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13th Disciple 10-10-03 06:07 PM

War: BRing It! (regime/collab)-Mixed Emotions
 
fgee

u fucks are on the 'if u cant beat em join em' principle
but ur so fukin wack try-outs thread was closed..simple
a site full of haters...who act like they measure up to Regime
but when push comes to shove...ur nowhere to be seen
ur like clones of hulk...green with envy and threads fallin apart at the seams
u've been bitch slapped so many times...face is constantly red
embarrased of your weak threats...these kids r like implants how they keep abreast
fuckin fags....say its only the net and u cry over losing battles
riding dicks so much...herbs set up bizness for custom made saddles
kids talkin gangsta 'l'm gonna wetcha'...yeh...with a super soaker?
get real...sorry i forgot ur all fake folk squinting to see skills but im out of focus
i'm sorry to poke fun at you....with a tongue of razors
to a so called pimp whos.... impregnated ur palms and given labour!
it's like i've eaten all u retarded herbs...cos i'm sick of it now
PM's asking for votes .....go fuck urself and throw in the towel
unoriginal fags couldnt stand out in a crowd dressed as Bin Laden
acting hard tryin to imitate vets...with a pink slip garment

bribeone1
rain drops trickle down the side of my face
I close my eyes to drown out sound to send my brain in a daze
U aint been in my place with the gusts of morning fresh in the air
Clothes drenched with death stench, I dont see why youd care
Alone in a battle zone, while horns blow high pitch tone
I come through with forcefull blows thats bound to shatter bones
Scatter foes ......casue truthfully, im fucking sick of this shit.
im taking my last stand..dont care if im hit..this has to b it
Fuck bricks, im Tossing around a thousand pound boulders
may words make u wizer and help u out when your older
life itself is an inner brewing war with hidden soldiers who crave gore
eat off the innocent, and the lust 4 power just asks them for more
Im tearing down doors and blowing houses from the inside in
tearing masks with flesh attached to em.that cleverly disguise them
despise them friends who claim to B, but only act
Im out to expose fakeness in society.so with death i sign this pact

chrit
Evil thoughts... Regime already made WP die...
Watch the rest of RB fall... victim to the warcry
Nobody comes close... Witness the lack of callouts...
Its like all of RB froze.. Fear of the battle fallout...
Best in the game... Whether it be audio topical or text...
Dominated all leagues... On top.. what could be next....
We would just retire... But then RB would die of boredom...
And if it ever went down... Regime would own the Legend Forum
So heeds Chrit's advice... Never oppose the best dude...
And if you do prepare for war... as we life-slip you...



Auspicious
Lived My Life In My Hood, Up On A Fence..Mouth w/ A Cig..
Picked On N' Kicked, Didn't Do Shit, n' Proved That As A Kid..
Sick N' Tired Of Bein Tired N' Sick, Bein A Bitch., How I Was Raised
Took Sick Days 2 Hide My Bitch Ways Un-Scathed In Tricked Face..
Me N' A Friend, Now N' Again, w/ A Pen, Would Jot Down Raps..
EveryOne Around Snaps..And I Would As 2 When It Hit The Trash..
Quick To Act.. Pissed, A Virgin Fist Slipped Back At His Hips..
Missed, Then Shot Wrists To His Lips..w/ The Teach In The Mix..
Enraged N' Over-Pissed.. Made Up My Mind.. Fuck It !..
I Was Rugged.. Time To Join The State Of Menace To Public..
Fuck Gurls.. Fuck School.. Fuck Faggots.. Fuck The World..
You Didn't Hear A Name w/ Fuck You After It Unless It Was Plurals.
Walk Around With An Attitude Like No Body Likes You..
Despite You, Dont Like Them Either, Just Another Kid 2 Put A Knife To..
Settle The Score w/ War, Hate Them Worse Than You Did Before..
Alx Died.. Thug Whyte's Born, Reformed N' Out-Poored On Auspicious' Door..
Life Expects You.. You Dont Expect It.. You Never Seen It..
You Got The Scenics.. It Cant Hold You.. War.. BRING IT !..

