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Dimez 10-11-03 09:51 PM

Calda Merda ..vs.. ~LaDy DiViNiTy~
 
Aight 10 lines
U spit 1st cuz u called me out
this a friendly battle LoL no beef u know I got respek hommie!
But every1 gotsta battle sometimez

Dimez 10-11-03 10:09 PM

Oh wait you said it was a blind spit My bad!!!!

No pictures allowed by the way


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Calda Merda 10-12-03 11:08 AM

Ight Yea.. No Beef Here
Just Needed Sum1 To Battle
So I'll Spit Just Dont Feed
Off My Shit.... - Gh0st -

Calda Merda 10-12-03 01:08 PM

ight.

We Chill, I'll Give You That Much.. But When It Comes To It.. You SUck ! -
Enuff.. I'm Comin In Wit Kicks For Laughs.. Cuz I Dont Even Need A Punch -
Battle? You Cant Be Serious.. So Humor Me -
Its Like Sayin You Got Ure Period.. b4 You Hit Puberty -
Cut U Up In Two Or Three, Just To Laugh At Ure Pieces, Its A Tough Life -
Im To Rough Right? You Could Piss Me Off.. If You Did It Upright (piss standing) -
Expose This Bitch, She Knows This Shit, Leave Her Open Like Sandal Holes -
Punches? She Cant Handle Those, Stick Her From The Waist Like She Had Camel Toe -
Mad At My Verbs, Tragic For Hers.. Defeat her Wit Magical Werds -
Battles Infered.. That I Took The 2 Bitches In Her Sig And Added A Third -


Blah... Bring It

Dimez 10-12-03 01:38 PM

--==Intro==--
Calda Merda: I can’t believe I called u out what was I thinkin?
Lady Divinity: that’s what I would like to know cuz hommie u know I’ll wreck ya
Calda merda: PLEEZE DON’T GO HARD ON MEE!
Lady Divinity: No need! No Need! No matter what it’s a wrap on you
Calda Merda: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Ayo! Ayo! Mike Check 1,2…….

Watch And Learn!


I Pack-The-Hits,Grab-Ya-Dick,Cuz It's Like A Crappy Armageddon Da Way I'll Impact Ya Shit
it’s Like This! Calda’s My Friend So I'll Throw "Peace Punches" The Way I "Pass A Fist”

Ya Rapz Are Dull In “Desperate” Need Of Change & All I Can Spare Is Ya Life
But Calda Is Merdered! You Jus Scared Of A Mic Tore Through Ya Flesh Like A Knife

Brutally Pound Ya Octics With Phone Keys, Till Ya Pupils Begin To Dial Eight
My Stylez Great! Biting Cleopatra’z Scriptures & You Stoll Can’t A-Nile-Ate

Cant 'Defeat-My-High-Ends' This 'Dude-Lies-Tense' You 'Need-My-Guidance'
You Jus One Of Them Kats That’s Sound Better With Silent, This Chickz 2 Violent

Damn Homme You Too Soft, But Anywayz Nice Attempt!
Placing Pennies Under Scopes Is Calda’s Way Of Being ‘Mag-Ni-Fi-Cent’

deser_eagle 10-12-03 01:40 PM

calda, that definitely wasn't your best verse. lady took this one heres the breakdown:

flow:lady
personals:none
punches:lady
structure:calda
complexity:none
multis:lady
overall vote:lady

Dimez 10-12-03 01:47 PM

Thanx Fo Da Vote....


Uppin.........


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Phillie Blunt 10-12-03 01:55 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Calda Merda


We Chill, I'll Give You That Much.. But When It Comes To It.. You SUck ! -
Enuff.. I'm Comin In Wit Kicks For Laughs.. Cuz I Dont Even Need A Punch -
Weak.. But Flowed Well 6/10

Battle? You Cant Be Serious.. So Humor Me -
Its Like Sayin You Got Ure Period.. b4 You Hit Puberty -
Lol .. Good Use Of Flow/Vocab.. Nice Punch 8/10

Cut U Up In Two Or Three, Just To Laugh At Ure Pieces, Its A Tough Life -
Im To Rough Right? You Could Piss Me Off.. If You Did It Upright (piss standing) -
LOL.. Liked That Line.. 8/10

Expose This Bitch, She Knows This Shit, Leave Her Open Like Sandal Holes -
Punches? She Cant Handle Those, Stick Her From The Waist Like She Had Camel Toe -
LMAO.. wow.. Nice Flow.. 9/10

