Liba dee VS Da_Renegade
 

10-14 lines
all rule applies

drop in 20 mins

fa sho....respecting people to vote on this one...i gotta feeling that no1 will (LOL) no crew/hate/d/r.......drop.

respect

You've all come to witness Renegades assassination/
With this battle in commence you see his health deterioration/
Have a celebration, at this fuckwits funeral/
while i spit in his coffin and use his grave like a public urinal/
Professional Dick Ryder, They call him the RB bicycle/
Coz hes ridden so many kidds hes turning into Micheal (Jackson)/
Blows for votes, but he'll always suck at battlin/
Think he'd been sat on by Biggie, coz his rhymes have all been flattened/
Like a parasite he hangs around and feeds off RB's finest/
Thats another plus for me, and for this Bastard..its a minus/
He's a bitch on Easy E's he thinks hes elevating/
This cunt just got burned worse than he will at his cremation/
Rene's a fuckin lead balloon, he never 'rises' to the challenge/
He may be the PRINCE of milkin hoes, but he's the PAUPER boy of rapping/
Like a parasite,

(that 'like a parasite' line is NOT supposed to be on the end, it just ended up that way when i posted it so ignore it!Its supposed to be in the middle in the line 'Like a parasite he hangs around...' but not at the end)

thank you

How can this bitch elevate when I clipped both her wings?|
This merkin gon make her "give a fuck" for votes to win|
>>>Check her profile
2-4 means you half ill........half wack|
But your verse is like 'school lunches', 99% CRAP|
You, MJ and Hazy? Does RB stands for RETARDED BITCHES?|
Trust me that I'll leave her like Chucky's face with a hunnit stitches|
I'm ruthless, punches all up in your grill like toothpicks|
Thought y'sold your 'soul' to 'Bloodz' when 'stains' recolored y' new 'kicks'|

OK HERE DIS IS HONEST LIBA GOT DIS SHE HAD ALOT MRE STRUCTURE PACKED IN HER RAP N ALOT BETA PUNCHES DO RENES VERSE WAS OK IT DIDNT RLY HIT HARD UNLIKE LIBAS DISSES. HIT DIS UP N B HONEST THX http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83858 ...........................PZ

uppin for votes



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yo i cant vote but for what it is worth, i think renegade got this...it was short and sweet and got to the point. liba's verse was hard to follow and i found her ryhmes corny. noth def need to elevate.

^^^ i agree Rene's verse was short and sweet it was all that was needed to sway my vote in his direction. Both need to elevate.

Best Line -

2-4 means you half ill........half wack|
But your verse is like 'school lunches', 99% CRAP|

VOTE- RENEGADE

Yo this is the layout and fuckin newbs stop voting if ya can't poll are ya idiots well
LD= her verse was better overall but the punchlines she has used were played out and kinda weak
Rene= his verse overall wasn't that tight but i liked the metas and punchlines he dropped they standing out more and shit
Vote=Rene

k, uppin for mo votes

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uppin...honest votes only.......

lol god, i dint think i was that bad.....................

come on vote on this for either of us, eh heh!

n e 1 care to cast a vote on this, wont take a minute, but you'll be doing both of us a favour, be fair, no crew/hate/ or dick ryding. You know the rules, i'm sure. Thank you for being honest.

RESPECT

opener:renegade
closer:tie
wordplay:liba dee
structure:tie
flow:renegade
punches:tie
personals:renegade
wordplay:liba dee
my vote:renegade


hit this up peeps
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84191

uppin for more votes

lets get this thing crackin


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renegade didnt put much effort into this....if he had, he might of gotten my vote....

based on more material, a beefier verse, wit a quantity an quality punch ratio......ima have to give this to liba...

nuttin great from either by any means.....
vote-liba

carson...you didnt vote!!!!!!!!!

aagghhh!!!! some mod put the vote in for me? i aint being cheated outta a point!!!

uppin and a mod edit in a vote pleez.....

pleez check this owt thank you, i will return favours....look at carsonjets reply but he forgot to vote, thats why i'm down a point, so pleez dont forget.

libba i can tell you workin alot on shortening your bars ( your last verses had longer ones)

i dunt think it was your best but it wasnt your worse i apprecaite people who keep their original style

any ways moving on

You, MJ and Hazy? Does RB stands for RETARDED BITCHES?|

I OUGHT TO KIC KYA ASS FOR THAT
son of a bitch lmao
i aint nuttin like mj she beauty n no brains

damn you

but decent lines lmao

the only thing bout renagades is if you gona nwrite in that stle dont put CHECK HER PROFILE in the middle of your verse lol it looks tacky as fuck

vote libba dee for more creative and better written punches
libba please get away from that shorter structure it doesnt suit u

uppin this for more votes


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come on yall, vote this shit off man

let's get this thing cracking


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eh pleez dont sleep this is important, wnot take 2 mins to post a reason and drop an honest vote, i'l return favours fa sho, check this.

ima say renegade takes this, heres me breakdown.....

structure-liba
flow-tie
vocab-liba
wordplay-tie
punches-renegade
personals-renegade
overall-renegade

props to the both of ya, but ima say renegade takes this.....

peace........

Alright over all liba had more punches and better word play. Looks like renagade didn't really try at this but if he did he maybe woulda had my vote

Vote = Liba

lol
 

LOL word that line was funny, basic, but it won him the battle


Keep elivatin u two