King of Kings VS Pure Player69
 

10 lines max, all rule applies

verse due in 20 mins

blind spit

I'll slash-ur-knees, mutilate ur back-n-spleen, to leave u lookin' like sum1 managed to hack-ur-genes
Ur rhymes couldn't shine, even if u waxed-them-clean, u couldn't hit if i gave u a bat and let u whack-extreme
Call me raps cairopracter, when i make ur back-look-lean, crossdressing earned u the right 2 where a sash-4-queen
U couldn't be ill, even if u had aids then bashed-ur-meat, if u rapped visuals ur rhymes wud luk like plaque attacking-teeth
I'll silence ur words, like sum1 cracked-ur-speech, so even competing with helen keller wud be a master-feat
Ur verse is so wack, that it's requested-slaps, the only way u'd ever @#%$ me up is if u molested-rap
U couldn't bring illness, if ur rhyme had infected-rats, lets see how u hold a mic with ur arms-twisted-back
You'll never score, too many concepts in my words, i surround ya stereo types,you mono spitten ya cursed verse
Rap is like a race, I cruise by while I meditate, you gassed yourself up and you still can't accelerate
u an ILLITERATE BASTARD, your style aint even mastered, my @#%$ be spirtually blessed so you could say im pastured
Beating Xtra 2restrial is harder than climbing MT Everest, I'll Pop all pimples on ya head and make u drink the puss as a beverage
I verbalize paranormally while BJ holds battles in anticipation, gazing skyward as i descend from the clouds, buring spirit like acidic precipitation
I’ll break ur hands, causing ur writtens to seem kinda weak, and steal ur tonsils so u can easily swallow this defeat
Then circumvent ur weak tactics, keeping u dazed like hypnosis, then watch u crumble like cookies and divide like mitosis
Cursive-assertiveness, my verses-are-merciless, and my rhymes are tighter than a virgins-perked-cervix-is
This battle is wrong, like snow falling in a hundred degrees, cause this guy's win record is shorter than a midget down on his knees

ol skool yall Evan we da mastas

In reply to LyricalMasta? of Disasta:

So now you need someone else to write for you,
some guy named jon,
I bet he's white too,
Your new to this shit,
I can see,
Just look at my backup,
they all agree,
You think your all that,
While i think your shit,
Your so immature,
your still suckin on your mommas tit,
Yo, kid, stop playing this game,
cause your just gunna go down,
in one giant flame,
no-ones gunna care,
they're just gunna laugh,
because as you can see,
all my ryhmes are built with craft,
I take time, and entinty,
to finish these ryhmes,
and i've beat young jocks like you,
hundreds of times

sorry i forgot it was 10 lines max ill post anyther one............................................... .................................................. .................................................. ................

yo0o Ill put my gun in mouth n make u my SLAVE, i pack a punch more powerfull than a tidal-WAVE, u say u can battle? nigga is u freshout of a CAVE? ill take ya life after i take ya DEATH, ill send u to the penn where for once ull be called FRESH! ur lyrics r copied by some who coppied a COPPYER, i still desidin who's mom is SLOPPIER, go ahead try to listen to limp-BISKET, but i wouldnt risk IT, ill leave u wit holes in chest pale n cold in in a CASKIT, ill cary ur ball'z in a longaburger BASKET, ill turn ur voice box into silacone-PLASTIC, nigga i leave u in a puddle of ur own PAIN, ill cut ya head juss to steal that CHAIN, Nigaa ill say ur name in-VAIN, i will make u snort COCAIN, then ill make u giv it BACK, and boi it bettr be INTACT, cuz u kno im fo realfo a FACT! i strangled u wit da skill'z dat u LACKED, im not new to this GAME, i jus got a new NAME, im a freak wit TEMPA, ill kill u n say i neva MENT-A let u off dat EAZY

fuck that bullshit this thread was made at 4:58 est and u posted 5:07 est

the fuck outta here wit dat pre-written bullshit

and also thats waaay over 10 lines, either its not accepted


mods close this thread

im dealing wit a herb

look at dis herb

said sorry he'll post another at 5:09 est, and dropped another verse 5:10 est

WTF IS THAT BULLSHIT dawg?

