MaNyIcAlMiNd vs. MonStar
 

ok lets get this started....

8 lines min

16 lines max

drop due today

no crew/dr votes ect ect ect...

no feeding

3-0 is a ko

first to 5 wins...

doesnt matter who drops first

aight im checkin in dogg........................................it dont matter who drop first .................................................. ........................

ight i'm checking in too...i'll drop sometime soon...good luck yo................................................ .................................................. .................................................. .......................

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monstar wanna battle me so a loss ima hand'em,/
your punchez are like ali gettin back in the ring,
your brains to damaged to land'em/
so your swinging into the air son just hopeing that
you hit me/
but thean i counter attack and leave ya nose were
ya chin be/
throw blowz to ya kidneys till ya spittin out both of'em/
and fuck up both ya lungz till ya coufin out blood/
this faggot callz himself a thug but hez just a bitch with
a dress who promised me that if i win that i could squeeze
hiz breast/
your just a corn growing famers son and ya momz probably
your sister/
you fucking product of incest how you gonna talk shit son?/
you should keep that mouth zipped up or at least take the
dick out/
your flawz are like 2 saw thumbz dogg theam shitz just
stick out/
this faggz about to get ripped out the closet and beat
unconshis and stripped of his pride faster thean a dime
in a prom dress/
ohio aint got no rhymes yo so ima show you no love and
the only rappaz that were decent came from cleveland and
that was bone thugz/

fuck it this what i got for now..its still to dam early for me...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84540
aight dogg just drop another link so theay dont delete are shit

ight heres my drop:

yo MaNyIcALMiNd's, your from rhode island like h.p. lovecraft
well i'm a horror story, battling you is 'childs play', yous a rugrat
so dont 'mind' me, cause i'm bout to 'rip' you to pieces *
decease ya speech with punches that'll leave ya ass teethless
defiant, show no remorse, leave you feeling dumb like poor students
strong with the force, 'star' bring more 'wars' than george lucas
fucking you up, should change ya name to "watch how whores do this"
star stays ruthless, i'm more bananas than what a gorilla is packin
deadly with my actions, got this 'maniac' on lock like i was a straight jacket
yo minds you need to stop the battling, and stick to ya weak ass production
cause the only way you ever hitting hard is with a bass line and percussions

*used to be micrippa, now hes MaNyIcAlMiNd*

could have been better but i'm tired so yea...

nice drop son..you had some good shit in there...
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MonStar Took This WIth His Punches
Not A Very In Depth Battle.. Simple
So Due To Punches MonStar Gets mY Vote

Vote- MonStar

I Polled Yours So Do The Same

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1969#post831969

monstar had some what of a stable structure....
other kid was str8 up confusing.....visit the wackness emergency center...they should help u out.....

on account of everything(punches..ect)...monstar gets the vote here....

drop an honest one here...pc*1*
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84622

i dont do text faggots..audios is what i do..so why yall mafuckaz
is stuck typeing im makeing trackz..so youz catz could say what you want this means shit to me..uppin

wtf was i doing talking bout 3-0 is a k.o.....haha damn i musta been tired this morning...3-0 isnt a k.o...5-0 would be a k.o...o well i cant edit my post so fuck it....well i'm out for the night, so i'm uppin for more votes before i leave...o yea, i'll check out those battles later or something and leave my opinion...

Monstar Had A Nice Verse And Solid Punches, Nice Flow, Way Better Structure
Many, You Need To Shorten Your Lines
10-12 Words A Line

Quotables:

Yo Minds You Need to Stop the Battling, and Stick to Ya Weak Ass Production
Cause the Only Way You Ever Hitting Hard Is with a Bass Line and Percussions
^That Was Nice
Vote-Monstar

uppin again for more votes.....


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Good battle but Monstar
got this battle on lock
with his nortious punches

If I could vote you probably
would or might merked
him

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>One>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

aight ima say monstar takes, but heres my breakdown.....

struture-tie
flow-tie
vocab-tie
wordplay-tie
punches-monstar
personals-monstar
overall-monstar

props to the both of ya, but ima say monstart takes this.......

peace......

yeah i am gonna have to go wit monstar on this one he had more punches that came harder so to me that is what gave him this vote hit this up wit an honest vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84845