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Avalon .|v.s|. Bi0niclE
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.| due 45 mins. from check in |. .| no crew votes |. .| 900 post to vote |. .| or mods |. .| no freepostin |. .| D/Q'd if don't make the due time |. |
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900 posts to vote..? Neither one of us has 900 posts... together... LMAO... that's funny...
12-5... that's right... Av's wins are always up to date, While you're still tryin to load your... WIN. 98'... recyclin whore... sick rhyme never pass this chump, everything you drops been used... 10 times in the last 2 months... your fightin with hope, ya might win'd if I choke, but your still as lethal as james bond... with his license revoked... no stoppin till this scrub is banned and hatin whoever, Av'll break the clutch so bad his sex drive'll need public transportation to put it together... ur horrible lookin... ugly as sin... and kid, you can't hide from the truth... although the truth wishes ya did... talk wordplay... see if you can get this herb, I can fill ya frame with bullets... better than ms word... and there you have it people... Bye now... *waits to see what happens* (I hit submit reply on accident...) |
.| shootin pussies like Avalon, leavin with the rounds vacant |.
.| av loves bein rich!, theres no need to show how this clowns taken |. .| this nut is butt, but he cant stress enough that merk squad is back |. .| ya record's lame n Av's wack, cus the online users panel is the only place ur name has impact |. .| he's still game? I'd say a baller but a pump is somethin he can't simply afford |. .| nomination? it's a shame this so called legend isn't mentioned in the emcee awards |. .| but whatever the cause this nimrod who does rim jobs just for net friends |. .| Av's career is down the mountain side to show this is where his ledge-ends |. .| Av's 22, ur not black jack! ur secretly a typist what kind of life is that? |. .| it's a crisis when the only time ur shootin lines is when ur snipin crack |. .| just to offend ya, u just a herb who tends to be longing the centa |. .| cus u missed ur chance to blow up durin the embassy bombings in Kenya |. |
Umm yeah...
Ave takes this one with better punches period... Bionicle seemed forced in places ur horrible lookin... ugly as sin... and kid, you can't hide from the truth... although the truth wishes ya did... ^^^ Seriously... That killed it... Vote Av... And dont even bitch about me being in Merk... Everyone thats been here knows... Merk Squad isnt a crew... Its a profession |
.| omfg |.
.| not only am i gonna bitch about u bein in merk |. .| i'm gonna bitch about u votin 1 mintue after i post |. .| u don't even deserve to be a mod |. .| i'm demandin that vote to be removed becus u d/r av |. |
No d/r there....
I read his verse right after he dropped it... Then read yours right after you dropped... Av came with less played concepts... Hitting harder with his punches... If you really want I'll come back and break the shit donw line by line.. |
.| oh now why'd u go and vote |.
.| i bet chrit just deletes it becus of the rules |. .| but it's called honesty chrit, learn it |. |
Yeah!
I have more than enough posts to vote! How fuckin special am I? Breakdown... Little less than ultra mega, but it'll explain things... Multi's: Clearly Bionicle Flow: Real close, but Avalon took this. Metas: Pretty much a tie here Wordplay: Ever so slightly to Bionicle Personals: Bionicle Complexity: Avalon Punches: Avalon And just for kicks... Humor: Avalon ("truth wishes ya would" was fuckin great!) Damn! Factor: Avalon Opening Bar: Avalon Closing Bar: Avalon So it be. Peace |
1-0... Bio kids vote doesn't count... no where near 900... Chrit break down ya vote... fa sho...
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actually since you made the thread aren't you dq'd by your own rules..? 45 mins from check in... you told me as soon as you made it... hummmmmmmmmmm...
and I leave the thread now... |
i beg to differ with chrit
flow-i rapped both verses to a beat...bionicles fit more... consistency-bio humor-av punches-both personals-av wordplay-bio creativity-bio complexity-av structure-both similies-av multis-blah not alot from neither overall-bio good shit from u both though just thought bio came harder |
.| actually i made it i think on the exact second of the limit |.
