LM vs Fatal D
 

Quick six lines,
No d/r and all that stuff,
No time limit but don't take ages,
All votes must be explained

Good luck....
I'm droppin first so here it is....

So you think your a dope MC?/
Don't kid yourself, you cant string two words together effectively/
You need to get your ass in the W.E.C hastily/
And re-pay visits frequently/
Take time to elavate your skills drastically/
Then maybe they'll be a point of you battlin me/.


Peace!!!!!

I know i said no time limit but try not to take the piss. Hurry up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It dont look like this little herb is gonna show up so maybe i should just get the win coz he's a no show. He accepted my call aswell the cheeky little bastard

yo
im checkin in
sorry about the delay ive been busy at the minute
words out that you bin dissing me sayiin im a no show
i realize where you coming from but dere aint no reason to take it up wid the mods cus im late
...mentionin my name n shit
man you need some patients
any way no hard feelings cus i wud be pretty pissed if i were you
.......D

yo im a drop in a minute
yo offline at the minute so when you come back online then well start uppin fo votes

Yo listen up LM, wheres the O P Q//
Its only taken me one line, to destroy and make fun of you//
I aint the herb, you are, ill roll you up and toke you//
throw in some of my own shit, and jus a whiff of it will choke you//
Leave you standing there with cotton mouth, impossible to spit//
You realise now afta i done won, YOU CAN'T HANDLE MY SHIT!!//

LOLOL funny battle

This musta been a real blind spit

Anyway Vote-Fatal

He had like 1 punchline and the other dude had nun, weird battle and it was hard to come to a descision but i chose Fatal

Fatal when u see this hit this up wit an honest one ok man

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84295

uppin fo votes............................................. ..............
or coments or some shit
thnx
........................D

.................yo can i get some votes or some feedback in here plz
........thnx
......................D

wow, wiieerd battle, but i'd say fatal got this tho, verse better than the other's

1

Vote = Fatal

peep ma sig

both is in need of serious elevation

but i give this to Fatal for da better overall verse, not much can be said cuz both verse lacked in a lot of areas

VOte =Fatal

hit these battles up

Bionicle VS C-Drama
Lyrical Cyanide VS C-Drama

thnx for the feed back i no my verse could be improved but it was because his rule was 6 lines and you cant really do much in 6 lines
thts why this battle is so weird
thnx fo all the coments tho
appreciated .................D

weak battle

fatal wins

flow-tie..only 6 lines
vocab-tie
personals-none
wordplay-fatal
punches-fatal
overal-fatal

thnx fo all the feed back really apreaciate it
still looking fo any more coments or votes thanx
................D

yo needin some more input, coments votes and opinions
i appreciate every 1 even if it is a dig at me
thnx...............
.......................D

Seriously don't have to explain who won, this...

But flow was even creativity went to fatal, and fatal D murdered the other cat... in every category....

My Vote = Fatal D

Pce

yo tight battle, kinda short. nice opening by lm, i like that shit. but overal fatal took it cuz he had more punches and shit.


vote fatal

check this shit yo
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...8281#post828281
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84270

thnx alot for the coments and votes i appreciate them alot
still uppin for one more honest vote so i can close this battle
come on ppl vote
thnx ..........D

fatal D won this battle easily, it was ano contest, better flw punches, structure ( although flow and structure on both were not up to par).........bothe need to elavate and read tutorials in WEC....no beef but I've read them and they've helped


Vote Fatal D


Hit this up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83990

Thanx