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Eye4NeYe......Vs.......Mentally Kursed
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10 Lines No C,H,D/R, Quoted Votes No Recycling Blind Spit Due 30 Minutes From Check In Good Luck |
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Mentally HopeIn He Words Got Me Shook And Concerned
Supposedly Kursed But Even Your Avy Looks Like A Nerd You Cleanin Out Ya Closet, Bitch I Be Keyin' Up Ya Face Lift Sayin You Lethargic Wit Ya "Key" Would Be An Understatement "It's" Gibberish, Funny You Try'ta Be Hot When You Deliver It Forget It Kid, Work Domino's If You Want Heat Wave Privaleges Ignorant, This Bitch Mental Dope? Peeps Dont Even Consider It Merkin Shit?, You Not On My Page Givin It, Your Livin In The Bitch Spit It Belligerent, No1's Stoppin Me, You Aint Holdin Shots Ta Me Killer Spit, My Punches Got Ya Hed Spinnin Like Moldin Pottery |
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^^^already told you wha happen
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Aight check it
You "dead on arrival" like premature babies wit distorted lungs// "Torture ya mouth" like drownin your windpipe in saliva and hung from a tongue// Collapse your life like broken lungs rip your veins out until no blood remain// Infill red dot aimed to split ya thoughts and shatter your brain splittin ya crane// You get "whats cumin to you" like playmates in bed, sex in thread// Like Sean Paul, watch bullets stick to your brain like glue leavin you dead// Saliva cloggin ya windpipe, like mixin wit spit, you choked// Ill leave ya jaw like a Tampon period, bloody and swollen, then broke// Pass you a L to the left of ya seven makin you meet the number two// Duckin, like ya crew leader bein called out for slips, not comin through// *Errors* |
hm..........it took you 2 days to right that>?.........damn thats ass..........well ne way.............uppn this bitch...................................
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LOLLLL after all that tyme lol.. this shit was obvious
eye4neye= good m jursed = stil spit like a noob Eye got this 1 easy, better flow, punches everythin wasted shit reallly..... vote - Eye4nEye |
It wont let me polll
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i'll break it down
Flow Eye Vocab Mentally Structure Eye Multies Mentally Enjoyability Eye Punches Eye close battle but i'm gonna go with eye on this one for a better verse in most catergories |
Close one here...
Kursed came with a few played concepts... Eye had a pretty nice flow.. Pucnhes were decent... Vote- Eye... Peep my merking against dw... lmao |
Pretty good battle here....Breakdown
Punches: Eye Flow: Eye Metas: Tie Wordplay: None Multis: Eye Personals: MK Vote = Eye He Just had the overall better verse..MK u need to change ya structure up and try to shorten them bars pimpin... |
upppin like a wonderbra!
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Mentally HopeIn He Words Got Me Shook And Concerned
Supposedly Kursed But Even Your Avy Looks Like A Nerd *LOL , GOOD PUNCH , FUNNY ASS SHIT 8.5/10 You Cleanin Out Ya Closet, Bitch I Be Keyin' Up Ya Face Lift Sayin You Lethargic Wit Ya "Key" Would Be An Understatement *NICE LINE , NICE RYTHMES , CLEVER SHIT 8/10 "It's" Gibberish, Funny You Try'ta Be Hot When You Deliver It Forget It Kid, Work Domino's If You Want Heat Wave Privaleges *LOL , ANOTHER GEM , YOUR ON ROLL KID 8.5/10 Ignorant, This Bitch Mental Dope? Peeps Dont Even Consider It Merkin Shit?, You Not On My Page Givin It, Your Livin In The Bitch *AIIGHT SLOWED DOWN A LITTLE , STILL DECENT VERSE 7/10 Spit It Belligerent, No1's Stoppin Me, You Aint Holdin Shots Ta Me Killer Spit, My Punches Got Ya Hed Spinnin Like Moldin Pottery *NICE LINE , DECENT CLOSE , NICE MULTIES AND FLOW 8/10 40/50 80% Leavin you "dead on arrival" like premature babies born wit distorted lungs// "Torture your mouth" like a esophagus drowned in saliva and hung from a tongue// *AIGGHT , LIKE IT BETTER 2ND TIME I READ IT , CLEVER SHIT 8/10 Collapse your life like disabled lungs, rip your veins out until no blood remains// Infill red dot aimed to split ya thoughts and shatter your brain splittin your crane// *LUNGS AGAIN ? , AIGHT LINE GOOD FLOW , KINDA PLAYED RYTHMES 7/10 You get "whats cumin to you" like playmates in bed, raped in a thread// Like Sean Paul, watch these bullets stick to your brain like glue leavin you dead// *NICE RYTHME , GOOD WORDPLAY , TOP HALF WAS BETTER 8/10 Saliva cloggin your windpipe, like drownin in spit, you choked// Punches leave your jaw like a Tampon period, bloody and swollen, then broke// *PLAYED OUT , SIMILAR TO YUR 1ST LINE , LOL AT BOTTOM HALF 7/10 Ill pass you a L to the left of your seven makin you meet the number two// Duckin like your crew leader bein called out for slips, not comin through// *GOOD PUNCH , HEAVY , DECENT OVERALL , NICE FLOW 8/10 TOTAL 40/50 80 % TIE However , since it took 3 days to write this ........................... Imma Have to go with Eyes no beef , close battle , peace to both ce |
ONCE AGAIN , WONT LET ME POLL VOTE , I APOLOGIZE ........
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its cool dawg...................uppn this jawn.......
***********************************8 ***********************************8 thanx fo feedback...and a nice explained vote. |
jesus christ.............i didnt know this battle was A Serta......
stop bullshittin and sleepin lets get some votes here. uppn./\ |
Aight battle, but I think that Eye got this...he just had better shit...mentally kursed, your shit was aight...but you always talk about ripping out their guts, cutting their head off...you had some good wordplay, but eye had the wordplay AND the flow...
VOTE=EYE4NEYE |
BREAKDOWN:Duh duh duh...(suspenseful muzik comez on)
structure-Eye flow-both personalz-Mentally punchez-Eye enjoyability-Eye muttiez-Eye overall-Eye |
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MK became too repetitive in his verse, talkin about windpipes and lungs 1 too many times
and the disses didnt hit that hard Eye slacked off in some parts but his disses came out hotter Flow = Eye Punches = Eye Structure = Eye Creativity = MK Wordplay = MK Vote = Eye hit this battle up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85442 |
werd i think eye got this 1 also.......
mentally....u came decent homie...but........ definitly not ur best......i just felt that eye......... came wit harder hitting punches...and...... better usage of wordplay.....so my vote........ goes to...EYE4NEYE...... good battle..stay up.... yep.. pz.... |
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