Island vs. carsonjet
 

Rules 10 lines max.


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Must check in.



I'll be back.

I thought you wanted to batle me island? set it up yo, i'll poll in here after you guys spit iight!!!!!!!!!

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Carson Products don't write thier lines, ya show is gone,
your a nationwide airline... and you crashed into Island... the only Pen-ta-go'on...
And u register Carson & jet? what type of message u sending us?
When you pick a name & subject mostly only women discuss?
the Carson and Jet detergent line was a little far fetched,
just like sayin all your bars are only a little far streched
I'ma cut loose this fagget and come through with a back fist
cos son each line you spit does contribute.........to wackness
Beside registerin I been getting off easy..........shit the facts is true
What? You think u comp? I'm undefeated cos of cats JUST LIKE YOU!



Thank you.

Next?

island....

hmm...you challenge me....yet i must spit first.....ok...

Yo...chek it....
Hey island? why violent?..is it because u have no talent?-
Aint gotta ryhme it...I still spill this kid wit spits ta silence-
Like a polark tryna front Allinace-
He's writing checks his keys'can't finance-
I'll accept master'card...no check...cus jet is "price'less"-
U's got no license?...I'll take 'No TV a Week'as sacrifices-
Tone it down'....young buck... buncha dumb british fucks-
Brit...ya outta luck-this thread don't cluck or suck...
Shoulda known it from the start this kid's from england...It Just aint Fair....-
I mean what do u expect from a Local witta a leader like Tony Blair-

uppin for votes......lets get em........pc*1*
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wanted to make sure you'd post. I don't know you. Plus I shoulda clowned the red skin and boston. The mighty might streets of Boston! YAY CELTICS!


I don't know how long 100 characters is so I'll just keep typing like I am doing here, now. This is fun. Is this a hundred yet? I would hope so. I'm done.

aight....................here we go..........dont worry carson it aint no hate vote coz i thought ya verse was betta
breakdown=
punches=carson
sustainment=carson
flow=island
structure=island
creativity=carson
origanality=carson
metas=tie
vote=carson

make sure ya'll hit this up.....gettin mad slept on
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82725

Brix I don't know about you that's 2 of my battles in less than 5 mins you voted on and voted against me. Hum just a lil weird.

know how it looks......."vote for 100 posts"-carson but it aint.....ive explained myself properly on tha other now.....but in this one carson showed his experience.....props to ya.....probably the best noob i seen for a bit...peace.....sorry for postin again

he beat me in originality? No offense Cars but those are some of the wackest and played lines ever. He beat me in punches, where? I actually doubt you even read my verse but I shall say no more.

hey i understand ur upest.................
im not sayin this kid aint a cheater...
cus honestly i think he is...................

but lemme give u advice......from what i have learned**
don't bitch about votes-it gets u no where-and it sets u up for future battles......

u think im shit.....thats fine...think im shit.....but let me lose the battle...thats how u speak.....

my opinon's stay in pm's.....so should yours....pc*1*

*skips the small talk*


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Carson I'm a fair man. Always have been always will be. Even when I voted here before I was but seriously you and I know it's bullshit. I wasn't tryin to sway votes. If you want I'll have a mod close this and we can start a WHOLE new thread. If you want...

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Vote-Carson

He had many more punchlines and that wins battles In text

Pretty nice verse frum the newb tho keep elivated

Carson please hit this up an honest one, thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84779

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yo ima say carson easily takes this, heres my breakdown....

structure- tie
flow-carson
vocab-carson
wordplay-tie
punches-carson
personals-carson
overall-carson

props to the both of ya, but ima say carson takes this.

yo if u have the time can u hit this up wit an honest vote?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84864
itd be much appreciated

peace.......

Vote - Carson

This was actually pretty close. Island had a lot of direct punchlines but i didnt really see much creativity in them.
Carson you almost lost this shit, i thought u did at the beginning but the creativity in your verse got you this win.

(3)uppin......not one vet to vote..........
am i the only vet that votes anymore?......
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.|carson had vocab n punches here|.
.|or shud i say better punches|.
.|nice structure from both but i feel carson just had a overall better verse|.
.|nice personals from both|.
.|vote: carson|.
.|drop a fair one here|.
.|http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=84882|.