Mad At My Verbs, Tragic For Hers.. Defeat her Wit Magical Werds -
Battles Infered.. That I Took The 2 Bitches In Her Sig And Added A Third -

Excellent Finisher Here.. 9/10

Overall - 40/50
I Seen Better.. Yes.. But This Wasn't At
All Bad... Very Humorous Wit Nice Personals





Quote:
Originally posted by ~LaDy DiViNiTy~


I Pack-The-Hits,Grab-Ya-Dick,Cuz It's Like A Crappy Armageddon Da Way I'll Impact Ya Shit
it’s Like This! Calda’s My Friend So I'll Throw "Peace Punches" The Way I "Pass A Fist”
Great Flow.. Loved It 8/10

Ya Rapz Are Dull In “Desperate” Need Of Change & All I Can Spare Is Ya Life
But Calda Is Merdered! You Jus Scared Of A Mic Tore Through Ya Flesh Like A Knife
Nice.. But I Herd The Merdered Line In Every One Of His Battles 6/10

Brutally Pound Ya Octics With Phone Keys, Till Ya Pupils Begin To Dial Eight
My Stylez Great! Biting Cleopatra’z Scriptures & You Stoll Can’t A-Nile-Ate
Great Wordplay ! Wow 8/10

Cant 'Defeat-My-High-Ends' This 'Dude-Lies-Tense' You 'Need-My-Guidance'
You Jus One Of Them Kats That’s Sound Better With Silent, This Chickz 2 Violent
Ight.. Good Flow, Weak Punch 6/10

Damn Homme You Too Soft, But Anywayz Nice Attempt!
Placing Pennies Under Scopes Is Calda’s Way Of Being ‘Mag-Ni-Fi-Cent’
Not A Bad Finisher 7/10

Overall - 35/50
Your Flow Was Off The Wall.. But Thats Pretty Much
It.. One Line With Excellent Wordplay But
Not Really Hard Hitting Punches.. WHich I Look
For In Battles.. Therefore For My Vote Goes To
Calda


Vote - Calda Merda


Dimez 10-12-03 01:59 PM

Phillie Blunt da fukk outahea learn to vote!


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DIE!DIE!DIE!

LoL

Calda Merda 10-12-03 02:19 PM

LoL .. VOTE SWAYER !!! :)

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Avalon 10-12-03 02:23 PM

THE AVALON BREAKDOWN..!


(ya'll know I don't vote on battles... in FL... but...)



Calda... Let's see... I'll go line for line... :D

We Chill, I'll Give You That Much.. But When It Comes To It.. You SUck ! -
Enuff.. I'm Comin In Wit Kicks For Laughs.. Cuz I Dont Even Need A Punch -

Mmmmmk... for an opener... blah'k... set it was BLAH... punch was ok... should have been worded better... not bad though... Av says... 5.5...

Battle? You Cant Be Serious.. So Humor Me -
Its Like Sayin You Got Ure Period.. b4 You Hit Puberty -

Nice... played... but nice... I like what you did with it... I don't know why... Just did... Av says... 7.5...

Cut U Up In Two Or Three, Just To Laugh At Ure Pieces, Its A Tough Life -
Im To Rough Right? You Could Piss Me Off.. If You Did It Upright (piss standing) -

LMAO... nice... nice... for what it was... shit was nice... Av says... 7.0...

Expose This Bitch, She Knows This Shit, Leave Her Open Like Sandal Holes -
Punches? She Cant Handle Those, Stick Her From The Waist Like She Had Camel Toe -

This line was your best... rhymescheme flawless... punch was ok... but the rhymescheme carried it... great diss... Av says... 8.0...

Mad At My Verbs, Tragic For Hers.. Defeat her Wit Magical Werds -
Battles Infered.. That I Took The 2 Bitches In Her Sig And Added A Third -

Hum... I usually don't like punches like this... and this was no exception... but i do em... so... Av says... 6.5...

34.5 outta 50... not bad...



MMMMMMMmmk... Lady... here we go...

I Pack-The-Hits,Grab-Ya-Dick,Cuz It's Like A Crappy Armageddon Da Way I'll Impact Ya Shit
it’s Like This! Calda’s My Friend So I'll Throw "Peace Punches" The Way I "Pass A Fist”

better opener... the set up was pretty blah... but the word play was ok... wow... that's still a blahk... oh well... could have been word better... Av says... 6.0

Ya Rapz Are Dull In “Desperate” Need Of Change & All I Can Spare Is Ya Life
But Calda Is Merdered! You Jus Scared Of A Mic Tore Through Ya Flesh Like A Knife

I'm sorry... I didn't feel this at all... ok play of his name... but honestly... nothing stood out... :( Av says... 5.0 cause it rhymed...

