Hi my name is vs. aprenticekid15
 

14 lines max
due by 1:30
no hate crew d/r or any of those whack shit votes
no quoting votes...explain well

no feeding n all that...

I'll keep my mouth shut, His sig says only speak when spoken to,
Cuz his spits is in 1 ear n out the other...Your whackness i'm immune,
You sound scratchy, Wit more break ups than J Lo,
You wouldn't be good in this battle...Even if ya wore the Halo,
Game Ova! You lose I win, Let's just call it a truce,
Ya right, I'll sack this bitch as if my alias was Smith, Bruce,
Hit you wit a duece, cuz you'll never be around a 1,
Your fallin behind, Like all battles you contain L's istead of won's,
Askin 21 qeustions, I'm not relatin to 50 but Curious George,
They say you'sa a dick but you a pussy to me...We're unsure!
Kid is like a Juice Box drink, Only half of him is pure,
Your shit kid, N the other half stinks...So i take it your manure!
Only when ya asked to battle genorously...Is when ya Pleased me,
I'm livin in Harmony, Hard like Bone, It equals to me takin this E-Z

^^^ain't that bad. nice punches........................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................

IIGHT Dawg..ur outta ur league HEre WE GO FIREEE!!!


Your 75% record, is it supposed to be intimidatin? now i peeped and im angered, spits slash to penetrate in/
Till your read my verse and start hypervenalatin/

Im hard wit titanium flows, tactical blows, and hi yes im happy to kno/
That wins in the southern direction, will forever blow/

BITCHERY:
talkin third person, faggot u best.....get ya men-straight/
only reason u even stepped to me because, cuz right now u menstrate/

Its gametime, faggot b4 i spit u come blow the god/
After this u stay pissed and sayin nuttin, like AP was a mod, And u said no feedin cuz u kno u bite more, than a bad blow job/

no personals, the only shit u find on me is from ur own spit/
Curious bitch! he feelin ma verse liked he fingered himself wit ma pen chrome tip/

OWNED:
APadvanced placement, due to over the top stimulatin statements/
Hi My Name is name is simulatin Flakness/

Ima slap you around, then let your face go/
Cuz no ones feelin ya hi, like u forgot........and turned the bass low/

BReakdown of meanings
4th-5th line means :Wins=Winds Souther direction i went under him!

and last line im not sure about the spellin but u kno bass like treble and shit
if ur not a newb excuse this

IIGHT UPPIN NUMBA !1111111111111111111 hit this and leave ur own links lets go yalllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll

aprentice kid took this battle. hi my name is a lil bit of elevation is needed before u take on someone of this level. u had a nice verse and all but aprentice's verse was just too strong. aprentice had better flow structure creativity wordplay and punches. big ups to both.

my vote=aprenticekid

hit dis wit a honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84883

Punches: Apprentice
Flow: Hi
Structure: Hi
Personals: Both i think, not really
Metas/Similes: Apprentice
Vocab: Apprentice

Apprentice takes it wit his vocab basically, other dude was basic

Apprentice U must hit this up wit an honest one for this honest Vote...........thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85248

fuckin newbie kids... punches n personals win a battle
if this was in elite i'd have the win...
SO GET OFF MY NUTS YA FUCKIN SQUIRRELS

lol... can we get any real voters?

^^^^^^nice battle i'll drop a vote if its still open when i get 100 posts
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hi my name is- like stated above^, you should prolly elevate a lil,
before takin on someone who is a vet...
but you spit a decent verse... would have beat a lot of people on
here, but not in elite front lines...

Kid- nice shit, your flow was on, hit em wit some good punches, and had some good wordplay... took this easy dawg...

vote- apprenticekid

LIsten Hi My Name Is....if u think u won go post it in I.R. or sumin....if u want elite votes then go leave ur link in elite other wise shut the fuck up and sop swayin u lil herb........UPPINN 22222222222222222222222222

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...0851#post840851

^^
Drop an honest vote and I'll return the favor here wit an honest vote.

Vote Hi My name is

A.T your wack.........and apprentice is not a vet..............his verse was horrible..........the only thing he had was flow and wordplay...........his punches were soft and no personals............

My name is........you had a good verse.....with some solid punches and personals.....work on your flow..........that would help your verse..........

Vets dont let My name is get dicked...........cuz he definetly won

thank u tak.. this kid is not a vet...read some legends or somethin herb...
u'll know how 2 do a verse.. until then
GET OFF MY NUTS YA FUCKIN SQUIRRELS!

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COme On Yall Dont Sleep On this battle HIT THIS UP AND LEAVE A LINK IIGHT\
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i say aprentice got this i liked his verse better for style and punches flow was off a bit but so was your opponets but both verses were like eaqual but ima go with aprentice cuz his seemed more nautural and creative

hit this with a vote honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...47&pagenumber=2

aprentice kid killed him

taktik....wat u thinkin

can u both plz go vote on dis

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85499

aight my names verse was nice......on the eye and taktik there werent that many solid punches.....apprentice punches were aight.....except for explainin yaself afta the verse but jus edgin it was ap.......thats in punches.....he def aint a vet tho....
vote=aPPrentice

make sure ya hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1