the fuck outta here wit dat pre-written shit

you know, what, lemme hit dis herb up real quick, we all know those are some pre-written shit, especially by looking at the time interval between posts but wuteva

lemme keystyle some shit quick for dis faggot

Is like his souls "trapped between realms" cuz he's half bad, half good- (heaven & hell)
Laid out in da streest in69 positions is only time you've been to the hood-
How can you be a true "player" with 90% played out lines?
But you already got "pussy", its "under your belt" see them panty-lines?-


haha not even going hard, lemme spice it up a bit

He came back "from da hood" reaching in his pockets and all he felt was "noughts"- (nothing)
And you gon 6 more pre-written verses just to even the odds-
The way I throw so many punches it feels you got jumped 79 times-
Leave this man's fingers looking like permanent gang signs-


the fuck outta here wit dat pre-written bull

fucked up on 1 line

"and you gon need 6 more..."

forgot the need


gfhgfhgffffffffffffffffffffffffff

OMGGGG!!!!!


How can you be a true "player" with 90% played out lines?
But you already got "pussy", its "under your belt" see them panty-lines?-

^ That Killed it......

I’ll break ur hands, causing ur writtens to seem kinda weak, and steal ur tonsils so u can easily swallow this defeat
Then circumvent ur weak tactics, keeping u dazed like hypnosis, then watch u crumble like cookies and divide like mitosis
^ Good One!

I Think That King Killed it!

uppin for votes

i know i cant poll vote on others but, vote this up

lets end this herb's career real quick

uppin for votes

let's get this going ppl, what da dilly?



sgggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg

King Took This Easy..
Didn't Barely Even Bother
To Read That Other Kats.
Kings' Punches Kilt It

Vote - King

I Know I Cant Vote Yet.. But At Least I Took The Time
To Hit It UP.. So Please ..

RETURN THE FAVOR !!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84072

uppin for the third time

lets get some more votes ppl

numero 3

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both decent. king very elementary rhyming. but playa predictable.
vote playa
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wow, talk about dickride here lolol

this shit is like on PAGE 3, why would someone scroll all da way back just to vote on a battle???? lololol

jego..how can u say player is predictable and then vote for him.....

well....king took this easily...player's was all out of sorts...too mujch bullshit goin on...king had tight punches flow, and everything needed to win

vote-KofK

upping this battle 1

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King got this his metas were hot and overall verse shit he gots this cat word son yo this shit was poppin
Vote=King

come on yall can you guys vote on this? it has almost been a week since this shit is up

don't sleep on this battle man


uppin this again

(5)

come on yall hit this battle up yo, its just 3 mins out yer lives

uppin for the forth time

let's get some votes ppl!!

it's sad dat player writes to verses and still loses easily

tss....tss

kok wasnt that bad

Is like his souls "trapped between realms" cuz he's half bad, half good- (heaven & hell)
^^^played......
Laid out in da streest in69 positions is only time you've been to the hood-
^not bad
How can you be a true "player" with 90% played out lines?
^^lmao
But you already got "pussy", its "under your belt" see them panty-lines?-
^^lol


haha not even going hard, lemme spice it up a bit

He came back "from da hood" reaching in his pockets and all he felt was "noughts"- (nothing)
^^ nice
And you gon 6 more pre-written verses just to even the odds-
^lol
The way I throw so many punches it feels you got jumped 79 times-
^okay line
Leave this man's fingers looking like permanent gang signs-
^lol
>>>>>>>>>>>>player<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<
yo0o Ill put my gun in mouth n make u my SLAVE
^^ weak
iur lyrics r copied by some who coppied a COPPYER
^^you really need to elevate kid

caskit doesnt ryhme wit biskit.....you must b really white to think that


punches = kok
flow = kok
personals = kok
multis = player
consistency = kok
structure = none (both needs improvement)

both needs elevation tho

vote= kok

this was a one sided battle, king takes this easily.....heres my breakdown.....

structure-king
flow-king
vocab-king
worplay-tie
punches-king
personals-king
overall-king

props to the both of ya, but ima say king takes this.....

peace......