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K-Dubb VS melodramah
40 minutes to post
14 lines max melo go first. check in |
checkin in................................................ .......................... spittin in a minute......
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dawg where u at? it been 40 minute since you check in, ill give ya a little more time just post ya damn rhyme............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......
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im bout to reverse you, put u back in n delete u b4 yo momma birthed you/
claiming that bling, it aint bling if its a chipped off piece a glass shaped in a toe ring/ i got ya 40 minutes, after this u been verbally raped, feelin dirty making appointments at the clinics/ u should learn to listen more then u speak, hearin peoples shit n bitin it is the formula for defeat/ fuck stone this shits written in concrete ill blaze this place leave u unknown, left w/ no trace, ill do u like Hopkins n leave u de-faced/ let ya bling shine, thats how ya status u define.. u rappin is straight up a crime, my cushion change is the closest thing you'll get to a dyme/ i dont need no 14 lines i cane kill u in just 9/ ur growing scared awaiting my flow, what she gon say? nobody knows.. im reppin that Izz-I, guaranteed foreign to u, u a valley guy reppin that "vard" , im sure gangstas down there by now r good at pretending their hard/ |
my bad.. i couldnt get back on RB................................................ .......................there it go..
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Don't talk 'bout my ma' that way, she's dead,
she died just before your mom gave head and bled in bed// What tha fuck does it mean to be de-faced? Man your a disgrace, please make haste and get outta my face!// And please don't jerk off wit kidz, Jizz-I'll do it for you, and i'll do it again to ya momma too// I beleive ya when ya say ya wrote dat in concrete, it sounds so incomplete on dope street, it's as bad as raw meat// You think you all big wit fame, you give rap a bad name, you got no game, your rhymes are lame, you should be put in tha hall of fame with ya pic above ya false name// I'm sorry you tha one I gotta harass, but ya smell like natural gas, I think I'll pass my next Biology class, cause i dont wanna see how much inertial mass ya pack in that sack// I couldnt get on the website til now, sorry for my delay as well. |
uppin 4 votes #1................................................ .................................................. .................................................. ...................
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UPPIN This Battle For The Newbies
.................................................. ..... They Shits Gettin Slept On Man ................................................. Come On Ya'll Vote ............................. |
^^good look.........................not even 1 vote??? lol.... damn! wassup w/ that shyyyt?................100 characters.
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i'd say this was an even battle.....both flow and punches and structure i had tie.....but melodramah gets it for being more original....k dubb played off his verse so that takes away from originality
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i agree wit gaytime except that dub fukin sucked badly almost as bad as olidog and rookie and hot ice anyway
vote=drama ..........holla............ |
I think this was quite a weak battle, too much feedin etc......................however there was a clear winner.............
Melodramah won this cos his punches were original whereas K-Dub just fed,fed,fed instead of throwin punches.........Melo's flowed better too........................ VOTE- Melo Hitt this up to repay with an honest vote, peace http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ght=dark+cursiv |
2-0 what what... thanks for the votes..... we needs more tho.. hollA... uppin number 2 ! .................................................. ........................
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I give this shit to melodramah even though both verses were weak. K- Dubb you need to install som flow man your shit was allover the place even out ya bars.
Best Line - im bout to reverse you, put u back in n delete u b4 yo momma birthed you/ claiming that bling, it aint bling if its a chipped off piece a glass shaped in a toe ring/ ^^^ pretty weak but good enuff to take the battle Check out my battle with LUNGS ~1~ |
thanks for the votes... uppin number 2................................................. .................................................. ....................hollAAAAAA!!
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uppin numba 3..............................................don t sleep peoples, dont sleep............................................. .................................................. ........ :)
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opener:melodramah
finisher:melodramah structure:tie flow:tie creativity:Melodramah punches:Tie aiiyo it not just this battle that gettin slept on hit this up peeps http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84191 |
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^I got to agree with gametime......K dub did feed quite a bit, and all of Meloh punches were original...In term giving him the win... Vote = Meloh Can U hit my battle up since I took the time to hit yours up even though I cant poll vote....Trust me my battle is very interesting, just bein slep on cuz people assume that me & the persona I'm battling are Newb's http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84031 |
uppin numba 4 for votes...................................... u kno ya wanna vote mayyyyne.... just votey vote vote :) .
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4-0 dont sleep peeples lets get it done.............................................. .................................................. ....................u can DO ITTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!
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Melo Took This Easy Wit His
Punches.. Solid Shit Here Vote - Melo I Polled Yours So Do The Same http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1969#post831969 |
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