Self Evaluation
 

intro:
I'm in my anger management class for self help right...and the psychiatrist keeps askin' me all these questionz like he don't know the answer or some shit...

(psychiatrist speaking)-"Tomas...how would you describe yaself??????"

verse 1:

hmmm...lack of sleep...packin' heat...I sold crack and weed on blackend streets...
rap with ease...so rapidly...take 2 hits and pass the leaf...I had to be a fast ass thief...

(psychiatrist)-"how did you rob people??????"

I said "lady give ya cash to me...before I have to snatch ya keys...
I didn't care about her saddened pleas...all I knew was I had to eat...

(psychiatrist)-"so...how'd you get caught??????"

well...I never quite intended on gettin' cought with my man...
but the last day we was jackin' was kinda sloppily planned...
it happened one sunny day when I was out with my manz...
we seen some bagz layin' on the beach...out in the sand...
the owner of the car accidently reported the shit stolen at 1st...
so when the cops seen up run into it...they pulled us over and searched...
I was forced to sit on the pavement...and it was hot on the street...
on the floorboard in the car were the bagz that we just got from the beach...

(psychiatrist) "ok...ya session for today is over...thank you and have a nice day Tomas...

thank you...for wastin' my money and time...the sun doezn't shine when fake rappaz be frontin' in rhymez...
you won't feel all optimitic when ya fam in the hood diez...you'll feel sorrow...
have a nice day...good-bye...I guess that I'ma have to see you tomorrow...

HOLY SHIT... THATS WAS THE ILLEST DROP... holy shit dude keep postin u really r tight as fuck dawg i have no idea how u do ur shit but hell keep on doing it.. i loved the vocbab the wordplay all off it i enjoyed it and look forward to future posts

Damn i am like gonna print this shit and like frame it then hang it in my room or some shit but this is off tha hook

:D...thanks...I was just experimenting with it...I'ma put it in audio when i have someone to play the "phychiatrists" part...lol

thats'd be tight to put it in audio when u do give me a holla so i can check it

this shit is tight but i coulkdnt use this structure it aint me

i was definietely feel that homie, that was dope as fuck, great idea for a topic, somethin new, overall that was a tight ass post, hit me back when that shit goes to audio.

peace.......

yo that was an ill drop dude, nice topic nice flow,
structute was kinda choppy thoght,


keep doin wat ya doin,


hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85079

^^ \yeah for real KoT is my main man

fo shizzle when u put that shit on audio like burn it on to a CD then send it here dawg

This was pretty good you should turn it into audio and make something good out of it nice drop though mang keep it coming..1

Favorite lines..

Nice..

yo that shit was pretty tight i liked the flowed it seemed to come together well as a whole piece...keep droppin...u ne gud at audio...cuz that would be pretty dope on audio...
peace

that shit was ill
if that was an expirament you should exiprament more often
you should keep droppin those rhymes
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i cant wait till you put that on audio
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^^ u know u could add that all into one post u dont have to length it out to get more posts u dumbass.. u need to quit doin that shit...

what about you just stick all of yours together you DUMB SHIT
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yeah but i posted mine at all different times not one afta the other... and this aint no place to talk this is fo feedback bitch and if u really wanna talk shit i wanna see u back it so i will set up a battle soon

^^^ill merk u all, ha ha ha, anywho, quit freepostin u herbs, if u wanna freepost, freepost in ur battle, not in the man, the myth, and the mystery's(King of Thieves) thread.....

peace.......

^^^thanks for the props y'all...and I like that "man,myth,mystery thing...;)...I feel all dope and stuff now...lol

it was like whoa..
ok seriously...this was very good
the way you did it was nice... the conversation idea
most people fuck that up...good drop kid
if you would be so kind
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84636

^^^thanks TR...this was a keystyle too...all my open mics are...hard to believe ain't it...lol...and aiiight...I'ma check ya piece right now...

hi...

^^HI

this was dope homey i liked everything about it
it was good....
nice drop keep dropin the dope ishhhh....Pz

P.S= i am the ILLEST

why the fuck did u just say hi??? eh whatever its all good dawg cause dis flow was sweet so it deserves hi i guess so yeah

I liked how you put this together...
the style of it sounds kinda line Eminem off of his second album...
dont remember the song, but it was like this ^^^... nice drop
with an original topic... dont forget to use structure to dawgy...
but keep doin this, cause I like readin em.
Ashy

it had structure...I just had to seperate it when the psychiatrist spoke...but all the linez are about the same length

yeah this shit was ill god damn ur takin to long put this out on audio alreaady