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Doctor J Vs. X-Ecution
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no d.r. no biting no recycling .................................................. ........ WARNING: I WILL BE CHECKING ON WHO POST HERE |
checkin in.............
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i mess up your vital organs and store them for an organ shortage/
I'll give your dick to a constipated asian, they're used to short-shit!/ i'll Leave u Scorched-Bro, Try-N-Win-it, i'll Leave u Fried-N-Shredded/ this kid Is Pathetic, Wit "Less Flavor" Than a Person Thats Diabetic/ A Bomb-Threat Created-and-Demonstrated For Mind-Stress/ Wit this bitch's Back Against The Wall Like a Spined-Chest/ Pull some Alfred hitchcock shit, so It'll be HARD WHEN PAIN FLOCKS/ I'm sure everyone thinks of u like the club scene in Iceland BARS JUST AINT HOT/ My lyrics like Bustin' a 9 I got you Duckin' the rhyme/ Punch through the Vest on your chest till your Sternum touches your SPINE!/ |
I’m A Rack-Up-Dis-Kid, "He Claim He Freestyle" ‘Cuz-Homos-Good-Wit-Fashion-Tips'/
Best Relax-Ur-Hips! "U Must Exercise Ya Butt Cheeks "Tha-Way-Ur-Ass-Gets-'Ripped'// Check-It-Kid, My Verbal Techs-Will-Spit And Land Hard Punches Til I’ve Wrecked-My-Fists/ And I’m A Specialist, Cuz I'll Deck-This-Bitch Until He's Connected Only By His Neck-And-Dick// I Infected-Sick And Injected-Ticks To Prove Ya Can’t Flow Wit Ya Neglected-Clique/ So I’m Gonna Project-A-Diss With So Many Intoxicated Flows, That It'll Leave U Left-In-Piss// Without Lookin At Cha Verse-I’ll-Disperse-Words That’ll Leave U Emotionally Hurtin/ If Words Hurt Then Mine Will Disintegrate Ur Body So U Can Do Some Soul Searchin// X I'll Fill Anthrax In A Syringe, And Stab The Needle In Ur Optical Lens, Then U’ll See Death/ Den I’ll Splatter Yo Lungs On Your Veins So Ur Illiterate Ass Can Bleed Breath// |
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punches=doc sustaiment=doc flow=tie metas=doc origanality=x vocab=x creativity=doc overall=doc........jus def had harder punches.thats all....nice battle peeps hit this up......... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82725 |
.|X took this|.
.|i give it to Doctor J for the minor wordplay|. .|n consistency of flow|. .|but X took this punch wise as usual|. .|drop a fair one here|. .| http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=84443 |. .|i can't poll cus i'm at a friend house|. .|i'll poll when i get home though|. |
Thanx for da vote
uppin 4 votes(1) .................................................. .................................................. ..... (1-0) |
personally i thin x-ecution got dis!!!!!!
flow=X-Ecution structure=X-Ecution rythem=doctor J word play=tie punches X-Ecution overall=X-Ecution vote= X-Ecution yo hit this up tell me what cha think vote for witch ever one ya want on dis but i'll tell ya's this pine-cone resign'd |
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9665#post829665
sorry thats supose to be in there lol my fault and for got to vote. but i told ya who i vote for |
this match was even all the way except for the punches.....
doctor J gets my vote cuz his punches were harder...good shit by the both though... GameTime... |
Thats nice we should have said only people wit under 500 post can vote cuz theres 2 many herbz who look at cha stats and vote on dat
anyways 1-1 uppin 4 votes(2) yo x check out i.r. bout cha friend bionicle |
^ bullshyt vote give a better explination..........if not ima get that removed im not acceptin no bs votexs.........1
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i meant over 500 post uppin i guess(3) |
yea kid vote like dis for example -Brixton- post so post again
explain more though thats sumtin thing they have to learn x uppin for votes(4) |
Very Close
Punches: X Vocab: Doc Multies: Doc Metas: Doc Flow: X I gave this to Execution basicaly because of Flow, very close on and Doc you should shortan ya lines, u have nice voccab tho Can u guys PLEASE hit this up wit an h onest one itd be appreciated on mine and Rappads Behaf, thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84150 |
flow-Doctor J
wordplay-X punches-doctor J enjoyment-Doctor J originality-Tie creativity-Doc structure-X vote-Doctor J |
Sorry I meant Metas: X
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More Punches or Strong Wordplay/Minor Punches..
( Doctor J)...................( X Ecution) I Was Feelin X More Here Not A Bad Battle But He Had More Creativity in His Punches.. Vote - X Ecution |
.|ok i'm about to poll|.
.|X do u ever vote on anyone's battle once ur voted on?|. .|i really need ur vote here|. .|http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=84443|. .|appreciate it|. |
i can't vote yet but i think j got dis
he had better flow, punches, and he was consistent i think yall need to read the battle verses another round |
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i agree but i can't vote either |
yes bionicle i do vote i do it on ma time when im free i do ma shyt 1st n handle things after.......dont worry ur battle will b voted on........btw uve been suspected of D/R......i appreciate ur votes n stuff but jump off a lil but this is commin from dr.j so w/e.......just lettin u kno
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.|i vote fair|.
.|just that u the only one i seen on that have enough post to vote on that battle|. .|n it wasn't d/r becus this wasnt that close to Dr. J (dash boy)|. |
iight 1 more vote..........
......... ........ ....... ........ ....... ..............................this is y i post in fl........fast battles most of the time......thx to all the peeps that voted so far........lets go...1 |
damn dis was a quick battle
full of d.r. next time x we gotta get a 500 post vote rule cuz only vets know how to vote...obvoiusly im out (4-2) last up |
yea iight but this wasnt dr.......so this was str8 but i kno u n bionicle got stuff to settle but yea.......quik shyt........1
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i ain't got shit to settle wit him
he's just on ur dick and he riding the hell out of it shit hope yall don't get banned...LOL |
if nethin he will i got nothin to do wit him voten on ma battles..........
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lets go people 1 more vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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to start with...i thought they were both strong verses....it was a tight battle....
metas - doc J vocab doc J flow - x word play - x structure - x punches - x Vote=x they were all quite strong, and the votes were close, but i thought the overall flow and slightly harder hittin punch lines did it for me, and it seemed an easier read.........Peace! |
yep....X got this one also......he had some dope punches.......
i was feelin ur verse......Dr.J...i dont see how ur 13-2........ yo ass got to battle newbie's and thats all........ because X just killed u wit his verse homie......... no hate...just speaking the truth......so...... my vote goes to X Ecution......for a better verse overall....... 1 sided battle.....stay up yep.. pz..... |
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