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Evolve 10-06-03 01:27 PM

Tim E. Tumurk VS Shrapnel (PROBATION MATCH)
 
Read Rules Thread Before Posting

Check In Due: Wendesday 10-08-03
Verses Due: Friday 10-10-03

Winner Is In The League & Off Probation
Loser Is Out Of The League

KoNcEpT 10-06-03 01:28 PM

Thank you.


In.

Derive 10-06-03 01:42 PM

checkin in......

KoNcEpT 10-07-03 06:21 PM

KEY'D cuz

purple is gay

I may have flipped a few lines
but it was quick cuz i wanted to
get this over with...

People say my career is over...but here is a little clue
if indeed my career is over it would only be over you. . .
i dont have to try in this battle, im suprised your still around
this battle's like arms cut off cuz i got the win... hands down !
A.I. is your only accomplishment?! damn..... this kid's a slacker
heh, watch as i give HaZe a Big L..... like the mainstream rapper !
your verses are BlAh...i told u u're garbage no need to ignore me
y? bother 2 talk about how wack u r, when ur verses.. do it 4 me !
you're outta my league!..i'm better than you..& your also outta luck
imma hang this cat from a flag pole so that every one knows what's up !

BlAh 10 lines match it or whut ever

Derive 10-07-03 06:25 PM

hmmm yea....hope ur rdy to get kicked outta the league cuz that shit sucked...

Shrap is known to lick Scrabble Boards in attempts to spit ill wordplay
This kid spits like a bitch..With all that dick in the way!
Givin head in the back of class is the only way your goin down in 'history'
Fear of getting 'kicked'..This Kat's left with more goosebumps than RL Stine mysteries!
Like Kurt Warner, Ima "Ram" ya chest and wear your heart on my sleeve
Shrapnel still in the league? Like opey without ho-hos its hard to believe
Yeah Shrap spits ill... That explains how weekly you get worse...
About to son you worse...than if I let Camarac ghostwrite my verse
Brand the mark of a loser in your forehead,so Shrap can really burn-an-L
Its Killer Instincts,How bout you bitches learn how to spell!
Verbally abuse this bitch... Its rape how I"ll cover all the bases
My punches leave Shraps face more fucked up than typing with alternating cases

iight lets get votes....

Chrit 10-07-03 06:41 PM

I'm really trying to find something quotable from shrapnel...
I couldnt....

Vote to sonn....
For better punches, wordplay, personals...

^^^
So shrap understands...
Shrap... you came played as hell...
Only your 4th bar was even useable...
Not like Sonn came great... but came less played and therefore wins...

I liked the Cam line...


Vote: Sonn-In Time

KoNcEpT 10-07-03 06:44 PM

WHAT!!!!

i quit.

Derive 10-07-03 06:46 PM

^^ok then...u made it easier for urself lol....U FUCKING MADE ME WASTE A VERSE...anyways......i win u lose...period...ur outta the league


close this shit...

KoNcEpT 10-07-03 06:51 PM

no not literally lol

Derive 10-07-03 06:58 PM

^^ur a fucking idiot....stop freeposting in here....damn ur gay

1-0 im winning...uppin

NewPort 10-07-03 07:19 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by -ShRAPneL-


People say my career is over...but here is a little clue
if indeed my career is over it would only be over you. . .
Nah.. Wasn't Feelin This Much 5/10

i dont have to try in this battle, im suprised your still around
this battle's like arms cut off cuz i got the win... hands down !
Played, but not bad 7/10

A.I. is your only accomplishment?! damn..... this kid's a slacker
heh, watch as i give HaZe a Big L..... like the mainstream rapper !
Ehh.. 5/10

your verses are BlAh...i told u u're garbage no need to ignore me
y? bother 2 talk about how wack u r, when ur verses.. do it 4 me !
Good Punch.. 7/10

you're outta my league!..i'm better than you..& your also outta
luck
imma hang this cat from a flag pole so that every one knows what's up !
Not A Bad Finisher.. 7/10

Overall - 31/50



<center> ..Next.. </center>

Quote:
Originally posted by Sonn-In Time

Shrap is known to lick Scrabble Boards in attempts to spit ill wordplay
This kid spits like a bitch..With all that dick in the way!
Didn't Flow Well At All .. 5/10

Givin head in the back of class is the only way your goin down in 'history'
Fear of getting 'kicked'..This Kat's left with more goosebumps than RL Stine mysteries!
[B] Not Good.. 5/10


Like Kurt Warner, Ima "Ram" ya chest and wear your heart on my sleeve
Shrapnel still in the league? Like opey without ho-hos its hard to believe
Herd The "ram" Before.. Not Bad Tho.. 6/10

Yeah Shrap spits ill... That explains how weekly you get worse...
About to son you worse...than if I let Camarac ghostwrite my verse
Good Punch.. 7/10

Brand the mark of a loser in your forehead,so Shrap can really burn-an-L
Its Killer Instincts,How bout you bitches learn how to spell!
Good... 7/10

Verbally abuse this bitch... Its rape how I"ll cover all the bases
My punches leave Shraps face more fucked up than typing with alternating cases
This Was Ight.. 6/10

Overall - 35/60





Purple Didn't Match His Lines, But I Guess
I Have A Difference Of Opinon Against CHrit Here..
Dunno.. Just THought Shrap Edged It here..

Vote - Shrap

Derive 10-07-03 07:21 PM

^^wtf....i swear everytime u vote...ur vote never makes since....u say my verse was better but vote for him?....wtf...w/e

1-1...uppin

13th Disciple 10-07-03 07:25 PM

actually....both of yall need to be out the league cuz both of
yall need to elevate....seriously......this shouldn't even be a
probation match....more like a....'Evolve is just kidding about u
actually being in the league match'...but.......Shrap came pure
shitty....seriously.....his best punch was..... Blah....10 lines
match it or whatever
......Sonn came less shitty than Shrap...
which isn't saying a whole lot....so....unfortunately i have to vote
so i'll go wit sonn-in-time...


but let me just add this in....i feel as though...after reading both
of ur verses......i gone blind....and now find it difficult to even
summon up the strength to drop a verse in my own battle.

