HeHateMe vs Kru-cial real 1
 

10 lines.
All other standard rules apply to this.
He spits first.

Please vote.
I know we dont have 100 posts.
But how else are we to build a record


Checking in

He hate me? damn rite i hate you,
ever since i found out your dad paid girls just to date you,
and if that ever failed how he would masturbate you,
get drunk come home n rape you,
squeeze you tight like a grape and taste you,
shit as am emcee i'll never rate you.
Battlin' me u jus' hit a wall of bricks,
now its about time u called it quits,
cos' its just a dream u ever makin' hits.

Wow...
You really arent any good.
I'll just key something half assed.

Damn... 1-0 this easy? Battling this kid was a gift...
Jack ya jaw.. In the hopes I'll give ya spit a lift..
To win you need talent... You have none... Sorry dude...
With that delievery you could win if I wrote for you...
Already bored with the battle and its half-done...
Shit I coulda just posted my check-in and won....
Just read ya shit again... All I can say is BOO!!!!...
Its not just me that hates you... Ya words are pissed off too...
Creatively I beat you... Shit was over before it could begin...
So... blah, blah, *yawn*, blah.. Fuck I still win...

Oh.............
In line 4 its supposed to read...

With that delievery you couldnt win even if I wrote for you......
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Just to clear that up

so what we editing our shit now??
you's rite i cud'nt win if i wrote it 4 me, cos urs jus blah blaah blaah
whatever happened to rhymnin dog?
uppin votes

Aight...
Both verses are in....................................
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Votes?

.lets go now both posted lets see some votes.....
hows we meant to get records if noone votes??
we all gotta start somewhere right??

First off. In kru-cial's verse where he says,
"Battlin' me u jus' hit a wall of bricks,
now its about time u called it quits," It sounded awfully familar to Rabbit Run on the 8mile soundtrack. Thats not good.
Secondly he used the same rhyme scheme for the majority of the verse which just bores the reader.

Hehateme's verse was more creative. And the cockyness towards the end with the blahs and yawns was very effective.

My vote goes to Hehateme

It's not lettin me vote right now but i'll vote as soon as i can............................................... ...................................

so what if two words rhyme now im cheating??
no wonder your records four to none you say my rhymnin scheme is da same da whole way through and that it bores da reader?? hehateme never even had a rhymin scheme
read it again youll notice my flow changes half ways down

Vote-Hateme

More originality
Pretty easy discision but very wak battle

^LM if u see this please peep this cuz u the only dude wit other 100 posts, vote up honesly

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84779

come on now were still uppin for your votes y'all maybe fifty was wrong progress is a slow process haha.............................................. ........

dis goes to hateme

betta punchlines and wordplays

dis was prety close niggaz keep up that good werkz

pizzleim out

Thanks for the votes.
Upping this.
I'll be sure to find some of ya'lls battle once I get 5 times as many posts.

Damned voting restrictions

hateme fo betta punches,vocab and wordplay
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my vote goes to hate me for better punches and all around fucked u up.......................................

return the favour and check out gotaloveforrap and yog_dogg thanks............................................ .................................................. ..............................

HeHateMe Got My Vote
He Simply Came Harder
With Punches, Wordplay
And Some Other Categories
Nice Battle Tho
No Hate Kru-cial real 1
But HeHateMe Simply Ripped You Apart

Vote-HeHateMe