.| so no |. .| i keep my rules |. |
thread made 3:08 pm...
verse dropped 4:12 pm... with a 45 min time limit..? but nevermind... and still it's 1-1... |
.| i said 45 mins from check-in |.
.| which is after we both checked in |. .| i looked at your check in time |. .| i didn't miss it |. .| another thing is it's actually 2-1 for some reason |. .| but enough freepostin |. .| let the votes flow |. |
Actually 2-1
I'm beaking down veres now... 12-5... that's right... Av's wins are always up to date, While you're still tryin to load your... WIN. 98'... Decent opener.... recyclin whore... sick rhyme never pass this chump, everything you drops been used... 10 times in the last 2 months... Good punch here... nicely set up your fightin with hope, ya might win'd if I choke, but your still as lethal as james bond... with his license revoked... Nice punch with good worplay... no stoppin till this scrub is banned and hatin whoever, Av'll break the clutch so bad his sex drive'll need public transportation to put it together... First line was eh... but second was nice... ur horrible lookin... ugly as sin... and kid, you can't hide from the truth... although the truth wishes ya did... Best bar in the battle... hands down talk wordplay... see if you can get this herb, I can fill ya frame with bullets... better than ms word... Nice closer... good wordplay yet again .| shootin pussies like Avalon, leavin with the rounds vacant |. .| av loves bein rich!, theres no need to show how this clowns taken |. Weak here... try at a punch on line 2... .| this nut is butt, but he cant stress enough that merk squad is back |. .| ya record's lame n Av's wack, cus the online users panel is the only place ur name has impact |. First line sucked.. second wasnt bad .| he's still game? I'd say a baller but a pump is somethin he can't simply afford |. .| nomination? it's a shame this so called legend isn't mentioned in the emcee awards |. Hmm... first line was weak again... Second was a decent personal... .| but whatever the cause this nimrod who does rim jobs just for net friends |. .| Av's career is down the mountain side to show this is where his ledge-ends |. Try at some wordplay here.. punch just didnt connect .| Av's 22, ur not black jack! ur secretly a typist what kind of life is that? |. .| it's a crisis when the only time ur shootin lines is when ur snipin crack |. Second line was played as hell... .| just to offend ya, u just a herb who tends to be longing the centa |. .| cus u missed ur chance to blow up durin the embassy bombings in Kenya |. Not bad... ya best bar... Av still wins for reasons stated above.... |
This battle was... blah; expected better from both sides..
Avy alot of ur punches seemed to forced; tyed 2 be funny too much; but THIS one worked like fuck ur horrible lookin... ugly as sin... and kid, you can't hide from the truth... although the truth wishes ya did... ^LMAO @ that 1 Bion... ur wasn't as forced, but more newbeeish like ur 2nd bar... WTF was that? elevate that shit; altho again w/you one bar did stand out: .| but whatever the cause this nimrod who does rim jobs just for net friends |. .| Av's career is down the mountain side to show this is where his ledge-ends |. ^LOL i been lookin 4 a "Legend" punch too... dayum! right breakdown incase u pussies get mad.. Flow - Both sucked Punches - Av, even tho sum were.. blah Wordplay - Bion, no doubt Meta's - None... bion im not gonna count ur 3rd line as a meta.. its hella wack! Personals - Bion. av lacked them well i thought it'd go the other way.. but afta lukn @ this i gota say bion JUSS clenched the win VOTE - BIONICLE |
HAND'S DOWN BIO CAME READY TO ATTACK AND WAS MORE ON POINT WITH THE FLOW SCHEME FROM THE GET GO. . .AV I DUNNO WHAT'S GOIN ON WIT YOU MAN THIS IS THE SECOND TIME I'VE SEEN YOUR BATTLE AND IT'S JUST LACKIN MOTIVATION IN ORIGINAL CONCEPTS HAVING WRITTER'S BLOCK ?. . .SUPPOSE TO BE HEADS YOU SHOULD BE OWNIN STOP SLEEPING SON. . .FILLER & STRUCTURE HURT YOU IN THIS MAINLY OTHER WISE I WOULD GIVEN THIS A TIE MAYBE. . .NOT THAT BIO WAS MUCH BETTER I JUST THINK HE OVERCAME THIS WITH A BETTER RHYME SCHEME
VOTE=BI0 |
Breakdown