MeNTiLL 10-07-03 07:31 PM

Shrap

People say my career is over...but here is a little clue
if indeed my career is over it would only be over you. . .
This line was aight...

i dont have to try in this battle, im suprised your still around
this battle's like arms cut off cuz i got the win... hands down !
Played seen it a lot of times

A.I. is your only accomplishment?! damn..... this kid's a slacker
heh, watch as i give HaZe a Big L..... like the mainstream rapper !
Blah...Ugly ass wordplay

your verses are BlAh...i told u u're garbage no need to ignore me
y? bother 2 talk about how wack u r, when ur verses.. do it 4 me !
Ehh...Not good

you're outta my league!..i'm better than you..& your also outta
luck
imma hang this cat from a flag pole so that every one knows what's up !
Didn't like it...Should of had a harder finisher

Overall - A lot of played and filler lines...

Sonn

Shrap is known to lick Scrabble Boards in attempts to spit ill wordplay
This kid spits like a bitch..With all that dick in the way!
Didn't like it...Weak

Givin head in the back of class is the only way your goin down in 'history'
Fear of getting 'kicked'..This Kat's left with more goosebumps than RL Stine mysteries!
I thought this was nice...Coulda been worded better tho...Still aight

Like Kurt Warner, Ima "Ram" ya chest and wear your heart on my sleeve
Shrapnel still in the league? Like opey without ho-hos its hard to believe
Blah...This was on the low side...

Yeah Shrap spits ill... That explains how weekly you get worse...
About to son you worse...than if I let Camarac ghostwrite my verse
I like the second line...Not the 1st

Brand the mark of a loser in your forehead,so Shrap can really burn-an-L
Its Killer Instincts,How bout you bitches learn how to spell!
This was aight...

Verbally abuse this bitch... Its rape how I"ll cover all the bases
My punches leave Shraps face more fucked up than typing with alternating cases
Blah...Didn't think this hit hard...

OverAll
I think Sonn aka Tim E. came with a better verse cuz i didn't really see that many played lines and his punches hit harder than Shraps...It seemed like Shrap didn't wanna win...

Vote = Tim E.

Derive 10-07-03 07:35 PM

3-1 Im winning...



uppin for votes....

Derive 10-07-03 08:43 PM

uppin for votes...cmon dont sleep on this......

13th Disciple 10-07-03 09:13 PM

don't sleep.....dawg...yall dropped early anyways...damn...get off
the net for a second

Axiom 10-07-03 11:52 PM

^LOL Word To 13...

Anyways... I Gotta Disagree With Most Of The Voters And Go With Auspicious On This... I Think Shrap Took This... Purple Did The Same Shit He Always Does And Used Played Gay Punches... Not Even Funny Anymore... Shrap's Punches Were Witty... Haven't Really Read Them Before... So Yea.

Vote=Shrap

Feeble Minded. 10-08-03 01:08 AM

ok im going with... neither.
purple will cry a lake and creat tributaries to the atlantic ocean if i vote against him (as he did when the other kid voted against him)... so i wont vote.

i will say this
don't use other peoples punches and consider it coming "played" and hope no one notices ur doin it. thats also known as cheating in my book.

for example -
shrap came with "id only be over u" line .. definitely seen it used by cquotient and another couple vets. and haze came with "head in class" "hokers in h school" line.
not sayin yall cheated, u may have, but may not..but just dont use similar lines as people.

may as well not waste a post and not vote so...

id vote shrapnel, but
since i said i wasnt voting..
thats just my honest opinion of who i thought won.

Evolve 10-08-03 09:00 AM

YOU FUCKING IDIOT... THE POINT OF BATTLES IS TO VOTE^^^^

Vote Shrapnel

i thought Shrap's was less played out of the two played verses...
even though they were both played.. i thought Sonn's was wack
Sorry Sonn... but you definately need to elevate....

As do you Shrap.. but you get my vote in this

KoNcEpT 10-08-03 09:04 AM

13th is right, but Haze flat out sucks...
but most people who know me know
that i can drop 10 better than this....

this battle was very wack but i still thought i
won though....

2-3 Haze....

Taktik 10-08-03 09:19 AM

Vote Shrap

This was very weak...........but in terms of "played" TimE came hella more...........dam.......i dont think i seen a battle with so many played lines...............

Shrap showed a couple signs of some dope lines.....more then i could say for Tim...........so therefore........thats why shrap got my vote..........less played, a few nice lines.....good flow

Evolve 10-08-03 09:34 AM

4-3 ... & i agree w/ Tak

LiB 10-08-03 10:37 AM

Not In The League... Vote Does Not Count

Evolve

Namco 10-08-03 12:51 PM

<---Capcom


I think Shrap took this one...even though like everyone else said, Both verses were Played, period...But shrap had the better of the played punches, plus I didn't like the fact that Tim E. rode CAM's dick in one of his lines...

Yeah Shrap spits ill... That explains how weekly you get worse...
About to son you worse...than if I let Camarac ghostwrite my verse
^Dawg don't ever admit openly that some1's better than u, ya only make yaself look worse.

Vote = Shrap

KoNcEpT 10-08-03 01:17 PM

Namco...LMAO

well since he is capcom

I win = )

5-3

Evolve 10-08-03 01:35 PM

Battle Closed

Koncept Wins & Remains In The League
Tim E. Tumurk (Sonn In Time) Is Out OF The League


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