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Mr.Christensen 10-10-03 01:22 PM

TR and BROOKLYN - Hate Me
 
Newbie 1: The Realist is a MOD?
Newbie 2: He must give good head... You heard about Brook
Newbie 1: He's overrated like hell
Newbie 2: He's a MOD too


**~SynText~**
These cats catch drama then hold peace to a minimal...
They part human...part wanted...part sick individuals...
They morbidly ecstatic plastic wrapping cats in caskets...
Its drastic how two cats can stir a whole board in static...

BROOKLYN
Oh I Had Battles, Opponents Broke Rules And I Lost
Why Toss The Fault On Me? Pennies For Thoughts But My Cost
Certain Mods Don't Deserve Their Position, My Ambitions?
I Don't Wanna State No Names But This City Plans Submission
Best Power Is To Delete, Place Ban Threats But Who's Devoured?
Screw You Cowards, I Could Flow More Dirt On Ya Names Than School Showers
Its Finished & Over, All Who Hate Me Can Go to Hell, Who Cares?
By My Wrath & Title I Withhold No One Is Spared!!!


The Realist
I don’t give a fuck about you, play that into translation
Up in arms about me, no matter I live in moderation
Why hate me it didn’t have to be, everything I say is in reality
Is it cause I rapidly advocate how you are affected by gravity
I do my job systematically, fuck you, let the freepost begin
Talk trash like your trying to get rid of them, your literally littering
Won’t see me disabled cause I’m so stable I’m labeled Ritalin
Like Jabber I'm going in the books, and so far that’s just for hooks
This site is my online wife, we do our best and try and live with luck
Yall trying to knife my half life, post what you think …Like we gives a fuck?

-Magnitude 10-10-03 01:40 PM

Lmao. .
Revenge of the hated mods, wasnt bad peice, I mean it was funny in my eyes because alot of mods do hate you 2. .
Where the hell did syntext come into this though, lmao, not bad not bad, this was funny to me, but I know how you feel . .

FaLLeN 10-10-03 02:10 PM

nice piece fo show.... i guess when ur h8ed u gotta let peeps know how u feel. could tell u guys had that flowin with lots of emotion, and u had very nice structure and vocab.

i give b+ :P (cause im sure u could right betta)

Respect,
pz

e.coli 10-10-03 02:14 PM

very nice piece nigga. vocab, structure, wordplay, and metas were all on point nigga. i like how you said what was on yo mind

nice drop nigga

This site is my online wife, we do our best and try and live with luck
Yall trying to knife my half life, post what you think …Like we gives a fuck?

^^^this was my favorite line

holla at yo boi
~1~

Menik 10-10-03 02:29 PM

Yeah i agree...this was a real good piece....it flowed very nice through out it as i read it...Vocab from both were real good i thought...structure was real good as well...metas were good...and i like the way you both ended your verses...good piece...and keep dropping.

Dirty Sally 10-10-03 02:40 PM

i liked it, that was raw emotion right there. The structure was good, the vocab is excellent and it had a nice flow to it. You guys had the multies in there all in all it was a good drop.

/:Ayura:\ 10-10-03 02:55 PM

Short, but damn that was ill.

Quote:
Oh I Had Battles, Opponents Broke Rules And I Lost
Why Toss The Fault On Me? Pennies For Thoughts But My Cost


very creative. liked that line alot and showed talent

Quote:
do my job systematically, fuck you, let the freepost begin
Talk trash like your trying to get rid of them, your literally littering


wow, sick line, and it something differant to the real world. this is internet shit *yea* lol . liked the way you smoothly related your lines to freeposting and the windows trash can.

Keep collaberating, you two make a great pair

Born To Kill 10-10-03 03:21 PM

My two motherfuckers...

Maybe now ya'll can feel me.

Hated on cuz ya record shows alot of wins?

I'll be dammned!

Hated on cuz peeps act like ya didn't earn them wins?

Really, what's that like?

You beat a bunch of newbs, none of em were shit!

Damn, that sounds familiar...

And finally...

Ya catch hate for getting mod spots...

Well, don't know about that...
But how's being hated on just cuz ya 34?


