COM vs X-Ecution
 

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yea im down this is ma check in...........

btw

all votes must b well explined no 1 line shyt.............1

i could be like you, spit some wack shit, but i couldnt wit help/
but then you'd just eat my shit...n be all full of youself/

With me laughin in the grass strapped with macks, packed to go/
this is the one and only way, I'll ever be clappin at your show!/

I'll kill you, bury your body in Memphis, so your future's Bleak/
Don't speak, you're like Monday through sunday, your shit is week/

The battle soars, with lyrical venom im leavin' you on the floor sore/
cause this bitch is on his last day of his period with no flow/

this is a murder the way i leave u with a few days-to-live/
they call me a judge the way I put death into sen-ten-ces/

I burn your mommas pussy coz I boast balls of flame
And like a white picket fence... your posts are all the same
Your gun has no effect… that’s why people fear me
I’m like a bag of salt; your slugs won’t come near me
You’re dreary; your rhymes have no meat like salads
I’ll Hack your left leg off coz I’m changing the balance
You get KO’ed so much it plays on your conscience
Ya battles get slept on… coz you’re always unconscious
The RB sponsors’s the only time you could rhyme sense
I’ll smash yo watch on your head so your embarrassments timeless

Weak Battle
Punches-Com (It was close)
Flo-Com
Struture-Com
Wordplay-Com (It was close)
Consistency-Com
Com edges out in everything (It looked like he wasnt even trying)
Vote=Com

Battle Was Really Weak...
I've Seen You Both Come Way Harder Before....

Punches-Tie
Flow-Tie
Wordplay-X
Vocab-Weak But COM
Overall Vote-X.....

It Was Weak...But It Was Close....
But I Was Feelin X's Verse More....

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stop sleepin more votes.....1

this battle bored me immensely
punches=tie
flow=x
vocab=com
metas=x
all else=x
jus not feelin any verse but liked x's more
vote=x

hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83865

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Weak battle...ashamed cuz this is two vets battlin too...Breakdown

Punches: X
Personals: None
Multis: COM
Flow: COM
Metas: X
wordplay: Tie

Vote = X

He came a lil bit harder than u on this one COM, but both of ya'll came surprisingly weak for the status that ya'll at.

yo u polled wrong!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ima get it fixed..........................1

fuck 100 characters................................

uppin this biatch..............
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Poll fixed...

While I am typing 100 characters...
Peep my battle with meks...

Yep....
I'll pry be back to vote when I have the time...

Removed my vote, just found out COM's in our crew now....,,............
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more votes people please stop sleepin~!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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ight... X's verse

i could be like you, spit some wack shit, but i couldnt wit help/
but then you'd just eat my shit...n be all full of youself/

Not a bad punch i liked it... a tad played but not bad 6/10

With me laughin in the grass strapped with macks, packed to go/
this is the one and only way, I'll ever be clappin at your show!/

^ Nice meta there i was feelin it 7/10

I'll kill you, bury your body in Memphis, so your future's Bleak/
Don't speak, you're like Monday through sunday, your shit is week/

Both were pretty good so i'ma give u 7/10

The battle soars, with lyrical venom im leavin' you on the floor sore/
cause this bitch is on his last day of his period with no flow/

This flowed horrible wit no metas 4/10

this is a murder the way i leave u with a few days-to-live/
they call me a judge the way I put death into sen-ten-ces/

Not bad Not great 5/10

29/50

Com's Verse

I burn your mommas pussy coz I boast balls of flame
And like a white picket fence... your posts are all the same

First line was played stay away from sex and momma punches but second was ill 6/10

Your gun has no effect… that’s why people fear me
I’m like a bag of salt; your slugs won’t come near me

Not bad... solid punch... 6/10

You’re dreary; your rhymes have no meat like salads
I’ll Hack your left leg off coz I’m changing the balance

Good wordplay decent punch 7/10

You get KO’ed so much it plays on your conscience
Ya battles get slept on… coz you’re always unconscious

This one is ight nothin special 5/10

The RB sponsors’s the only time you could rhyme sense
I’ll smash yo watch on your head so your embarrassments timeless

For a finisher it could have been better but it was still dope 6/10

30-50

After reviewing my hypothesis it shows that COM edged him by a tad bit... very close battle

PROPS to X that was major illness by both u... it wasn't no weak battle it was tight

Vote- COM

This battle seems kinda noobish but Com had much harder hitting disses and better wordplay, like the salt and slugs

good shit from Com
seen X spit better than this b4

VOte = Com

hit these battles up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83122

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82689

I think Com put together the tighter verse.

Better disses, quicker and faster wordplay.

X came cool as usual, but just got beat this time.
Kinda forced a line or two, and I think it hurt ya.
(The "sore/flow" line)

Great opener though, didn't close as well...

Shoulda made the closer about him but ya made it about yaself.

That's what I thought...

Peace

opener:tie
finisher:X
Punches-Com
Flo-Com
Struture-Com
Wordplay-Com

winner:com



aight



peace

Vote Don't Count
-Axe

this battle bored me immensely
punches=tie
flow=x
vocab=com
metas=x
all else=x
jus not feelin any verse but liked x's more
vote=x


Exactly what the dude 8 above me said. Nice but weak battle. X accled in more categories than CUM did. I mean Com :)... Simple mistake. So battle goes to X!

1 more vote and that settles the whooooooooooooooole

ball game...................1 more...........................1

how come i was winning 4-2 then youngwhitethug votes and its suddenly 4-4?????????????
this has been reported to IR, coz this is fuckin bullshit

I Just Checked All Votes... SHOULD Be 4-4... So I Dunno What You're Complaining About... Still 4-4.
-Axe

all those newbie votes should be deleted...
they never included punches or personals...
that's just whack.. they don't know how 2 vote...
just my opinion

good battle...but actually i thought X Ecution........

pulled this away from you COM.....just barely though........

this was a real good battle....no doubt......but i think........

X just had way more harder hitting punches.......

he stayed more consistent throughout his verse.......

COM...u had some good wordplay and good structure.........

but u just lacked on punches.....so my vote goes to........

X Ecution.....

good battle...stay up....

yep...
pz.....