Brutally Pound Ya Octics With Phone Keys, Till Ya Pupils Begin To Dial Eight
My Stylez Great! Biting Cleopatra’z Scriptures & You Stoll Can’t A-Nile-Ate

Hum... pretty good wordplay... not a big diss/punch... but you could have done more with it... Av says... 6.0...

Cant 'Defeat-My-High-Ends' This 'Dude-Lies-Tense' You 'Need-My-Guidance'
You Jus One Of Them Kats That’s Sound Better With Silent, This Chickz 2 Violent

The line would have been better if you dropped "this chickz 2 violent" but good multis... great rhyme scheme... Av says 7.5...

Damn Homme You Too Soft, But Anywayz Nice Attempt!
Placing Pennies Under Scopes Is Calda’s Way Of Being ‘Mag-Ni-Fi-Cent’

Hum... a played line... I think you could have done a little better with it... not a bad closer though... Av says 6.0...

30.5 outta 50...



Av says... Vote: Calda Merda... better set ups... better punches... You both need to elevate but not a bad battle... You should go another round... seriously...


Av...

13th Disciple 10-12-03 02:31 PM

okay.....caldra came aiight.....blah blah blah.....decent punches
what not.....good structure.......Lady came better wit wordplay
punches and flow.....i was impressed cuz i see she changed her
style....nice battle...

vote=Lady Divinity

Cryptic Thoughts 10-12-03 02:35 PM

Calda takes this one barely.
Both can come better than this.
Divinity needs to get rid of the quotes.
But still nice.

Calda takes it however with better punches.
Round 2 would be interesting.

Cryptic Thoughts 10-12-03 02:36 PM

Almost forgot.
I'd edit but it wont let me.
So can ya'll hit up me vs D-Ranged Skills.

It would be appreciated.

Calda Merda 10-12-03 02:50 PM

Thats 2 - 3.. Cryptic Hit Lady Divinity
SUmone Change The Polls.. Thanks For
The Votes.. From People I Admire

UPPIN

Dimez 10-12-03 03:15 PM

We should do a second round.........



3 barz LOL


what you say??




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ILLunatic 10-12-03 03:18 PM

Tight Shit From You Both
Nice Job Calda Merda For Holdin Junior Productions Down
And Gotta Give Props To Lady Divinity
Ya'll Both Came Tight
But Honestly I Thought Lady Took It
No Hate Calda
But Her Punches Came Harder
But I'm Not Poll Votin...............

TaxBack 10-12-03 03:21 PM

nice guys , i want to vote but the fuckin poll doesn,t want me to ' I tried in many other battles and it says I didn,t do an explanation vote vote , so before doing one tell how the fuck why doesn't it works ???

Avalon 10-12-03 03:22 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by ~LaDy DiViNiTy~
We should do a second round.........



3 barz LOL


what you say??




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I swear I like her more and more..!

ILLunatic 10-12-03 03:24 PM

LMFAO At Av............
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You Gotta Poll Vote
With Internet Explorer
Only Way It Works
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TaxBack 10-12-03 03:26 PM

Shit I'm on internet explorer , why does it not work, I hate this shit..
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ILLunatic 10-12-03 03:29 PM

I Have No Clue
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It Was Like That
With Mine For A
While
Eventually It Started
To Work............
So Only Thing Ta Do
Is Be Patient

TaxBack 10-12-03 03:31 PM

the only shit it gives me is you id not do your explanation vote , and it did that in the other battle of Calda merda and I voted 3 times shit

Dimez 10-12-03 03:32 PM

LoL...... TaxBack.....
ur funny bro



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UPPIN'

pCe 10-12-03 03:34 PM

better punches and flow gets lady the win'

good verses both of ya

vote-lady

peep dis and drop an honest vote..all of you

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...?threadid=85066

pCe

CasalenA 10-12-03 03:34 PM

punches: Lady
Metas: Lady
Personals: C
Vocab: Lady
Style: LOVED LADYS
Structure: Both, c's is pretty cool
Multies: C
Flow: Lady

Lady you are pretty sick for a chick , ya get my vote nice battle
Peace out girl feel free to pm me, you got MSN or aol?


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