13th Disciple

U want war?!...we leave harder shots than 20 licks of vodka & gin
fuck the top 10, 9 been deleted when The Regime stepped in....
locatin ur next of kin cuz in battle we'll even take ur last chance
switch stance, yall some fake thugz like wearin blue shirts wit
red pants...
advert ur glance, cuz wit mitts on our fists we'll even catch ur
breath...
U see death.........1000 ways to die and yall got 999 ways left
plenty of time to rest...cuz wit the skillz combined we one of a kind
got beef?!...shit...we'll push yallz forehead all the way to the back
of ur mind...


....now click on the link again & see ur defeat in rewind......

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/new...hread&forumid=5

rule 10-10-03 07:04 PM

That was an amazing collab, all of you...all of you flowed very well, nothing to compalin about, or critique..definitly be hot in audio..flo an multies description was all great...definitly hot an shouldnt be slept on..peace

Da_Renegade 10-10-03 07:15 PM

yo this was a tight collabo in my opinion

the first dude's flow fell of in like 2 lines but he had it going

second guy was alright

Chrit had da most obvious flow to read, it was a good flow


I could really picture Auspicious shit in audio, sounded real nice loved it

13th was short but had some good lyrics to it,


overall this was a dope collabo

8.7/10

word

1

Chrit 10-10-03 07:46 PM

This was...

Blah..
lmao....

Uppin for feeback

13th Disciple 10-10-03 08:25 PM

^agrees

Chrit 10-10-03 08:27 PM

Just too hard to do a war piece when we're already on top...

Like whoa

gotaloveforrap 10-10-03 09:25 PM

that shit put open mic on fire, it was blazin, all ur verses were off the hook, the flow never fell, the wordplay and vocab were excellent, and the 13th disciples closer was fuckin amazin

plenty of time to rest...cuz wit the skillz combined we one of a kind
got beef?!...shit...we'll push yallz forehead all the way to the back
of ur mind...

....now click on the link again & see ur defeat in rewind......

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/new...hread&forumid=5

^^^pure illness, that shit was fuckin tight
great collab by the best crew, great shit

peace......

Dimez 10-10-03 09:40 PM

Thanx for not tellin me about this........


one

KnightShade 10-10-03 10:25 PM

good stuff guys, keep it up niggers.

DeadlySpitta 10-11-03 12:05 AM

Im fuckin speechless right now. So much shit to say but damn.... this was... fuck... 10 outta 10. DAMN! Hola Back!

Mr.Christensen 10-11-03 12:42 AM

... damnit...
aight it was good but i think the 1 flaw was you guys all hid different approaches to it...
as individuals they were all great, but when put together it was better than ok...but not GREAT

Aus came best in my opinion
If ANY of you would be so kind
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84636

yog_dogg 10-11-03 01:08 AM

yeah defintetally nice flow i loved the outro by 13th desciple i loved it damn i fuckin loved that shit nice flow by all

Chrit 10-11-03 03:03 AM

I'm good

Calda Merda 10-11-03 09:53 AM

This Collab Was Dope.. To Put Into Simple Words

10/10 Loved it.. You All Handled
The Topic In Different Ways.. Loved
13ths End And 'spicious's Verse
Really Stood out... Good Job Guys

fgee 10-12-03 11:28 AM

just read it..hmm

-Magnitude 10-12-03 11:33 AM

Not bad. .
13th end was pretty dope
everyone came strong tho
so it was decent, lmao at
cant write about war cus ur
already at top...

Cheak this out:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85038

Avalon 10-12-03 02:38 PM

I FUCKIN LOVE EVERYONE IN THIS THREAD...

























'cept Fgee... Good collab though... but I'm serious...


bye...


Av...

fgee 10-13-03 01:35 PM

^wheres the love?