I feel ya pain
(In my best Clinton voice)

The verse flowed well and had a tight message.
I think about 3-4 of my Open Mics were alot like this.
Venting.
Get off my ass type of rhymes.
I ain't gonna go into who had the better verse...
Just good wordplay, metas, and vocab from both.

Nice piece.
Good bitch session.

gotaloveforrap 10-10-03 04:55 PM

i was definetely feelin that, both verses were off the hook, the flow was on target, the vocab and wordplay were great, the topic was kool, and the realists closer was a killer, props to both of ya, that was great shit.

peace......

JohnnyWatts 10-10-03 05:41 PM

wow nice junk

Am At Cha 10-10-03 07:09 PM

uppin

Da_Renegade 10-10-03 07:20 PM

They morbidly ecstatic plastic wrapping cats in caskets...
Its drastic how two cats can stir a whole board in static...

those 2 lines was sick, damn

Brook started off iightish but got nice at this point

Best Power Is To Delete, Place Ban Threats But Who's Devoured?
Screw You Cowards, I Could Flow More Dirt On Ya Names Than School Showers
Its Finished & Over, All Who Hate Me Can Go to Hell, Who Cares?
By My Wrath & Title I Withhold No One Is Spared!!!


The realist shit was good as well too

ncie drop from both

8/10

.existance. 10-10-03 08:29 PM

do my job systematically, fuck you, let the freepost begin
Talk trash like your trying to get rid of them, your literally littering

^^^ Nice Ish . . .
You Had Nice Verses But I Wasnt Really Feelin Brooklyn's Verse, He Could Have Done Better . . . The Realist Had The Best Verse I Believe . . .

Mr.Christensen 10-11-03 12:38 AM

1 up
4 left

thanx alot all of you, were happy that you understand what we were saying

Syn was in this cause i needed a 4 line opener... and i have to give credit where credit is due

**~SynText~** 10-11-03 01:11 AM

no doubt this shit was sickness hahahahahahahah i love it holmes brook and realist killin it

yog_dogg 10-11-03 01:13 AM

nice flow it was pretty good the flow was overall good and all keep postin

Mr.Christensen 10-12-03 11:17 PM

uppin...
thanx for feedback

yog_dogg 10-13-03 12:33 AM

yeah that was definetaly an ill drop i enjoyed readin all the verses that was tight as hell keep postin i look forward to more

gotaloveforrap 10-13-03 12:35 AM

^^^uhh u already responded sayin it was ok, now u say its excellent, whateva homie, this was an ill drop though, i think i already responded, i thought id just point out this cats split personalities....

peace.....

Drummerman 10-13-03 01:03 AM

both those flows were great
post some more so i can read it
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Speek.E.Z. 10-13-03 02:10 AM

Guys This Shit Was Ill Props To My Dog Brooklyn Wait To Rep I.E. I Dont Know What I Can Say About This Other Then God Damn I Want In On The Next One..
9/10
^^ Keep Slanging, And The Realist Come Drop A Thread In I.E. Shit We Need More Open Mic Heads

Otherwordz 10-13-03 02:47 AM

word...this shit was dope...both of y'all had sick flowz...and the concept was original too...I don't think I ever heard about mods rhymin' on how much cats hate them...lol...so that's an "A+" for creativity...lol...y'all gotta lemme get in on the next collab...holla

Folk Angel 10-13-03 02:57 AM

Nice spit.

The lyrics were good.....
However, why u rappin about the net? lol
But I can't be bisased over that. Lyrics were good,
a few rhymes in there sound kinda forced.
But overall it was straight. 6/10

rule 10-13-03 09:13 AM

hot collab, i liked the fuck you vibe to it, you all came with good flow an vocab, not much i can really say it was all there...but ye you 2 or 3? lol ripped that shit peace homie

-ElocuShun- 10-13-03 09:23 AM

i liked this.........................surprisingly i liked the four line opener....it set a sik standard for the piece.props to all

LiraculKorean 10-13-03 09:56 AM

damn dawg seriously this shit was short and dope as fizzuk for realz, the topic was real, the vocab was deadly aimed and precisely executed, ur structure is nice and the multis hit hard.
the syntext was pretty ill too.

some fav lines
==============================================
Best Power Is To Delete, Place Ban Threats But Who's Devoured?
Screw You Cowards, I Could Flow More Dirt On Ya Names Than School Showers(headshot.)

