~Da-Prophecy~ VS WORDPERFECT
 

no d/r
no crew
no bar count
no holds............

Yo..

Brace-ya-form for the force I’m bringing, ya shit just makes-me-yawn
It’s like you ready to steal autumn the way you bout to “take-a-fall”
You insane-to-call me out, I got the brains-and-brawn to break-ya-jaw
You skilled? Doesn’t “ring a bell(e)”, like French bachelors afraid-to-call
WP just fakes-he’s-raw, he’s getting smoked quicker-than-small-blunts
And even with red crayons, this dim witted bitch-couldn’t-draw-blood
Proph-bringing-raw-stuff, equipped to leave Word~Perfect's-jaw-fucked
The closest u’ll get to “bakin” me is the fact that ya script-is-a-“bore”-son (bacon, boar)
And the proof of that’s in his name, watch Perfect “drag on” in his rappin’
The worst you could do to me… is remind me you’re in my faction ---


Could u also restrict urs to ten lines ??

Uppn ..

Where is u ??

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^^ It seems that its ur turn to post ..

Da Prophecy U should of trie dharder in our battle

I liked ur opener hear it was sick

Use this stile for now on, fuck the bold lettring and shit It confuses people, stick to this and stop wastin ya good verswes on shit ppl, earn respect around here

PaYcE

word where you at nigga? u gon' no show on da prophecy? hahahahahahaha what a pussy............................................. ..................................

blah ..

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im here shit i aint know bout the battle im sorry dawg im here though............................................ .................................................. .................................................. ............

the PROPHECY is the prophet~sees no profit-so stop it-
you tried to get in whos ass?this fags~just~mad im cock blocken..
either your ego got this kid gassed-or he a comedien who catches laughes-think 1-1 means something?It only proves your half ass.
Acting like you at my level,but cant see M.K.C-You my clone, get off my dick MINIE ME.look it up in the dictionary....an OMEN is a PROPHECY-they go synonomously- but it don’t apply stop dreamin-you only share my style when you spit my semon.see the PROPHECY came true- and so did the OMEN...I just FUCKED YOU!!!!!!!

wordplay-tie
vocab-wp
flow-p
punches-wp
flow-tie
overal-close but wp barely gets it

either your ego got this kid gassed-or he a comedien who catches laughes-think 1-1 means something?It only proves your half ass.
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i dont know if u meant to but that line was funny to me cuz it was a double meaning and shit haha

Brace-ya-form for the force I’m bringing, ya shit just makes-me-yawn
It’s like you ready to steal autumn the way you bout to “take-a-fall”
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dope shit

peace

uhh this battle was aight---DP had a nice flow, couple aight punches, good scheme------WP had an ok flow, sum aight disses--structure sucked---my vote is DP he came harder with the punches-------

prophecy hit my battles up in the sig------oneee

1-1................................................. .....yo i could of gave better dp but i rushed cause i know i made you waite...my bust twin i didnt know you had set this battle for us.

i was always under impression opunches personals and dissess won not structute and flow so i have to seriously work on that in compition nobody cared about how it was composed just if you hit the other rapper harder....im hoping thats why im 0-5 not that i cant diss...lol

either your ego got this kid gassed-or he a comedien who catches laughes-think 1-1 means something?It only proves your half ass.

yes herbal that was supposed to have ironic multimeaning thnks for noticing that pop

wordplay-Tie
vocab-Word~perfect
flow-Da Prophecy
punches-Wordperfect
over all-Wordperfect

I felt word perfects verse was harder with the fact of his punches, prophecy flow was pure heat an had good lines but i was feeling words more peace

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Da-Prophecy's Verse

Brace-ya-form for the force I’m bringing, ya shit just makes-me-yawn
It’s like you ready to steal autumn the way you bout to “take-a-fall”

First line extremely weak punch. 2nd line was nice shit.

You insane-to-call me out, I got the brains-and-brawn to break-ya-jaw
You skilled? Doesn’t “ring a bell(e)”, like French bachelors afraid-to-call

First line has good flow...but no punches(I don't consider "break-ya-jaw" a punch...it's just in there to fit the flow aka filler. 2nd line had good wordplay, but it was a weak punch.

WP just fakes-he’s-raw, he’s getting smoked quicker-than-small-blunts
And even with red crayons, this dim witted bitch-couldn’t-draw-blood

First line's played. 2nd was nice

Proph-bringing-raw-stuff, equipped to leave Word~Perfect's-jaw-fucked
The closest u’ll get to “bakin” me is the fact that ya script-is-a-“bore”-son (bacon, boar)

Stop talkin about yourself...every line should be focused on dissin the other person. 2nd line was okay.

And the proof of that’s in his name, watch Perfect “drag on” in his rappin’
The worst you could do to me… is remind me you’re in my faction ---

First was decent. 2nd was okay.

Overall it was a decent verse. Your flow is awesome. You lack the punches to match it though. You had a few good ones in there, but all flow and few punches makes it a much weaker verse.

WP's Verse

the PROPHECY is the prophet~sees no profit-so stop it-
you tried to get in whos ass?this fags~just~mad im cock blocken..

1st was decent, 2nd was funny...but a fag line.

either your ego got this kid gassed-or he a comedien who catches laughes-think 1-1 means something?It only proves your half ass.

First line filler, 2nd line was eh.

Acting like you at my level,but cant see M.K.C-You my clone, get off my dick MINIE ME.look it up in the dictionary....an OMEN is a PROPHECY-they go synonomously-

First line Filler. 2nd line was EXTREMELY stretched and pretty weak.

but it don’t apply stop dreamin-you only share my style when you spit my semon.

First line filler. 2nd wasn't very hard hitting

see the PROPHECY came true- and so did the OMEN...I just FUCKED YOU!!!!!!!

Wasn't feelin the last line at all....sorry

Overall I think Da-Prophecy had a much stronger verse. Definitely had a better structure, edged WP in the flow. DP's verse had much harder hitting pucnhes also. Good battle ya'll but

Vote - ~Da-Prophecy~

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i think da proph's shit hit harder in punches and was more consistent
that's my word
flow = da proph
punches = proph
creativity = proph

vote = proph

hit these battles up
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cant vote on this but uppin it for wp and dp, yo wp if you ever wanted help battling i could try to give you some tips im nothing special but i will give u a hand for sure

ok overall i think ~Da-Prophecy~ took this with his punches...but let me break it down real quick....

flow:~Da-Prophecy~
vocab:Word~perfect
wordplay:tie
punches:~Da-Prophecy~
overall:~Da-Prophecy~....like i said i think he came with the better verse, was feeling his punches more...so his punches are the reason he won it...

so my vote:~Da-Prophecy~

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Uppn Damn ! :D

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Uppn ............

BREAKENDALE:

breakin it down:

flow n structure: profecy
punches and personals:profecy


I think this verse was ill as fuck and was creative


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could y'all hit this up please, this is gettin slept on really, really bad and its a good battle........basically sleepin is pissin me off.......VOTE!!!

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