The Painter gladiator
 

The Invincible
I scribble paint invisible, spiritual poltergeist rhymer
Artisitic ghost writer, the drifter mic tounge tier
Im the horseback flame rider flied by the unicorn guider
Ring-leader strider gladiator, Im da major arena life-taker
Frequencies soars ground shakers, the sound barrier breaker
Opponants get cut like tokens, bleeping forgive me
Like old aged modems
You cant compete with my band of broadband liquid swords
You get tangled within my cables and locked within my fluid force
Titan lion jaws, I clash horns with taurus with brute force torture
I mute shit-talkers by drowning them in atlantis's deep waters
Reappearing air-merging, transporting at high turbulance
Turning the earths crust with my holy verse cursing
I be the meta-physical person
I take flight beyond the margin, I'll be bombarding
The target on A4 with my brainstorm arsenal
If my pen's empty, that means my thoughts are at full



RoA - Reformation of Artistery
Painting pictures with words

nice

Structure was good,...and ur inner mesage was nice man , ...wit some hot vocab , combined wit a nice flow this was a decent drop :)

Props my homie.

thanx, stillin w8in for replies

I LIKED IT A LIL SHORT BUT STILL A GROOD DROP AND THE MESSAGE WAS THERE

True, the message really got across in this drop, shit was mos def hot. Keep it up and if you could PLEASE peep my new post " Wondering mind"...it would be most appreciated, 1

thanx, kinda not feeling the one liner replys lol

upping this piece

ok, flow was hot, structure was good, vocab was good, multies, again good...overall all it was a hot drop...everything was on point...nothing really bad to say about it...keep dropping...

o yea, if you get a chance. could you peep my latest open mic. i could use some more feedback.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83967

its iight to me, wasnt really feeling the whole concept, flow was on point, vocab was there, just aint feelin the concept

lol k

uppin

nice

shit was tight...
short and sweet... maybe a bit too short... lol...
vocab was strong here dawg... no doubt...
strong, yet understandable...
flow was descent... it could have been a bit better...

I'm feeling your style man.... keep that shit coming...

-1-

thanx, uppin though

This Was Real Nice, Really Got A Message Across
Had Vocab, Structured Flow, It Was Really On Point
I Like The Significance Of It Though, Keep It Up

hey nice drop yo keep elevatin and postin i look forward to readin more

i love to just keep re-readin t his rhyme even thoough i have read it enought times already i am totally diggin ur style and i love the flow u r defintally good