NewPort 10-13-03 01:43 PM

I Love Av

NeCrId 10-13-03 02:05 PM

nice shit, kinda hard to do a war topic, i think Auspicious outshined yall in this collab, u all had kinda weak vocabulary, but u stayed on topic and was consistent, flow was good from all of u Chrit's kinda fucked me up a bit (sentences were broken apart) but other than that it was dope, here is the best lines from all of u

Quote:
Best Line From fgee:
ur like clones of hulk...green with envy and threads fallin apart at the seams
u've been bitch slapped so many times...face is constantly red
embarrased of your weak threats...these kids r like implants how they keep abreast
fuckin fags....say its only the net and u cry over losing battles
riding dicks so much...herbs set up bizness for custom made saddles
kids talkin gangsta 'l'm gonna wetcha'...yeh...with a super soaker?
get real...sorry i forgot ur all fake folk squinting to see skills but im out of focus
i'm sorry to poke fun at you....with a tongue of razors
to a so called pimp whos.... impregnated ur palms and given labour!


u had a nice flow and some wordplay which is pretty decent, only flaw was some of ur wordplay was kinda old (Bin Laden line)

Quote:
Best Line From bribeone1:
Alone in a battle zone, while horns blow high pitch tone
I come through with forcefull blows thats bound to shatter bones
Scatter foes ......casue truthfully, im fucking sick of this shit.
im taking my last stand..dont care if im hit..this has to b it
Fuck bricks, im Tossing around a thousand pound boulders
may words make u wizer and help u out when your older
life itself is an inner brewing war with hidden soldiers who crave gore
eat off the innocent, and the lust 4 power just asks them for more


ur flow was good, u stayed on topic very well props to that, only flaw u had was ur vocabulary was kinda simple

Quote:
Best Line From Chrit:
Best in the game... Whether it be audio topical or text...
Dominated all leagues... On top.. what could be next....
We would just retire... But then RB would die of boredom...
And if it ever went down... Regime would own the Legend Forum
So heeds Chrit's advice... Never oppose the best dude...
And if you do prepare for war... as we life-slip you...


i can see u tried to stay on topic, lol, but ur only flaw was ur sentences were kinda broken up and u had some weak vocabulary, u probably wasn't in the mood of this shit when u done it, but other than that u stayed on topic pretty good and u had nice consistency and references to ur crew

Quote:
Best Line From Auspicious:
Sick N' Tired Of Bein Tired N' Sick, Bein A Bitch., How I Was Raised
Took Sick Days 2 Hide My Bitch Ways Un-Scathed In Tricked Face..
Me N' A Friend, Now N' Again, w/ A Pen, Would Jot Down Raps..
EveryOne Around Snaps..And I Would As 2 When It Hit The Trash..
Quick To Act.. Pissed, A Virgin Fist Slipped Back At His Hips..
Missed, Then Shot Wrists To His Lips..w/ The Teach In The Mix..
Enraged N' Over-Pissed.. Made Up My Mind.. Fuck It !..
I Was Rugged.. Time To Join The State Of Menace To Public..
Fuck Gurls.. Fuck School.. Fuck Faggots.. Fuck The World..
You Didn't Hear A Name w/ Fuck You After It Unless It Was Plurals


ur verse stood out as the best to me simply because of ur vocabulary and flow, u didn't really stay on topic that much, but other than that i gotta say u outshined in this collab

Quote:
Best Line From 13th Disciple:
switch stance, yall some fake thugz like wearin blue shirts wit
red pants...
advert ur glance, cuz wit mitts on our fists we'll even catch ur
breath...
U see death.........1000 ways to die and yall got 999 ways left
plenty of time to rest...cuz wit the skillz combined we one of a kind
got beef?!...shit...we'll push yallz forehead all the way to the back
of ur mind...


u had some pretty good vocabulary, good flow, stayed on topic nicely, some of ur shit made me laugh (fake thugz like wearin blue shirts wit red pants) and u had some nice wordplay

Overall here's who got what in this collab:
Vocab - Auspicious
Flow - bribeone1
Wordplay - fgee & 13th Disciple
Consistency - Auspicious & Chrit
Stayed On Topic - 13th Disciple
Multis - bribeone1 & fgee

Overall it was a nice piece to read, but i think u should all do another collab on a topic that u all agree on and feel that u can do ur best, that would be a nice read

Rating:
9/10

Dimez 10-13-03 03:24 PM

I wanna be in the next collabo for da crew


one


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