Avalon 12-5... that's right... Av's wins are always up to date, While you're still tryin to load your... WIN. 98'... ^^this opener was aight..decent way to start ya verse recyclin whore... sick rhyme never pass this chump, everything you drops been used... 10 times in the last 2 months... ^^lol....funny, and nice flow your fightin with hope, ya might win'd if I choke, but your still as lethal as james bond... with his license revoked... ^^damn.....nice punch here no stoppin till this scrub is banned and hatin whoever, Av'll break the clutch so bad his sex drive'll need public transportation to put it together... ^^funny, but not too hard-hitting ur horrible lookin... ugly as sin... and kid, you can't hide from the truth... although the truth wishes ya did... ^^wow....best bar of this battle......nicest punch I seen in a while t alk wordplay... see if you can get this herb, I can fill ya frame with bullets... better than ms word... ^^nice closer Overall-9.5/10 Bionicide- .| shootin pussies like Avalon, leavin with the rounds vacant |. .| av loves bein rich!, theres no need to show how this clowns taken |. ^^weak opener..... .| this nut is butt, but he cant stress enough that merk squad is back |. .| ya record's lame n Av's wack, cus the online users panel is the only place ur name has impact |. ^^setup bad, punch was decent, still weak .| he's still game? I'd say a baller but a pump is somethin he can't simply afford |. .| nomination? it's a shame this so called legend isn't mentioned in the emcee awards |. ^^weak attempt at a personal.... .| but whatever the cause this nimrod who does rim jobs just for net friends |. .| Av's career is down the mountain side to show this is where his ledge-ends |. ^^ok....looks like you're picking it up a bit .| Av's 22, ur not black jack! ur secretly a typist what kind of life is that? |. .| it's a crisis when the only time ur shootin lines is when ur snipin crack |. ^^decent... .| just to offend ya, u just a herb who tends to be longing the centa |. .| cus u missed ur chance to blow up durin the embassy bombings in Kenya |. ^^I heard this before...nice punch anyways... Overall-6/10 Avalon won this easy Vote=avalon |
i think bio got this one by a hair.......
all these kids sayin avalon got this easy....... is got a serious reading problem....... this battle was closer than i expected........ av took it in puches...but thats really all i saw....... in ur verse.....Bio got everything in every other catagory....... but like i said...a real good battle guys.....but i was...... kinda just feelin Bio's verse more than i was av's...... so my vote goes to Bio...... good battle...stay up..... yep... pz..... |
actually....av took this wit way better wordplay and disses....that
shit was mad funny.....bio came nice too...but av out punched him.... vote=av |
ur horrible lookin... ugly as sin... and kid,
you can't hide from the truth... although the truth wishes ya did... talk wordplay... see if you can get this herb, I can fill ya frame with bullets... better than ms word... ~~~ ^ those 2 lines took it for av he came wit some hard punches like those 2 and the james bond one even tho its a lil played i liked it.......bio......ur stuff was ok but it wasnt to sharp n on point ya punches lacked a lil........iight.....1 |
VOTE - AV
Betta Punches, Wordplay Nd Flow . . . Bio's Verse Seemed Force . . . Good Shit Tho Each Had A Few Quotable Lines . . . Good Battle Basically Av Juss Out-Punched U . . . Everythin Else Wuz Even Tho I'm Not Poll Vote'n |
*wonders what's really goin on*
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1 vote to go... this is the most lop sided battle ever...
If you're known on Elite you know why... *shakes head and walks away* |
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Avalon Would've Easily Taken This If You Had More Personal Punches
I Mean Clearly You Had None Bionicel Only Won This Cause Of His Personals I Mean "Av's career is down the mountain side to show this is where his ledge-ends." Haha That Had Me Laughin, That Line About The True Wishes Wasnt Half Bad Av But I Dunno If It Isn't Personal It Just Doesn't Cut It For Me You Know Your Generic Punches I Didn't Feel Em' Much Vote - Bionicel |
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