice took it tho
harder punches an personals
Vote- apprentice
seemed more experianced

iight that shit needs to be deleted if ur a newb without 100 posts and u dont kno how to vote then dont plain and simple

Speakin on gametimes behalf) but anyway uppin numba 1111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111

Keep d/ring

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Personals-Apprentice? now i know its d/r

Uppin this.............................................. .................................................. ......................................

Im gonna hafta be honest on this shit.... Swift got this. His was more understandable. Tha lines were more evened out than App's. Honest shit.... VOTE: SWIFT

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i aint dickridin...just this was pretty difficult to vote cuz wasnt much to mention....no worthy punches , flow was off by both....u guys just plain suck thats why....gimme something to mention and i'll see whats up...


GameTime...

U gave him personals dumb ass

I see one personal in his verse and it was wack

there are 5 in mine that al hit hard, and ppl agree with me

U didnt evenread both verses, dont ever vote on my battles again

aight next time i'll vote for you...so u can shut the fuck up aight...coo

opinions are opinions so deal with it.......


GameTime...

The first board is the Dam.the second board is Facility..and you talkin about when you be in the bathroom..and the guard be pissin..lol..anyway swift got this..I didnt like Aprentice verse at all...Swift had better disses..and he beginning of Aprentice verse,that new principle line...what the hell do that mean?..but yeah Swift got this..

Can 1 of yall close the battle in my sig..I'm winnin 4-0..1 more vote will give me the win..

punches=apptentice
flow=swift
sustainment=apprentice
metas=apprentice
creativeness=swift
origanality=swift
vocab=apprencice
my vote:apprenctice

apprenctice came wit harder punches, an that usually what

swif was weak played out and non flowin

vote=apprentice
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........................show love and honestly vote on my shit
peace

it was alright battle.............enjoyed it.......................................

punches=apptentice
sustainment=apprentice
metas=apprentice
origanality=swift
Flow+apprentice

apprenctice came wit harder punches, better flow and structure--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Vote=app


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Hit this up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ght=dark+cursiv

sick of poeple sleepin on it

okk swiff ur losin 4-0 lets get 1 more vote to cap this 1......................and stop swayin man its really anoyin leave it to the voterz!!

Can someone close this...I hit this battle up now please return the favor..the link is in my sig..

I think app got this with harder hitting disses
Swifts wordplay wasnt really cuttin it, ykno, he didnt came that hard

overall app got this

Vote = App
Ill poll dis when i reach 100

hit these battles up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83715
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84006

K APP GOT DIS 4 SURE BETA PUNCHES N WORDPLAY HIS FLOW CUDA BEEN BETA N STRUCTURE BUT GD VERSE MAN....... PLZ HIT DIS UP WID AN HONEST VOTE http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83858 THX ...............................PZ