8 Omens
 

first off.....
centz is what? centz is who?
you only pissed off cause im not bitch made young pup fuck you !
im the illest with lyrical hiku's-
abuse herbs with verbs you can tell by the bruise.
i misuse ego's- that are not equel-and kill in sequels-
this what i do.let you live long enough to kill you in prt 2.
say what?.....i bit mine-from who's rhyme?
you fag mimes- can perform double oral like hemaphrodite in 69's-
all you do is just bite and suck at the same time.
im ahead of my rolex while you a broke casio behind-the time.
i dont give a fuck...i refuse to conform -to being norm-
my FLOW form- HARD enough to film PORN of me busting HAIL STORMS.
you want proof? my ripping stints- where just hints-
of how in this game im one of a kind like every mans finger prints.
illmattic with every hymn that i design-
make your career coarse and life force align-
parallel...acapell-2 sentence equalling 2 flat lines'.
this is my biography........
divine with metaphors~ im~ how raps biblically define?
if you didnt bite, why your verse sounds like mine-played it in rewind?
you dick riders want to act like me................aight fine!
but you will have to giveup some brains to get in my mind.

hook:2 keep hopen
3 get you hope broken now start coapen.
4 we leave you broken with your bones spelling dont fuck
with an omen

5th off.....
aint shit aboute me soft-anyone can get served,
from my skillz to the werds i cough- im hot and exhaust- molicoff.
non centz the type to guzzle a gun muzzle-
fire shots lyrically...physically charlie horse your leg muscles- cramp hustles'.
im known to do on microphone what close chrome does to bone.
shatter yet splatter your subject matter-shit on you with your own blatter=
my writters block headaches register 8 on earthquakes...i leave you feeling the disaster.
it started with singers taking actors jobs...in an instance-
now we got commercial gangstas taking real thugs buissness.
but im neither of these-so dont believe-the rumors-
my job to bless you like i just sneezed.-leave you in tumors-
squeeze-m.c.s' for royalties at 50 percent finance fees-this is FOUL HUMOR
i'll take HALF your CHEDDAR .<guess who just CUT THE CHEESE.>
please you cats is all that....but thats,,, nothing in rap ~so you a zero in fact-
your not at my level...murder and plead a lower~case then i kill you with CAPS.(capitol)
how you gonna tell me i cant i aint real or act-
like you dont lack the same things you claim i lack -
then have the nerve not to expect me to react.
when i do my impact-shows you getten beat on beat like heart attacks.
i just present~ed the gift for you that's a w~rap.
you cats stay weak you dont battle to be tighter ITS A VICIOUS CYCLE-
you battle weather to find if your garbage or recycled.
thats why i look at you critics like lame hoes in bed-
cause you blow-retarded like your slow~ in ~the ~head.

hook:6 you not knowen
7 we knowen your head is the bomb so start blowen
8 we get dick rode in heaven cause even the virgin MARY
cant front on an omen

Damn! that is the best piece I've seen here in open mic yet. You're a genius man. That is the perfect piece, it's classic material. You are on top of your game partner. Keep it up!

marry me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
id make a great dihonest cheating asshole husband...lol
thank you ma i hope others will see it the same

Its was an alright piece, need some rhyming on parts if that wut u wuz tryin to do.


when i do my impact-shows you getten beat on beat like heart attacks.
i just present~ed the gift for you that's a w~rap.
you cats stay weak you dont battle to be tighter or for tittles-
you battle weather to find if your garbage or recycled.


^^I cant find tha rhymes here if you wuz even tryin ta rhyme^^
Keep droppin
{Love}

when i do my impact-shows you getten beat on beat like heart attacks.
i just present~ed the gift for you that's a w~rap.
THEY RHYME OUT OF CONTEXT AND YOU AND I BOTH KNOW YOU HAVE TO DO THAT AT TIMES

Flow was fast and tight...The structure did lack but i feel people would feel your flow more on audio...Well unless they pick it up...I've got used to it and it was a good read...You stayed on topic nicely blah blah...The intro was nice aswell

Pz :)

what you mean pop please tell me i liked this

I did like this piece aswell...I said your structure did lack and that can't lead to people not following your flow...But i thought the flow was great...Content had me hooked throughtout...

If that isn't explained enough..hOlla

Pz.. :)

lol it is im just a perfectionist and you one of the most trusted people i have so i ask you harder then others

damn dude i was feelin that, after readin ur other shit i found the flow easy to catch onto, but i guess it depends on the reader, the vocab and wordplay were good as usual, and i didnt see a problem wit the rhyme scheme, i dunno what k dubb was thinkin, but whatever, good shit dude.

peace......

UPPIN AND THNKS

HOT SHIT!!! no Doubt

YOUR BACK??????
YO SON WUZ GOOD I MISSED YOU TWIN

^^^Dawg u kno...lol I will always ressurect..lol

Check my COllabo out

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/edi...t&postid=824953

i will pop let me finish this track

representin hardcore an that peice bro...everything was there...i liekd it all..i would say more but i gotta get goin to my next class...i'll drop summin more wen my comp gets fixed pez

O yes perfect nice shit I would love to hear this flowen to a beat son!!

yo i was feelin this flow man....it was dope like it alot.....
peace...

hot shot like u usual word, holla nigga we neva got to do the collabo u wanted, nvm if u dun want it no mo keep spittin

Sorta jus tellin peeps what ur about in this spit,i feel it had the usual wordplay and good vocab as usual,word choice was there and as some have said that the structure was off - it wasn't,with the use of the multies it allows it to flow to a beat even though in text it may look slightly off,in some parts it may have been slightly but didn't look to be,so as a whole liked the peice but in any peice theres little flaws like incorporatin more relevant vocab,but hey no-one on here can do everything perfect.Good shit dawg.

Peace

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