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X Ecution \/s Lethargic
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Here we go...gonna try a new style
Lethargic Mindwalker, I'll split your head and show you a mind trick/ Rhymin sick, like when X was chokin, and gave himself the Hind-Lick/(Heimlich Maneuver) It's time kid, hit the hourglass, sands still givin X mirages and delusions/ Mass confusion, if he's so deadly why am I still A-Waitin the X Ecution?/ It's true shit, fuck the avy, I'll defuse any bomb your throwin at me/ Laughing, Kick him out of the thread, like Scooby Doo when I Scrap-E/(They kicked Scrappy out the Van) It's sad see, he thought I defined my name, and found out the truth/ Like when your REPPEN WARLORDS, but the Warlords ain't reppin you/ Keep steppin fool, and I'll vaccinate your illness, perplex the Diss-Ease/ Follow Xzibit's advice on punchin and show X to tha Z's/ Good luck |
sry ma computer kicked me off then was gay
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Slicin up Master Cards is the only way yu Cut MC’s/ ya rhymes throw the end of the alphabet at RB they way we all catch Z's/ Yo I Disperse-herses, plague you with the worst-curses/ You got limp'-verses like imitating Fred Durst on-purpose/ Im lyrically Start-Jumping with mics strapped tight to my head to keep my Rhymes-Pumping/ Your ill..syke, ya aint Tight your so shyt dawg even your lines-are-dumping/ Cuz just like faulty carpenters, his skills don’t measure up/ Like a prostitute with no eyes, he's blind at the fact he sucks/ His bloods gushin, claimin to be hard and now he got a ripped stomach/ Since the only Piece he ever held...was a 9 of 'McNuggets'/ |
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Stop sleepin on the battle folks........we need some votes....uppin(1)
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It's time kid, hit the hourglass, sands still givin X mirages and delusions/
Mass confusion, if he's so deadly why am I still A-Waitin the X Ecution?/ ^That line did it for me.....Overall I think Lethargic won this with a better flow, personals, Punchlines,....everything X I've seen some of your other battles and I've seen u come way harder than that.... Vote = Lethargic Hit my battle up in my sig wit an honest opinon aight? l l V |
This was a pretty good battle i thought...Lethargic your new style is pretty good..both had good punches, and flow was good by both as well..but i think X took this one though he had harder punches i thought...so my vote goes to X..but props to both.
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yoo i think x-ecution got this, both verses were kinda weak. I think x had the harder punches though, both flows were ok. vote=x-ecution----------yo hit my battles up in my sig..thankxxxxxx
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This was one-sided as a motherfucker...
To me, X killed this with wordplay and punches. The other guy (no beef, man...just how it is) came with forced rhymes (hind lick), WTF? lines like the Scooby Doo one, and finished with a very weak closer. Sorry, man. That's what happened. X's "dumping/pumping" bar was the only thing in his verse I didn't like... Everything else hit hard with humor. The "nugget" closer was hilarious. I like laughing. Peace |
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Punches=X ecution Personals=X ecution Wordplay=Lethargic Complexity=Lethergic Cretivity=X ecution Multis=Both Vocabulary=Lethargic Structure=X ecution Overall=X ecution |
Uppin 4 votes
The stupid 100 characters thing really erks me...100 characters....100 more...a few more hundred? Maybe now? |
X ecution needs to work on better wordplays (no offense)
Fred durst -> limp yayaya, but whats a limp verse??? okay wordplays from X, lethargic's verse started okay, but this line ended it "if im already dead why am i still awatin the x ecution" hahaha Vote = LEthargic harder hitting disses, more comlpex and creativity |
ur a newb n dont understand things so u didnt get that line go home..............=)............more votes..............1
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I got the line u retard? and noob? bitch plzzz, its just "new" to the site", i been doing text loong time ago
i guess wit all da loses mad u noobish, it doesnt matter if Fred Durst matched up with the word limp the line was just wack, lolol i think YOU be the need of elevation and if u got something to say, we can settle it over a battle when i get some votes on my shit, thinkin 0-0 means noob means your da noob lolol get some skills, you suppose to be a vet and u rocking wack lines |
nice shit X
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Nice Shit....
But X Got This Hands Down..... ::BreakDown:: Punches=X Flow=Tie Wordplay=X Multies=Neither Overall Vote=X No Hate.... But X Ripped Lethargic.. ...................................... |
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