gbacd vs yog dogg
aight homies, heres ur battle
10 lines max no crew votes no biting no feeding no dickriding verses will be due 45 min after check in good luck to both of u |
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okay check it...
i will be the first to post on this battle, i will crash the mic, make yo brains rattle/ this battle was over before i checked in, we aint kin, i am the king, where the fuck have u been?/ i thought i told u dawg that u had no chance, i saw it from the begginin, even though it was just a glance/ u a newb, why u wanna battle, u talk big fo such a small dick, damn i would fight but i'd hit u so quick, u would be left sick/ so to win this battle u better spit very well and steady, lets get this over with so i can win tell me when ur ready/ |
iz like, I'm caucasian, most rap is tasteless
I'm speechless, don't know their language All I know is I'm not a gangsta G (you know) I am just a white guy who plays the keys Love Journey's song "Don't Stop Believin" Led Zeppelin's "Stairway to Heaven" Listen to rap, and you need to give me the reasons Animal House, Byrds I'm feelin I'm deceivin that rap music cheese, just tease it I won't be able to rap at 34, and rappin wit is such a bore |
that was pretty good gbacd but hey the concept of rap "battling" is to aim ur insults at me. and i saw none. it was like a short song
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aight, both of u need to elevate, but heres my breakdown....
structure-tie flow-yog vocab-gbacd wordplay-tie punches-yog personals-tie overall-yog_dogg props to the both of ya, but ima give this to yog_dogg peace....... |
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some elevation is needed by both sides. overall this was a pretty whack battle but i got to give the edge to yog-dog his punches are what won this for him.
my vote=yog-dog |
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I can't poll vote...but yog_dog got this...the other kid'z verse wasn't even a battle rhyme...and he bit my avy...lol
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cmon quit sleepin on dis shit we still Uppin in herre............................................. .................................................. .....................
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YOG GOT THIS MORE TALENT FPR BETLIG BUT YOU NEED ELIVATION NONE THE LESS.............................................. ..............
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^thanks but WE NEED VOTES............................................. .................................................
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Both need MAJOR elevation
but dogg takes this cuz he actually had punches gbacd was rappin about his fucking life, and a boring 1 at that lmao both need to report to the wackness emergency center immediately vote- yog dogg |
both of you need to elevation...but yea i gotta say yog_dogg took this....yog_dogg came with punches where as gbacd didnt have any punches or anything that resembled a battle verse....more of a story telling verse, instead of a battle verse....
so overall i gotta say yog_dogg took this my vote=yog_dogg |
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flow:yogdog vocab:gbacd wordplay:tie punches:yogdog personals:tie overall:yogdogg nice battle aiight peace |
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