Taktik(WL) vs Feeble Minded(DM)
 

Warlords vs Diamond Mindz

*Check In Due: Friday 10-10-03 11:59 pm Eastern Time
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*Verses Due: Saturday 10-11-03 11:59 pm Eastern Time
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*10 Lines - no more, no less.
*No-Shows count in automatic DQ .
*No crew votes .
*No Voting requirements other then .....try to explain
*No quoting previous votes .

Checkin In Feeble



GL

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checking in .
good luck taktik
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yea i posted one minute afte the time limit. but im lettin him have a chance.. cuz to win that way is gay .
ill post right after u ...

Time I Flip shit on This Dawg like Snoopy Denomenators!.......
What's funnier? You being ill or appointed moderator?..............
So after you lose for the second time..QUIT...or so I'm hoping......
Or at least change ya Avi...looks like you into Virgin Anal Probing!......
This cat is straight feline...check-ups the only time he seek a Vet.......
I've seen some odd shit n' Canada...yet you the biggest Beaver yet!!......
Remember Exec's? How you were second to me? Come'on think.....
Couldn't Run the Boards if you did Laps on Horizontal Hockey Rinks!!........
Testin' myself with illness high is just inflicting your health......
Shit you like Horny Handicaps...can't even really beat your own self!......

i thought ya title was funny - but now ur names ruined, guy
cuz if killing herbs is ya job... then u better commit suicide!
i sell crackers - & i do mean tak so read while i tell factors
cuz only tak tik i've heard of.. is kit kat spelled backwards *
& hoe i'll ruin you - if you still get dickrode till ya cock hurts -
so its no surprise.. that i'm killing tik like broken clockwork
my shocks hurt, & its not we hate u, u just gotta build a rep
^just kidding... come back w/ skills and then rb will respect
until then leave & its cuz u stall shit, while i come w/ all fists
& cuz ur rbs reject.. like telemarketers from the dont call list!

yea...now vote now@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@l

Breakdown

Punches=Taktik
Personals=Taktik
Wordplay=Feeble
Multis=Feeble
Creativity=Taktik
Complexity=Taktik
Structure=Feeble
Vocabulary=Taktik

Overall=Taktik

Good shit dawg

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Vote-taktik
punches-tak
similes/metas-tak
personals-tak
vocab-tak
flow-both


Easy win for taktik, thought feeble was better than this

Who ever told me battle records dont matter were right

peace

Break

Punches-TAKTIK!!!
Personals-Feeble
Wordplay-Feeble
Multis-Feeble
Flow-Feeble
Struct-Feeb
Vocab-Taktik
Played Lines-Feeble(only 1)

Overall feeble... i think that suicide shit was crazy and i thought that his flow was a lot better than taktiks o yeh the kit kat was hott 2...no hate no dr
hit this up plz dont sleep
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=79228

wow... can we get some REAL votes here?
i mean, thanx for voting yal bt surely vets do still exist??@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@

Aight....

Nice battle here...
Expected Taktik to take it easily...
But feeble came nice...

However... Feeble used some played ass lines going about TakTik's name...

Kit Kat and clockwork are played...

Vote Taktik

Peep me vs Avalon
You forgot to poll Feeble

that candy bar line i used was definitely not played -
im now told the cloc line was...but how could ihave nown...
but the candyone was defintely original...

^^^^ iight i took time out to vote now can yall return the favor
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=79228

Uppin..............and for those who voted but havent polled do so if you can

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1


Drop an honest vote here and I'll return the favor

Fuck Off^^^^^^^^ Dick Ryder.....how bout vote then drop a link fag

Anyways UPPIN 4 VOTES

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no now that u said that he'd just vote against you..lol...
so he cannot vote .@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@

alright...in all honesty...ur both ill....
both merked me.....not sayin much either.....anyways....

i have seen alot better from feeble.....
lil disapointed...thought u'd bring ur A game....u didn't...

Taktik's punches an personal's hurt u major......
very tuff to recover from his drop....an u didnt...

no beef....pc*1*
vote taktik.......
(any one else notice all the vets have shortened there lines drastikly?....)...i think its a good thing.....alot of us have elevated....an it shows.....

ok breakdown

punches: taktik
flow: both but taktik just barely edges it
wordplay: feeble
multies: feeble
structure: feeble
vocab: taktik
complexity: taktik


made me laugh harder: taktik

final: Taktik


Taktik= your shit was funny has hell you didnt get me lost at all but of course your punches gave you a the win plus makin me laugh and your flow gave you the win also

Feeble Minded= yours was not has funny has taktik but still i did laugh, you didnt get me lost either

but taktik just came to hard

there you have it

...i just said you cannot vote = you cannot vote . -feeble

..go away.............................................. ...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

i think taktik got it. i loved that beaver line for some reason. lol. good stuff from both. ive seen feeble come alot harder. didnt really like some of the lines...few were played. some nice originals though. vote=TikTak

yep...i totally agree wit everyone else.......

taktik got this shit hands down...werd up....

he stayed consistent throughout his verse.......

he had harder hitting punches....and better usage.......

of wordplay also......feeble....ur verse really lacked.......

a lot folk...so my vote goes to Taktik......

yep..
pz....