Why hate me it didn’t have to be, everything I say is in reality
Is it cause I rapidly advocate how you are affected by gravity
I do my job systematically, fuck you, let the freepost begin
Talk trash like your trying to get rid of them, your literally littering
Won’t see me disabled cause I’m so stable I’m labeled Ritalin (oh shit!)
==============================================
definitly a good read hope to see more of this kind ish.. yall keep it real and ELEVATE, one.

Mr.Christensen 10-13-03 11:55 PM

granted he was banned
i still want feedback
3up 2 left

**~SynText~** 10-14-03 01:20 PM

ayo damn i can't believe the props i get lol its ill though thanks to all

and realist holla at me for a collab holmes you and brook....and who got banned

-ElocuShun- 10-14-03 01:24 PM

brooklyn was banned...........................

trueinterlude 10-14-03 02:31 PM

nice... good structure and flow in my opinion.. keep it up wot wot>>>>>>> peace aight

gotaloveforrap 10-14-03 02:34 PM

^^^yo realist, how did brooklyn get banned..........thats fucked up...........damn..............

peace........

Mr.Christensen 10-14-03 10:13 PM

check out the thread by The End in Emcee Interaction
named Consiracy

gotaloveforrap 10-14-03 10:51 PM

^^^i did, thats fuckin messed up......damn.......he only won cause he voted for himself......thats fucked up on so many levels its not even funny......

peace.....

Accelerate 10-15-03 03:55 PM

T.R, Basically You Carried The Track. I'm Not Hating On Brooklyn Because Of His Situation, But... His Verse Failed To Impress Me. So, To Me, You Carried The Track On Your Own, Basically, Your Flow was Pin Point, And It Was Definately A Good Piece. Pz

Dimez 10-15-03 07:20 PM

I'm feeling both verses! nice and short!
like the colors and stuff
BROOKLYN is banned aint he?
ah well good job
The Realist and thank you for checkin out my collabo

**~SynText~** 10-16-03 01:37 PM

^^^^^^^^^^^^^don't recognize me damn it i see how it is

Mr.Christensen 10-16-03 06:24 PM

Lady had a BS feedback
Thank you but come-fucking-on...the color?

Miami305 10-16-03 06:59 PM

hahahahaha... i feel ya'll, shit was funny. Brook came the best in my view, everyone stayed in topic and made there point. Fuck Mods. well i can careless i dunt take RB too seriously, but like real says this is ya second wife, posting this god-forbid ya wife dunt divorce u.. Stay up, much props to 1nes with no fear...

Fred Wycheck 10-20-03 12:22 PM

lmao, crazy, enjoyed readin it, I was laughin at parts. Brooklyn's shit appealed to me the most. nice flow, complexity, vocab, and multis, plust it was just straight up nice. what was up with syntext's verse being so short, it was nice though. the realist came tight too, but it just seemed a bit outta place, he didnt come as complex as the others, but that's aight, it was still tight.

for text I give this a 8/10 I guess...not used to rating text

Eloquence 10-20-03 12:59 PM

can I get down with the freepost?

There was a time when, rappers had a chance//
Before my flow was cleaner than clothes by Dapper Dan//
Rhymes hot, force'll snap a fifty trans//
I'll put ad libs on your chorus for fifty grand//
But be a man, it's okay to take a stand//
You don't like what I'm saying, I'll just run you off my land//
I'm the owner of the industry, not physically but mentally//
Rappers pay the cost, just for thinking they can get with me//
This scene ain't new to me, I read this scene in history//
Then came back to play the part of rapper of the century//
Oracleez the emcee, turned it back to what it's meant to be//
A battle for survival,where you rely on your ability//
To rip a beat viciously, I run through clicks efficiently//
Prisoners of war, beg to be part of my infantry//
To validate the stories that precede my name officially//
You've heard it, now you've seen it, true master coming with the heat//


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