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Re-Match: Mary~Jane ..vs.. ~LaDy DiViNiTy~
You might have won the 1st time but theres a reason for this re-match..... ur the only loss on my record
10 barz no hate votes no crew votes no riding (like last time) no feeding regular battle procedures apply! I chose Elite because I know for a fact there are good voters..... Blind Spit..... Aight Let The Gamez Begin!!!!!1 |
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13th says....good luck to both. I am watching this battle closely.
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--==INTRO==--
This Bitch is Tryin to Be Hard, Drivin Around Lookin Pretty In Painted Flower Cars But She Couldnt Even Spit Two Strong Lines if Mary~Jane Ate Power Bars Guess She Thought I Was Scared A Females, Now Shes In a Mess for Women Textcees (Puts Skirt On MJ) Here Put This On....... Now You Can Be A-Dressed Correctly Mary~Jane I’ll Take My Blade & Halve Ya Brain, Now Make A Split-Decision Even If I impaled Ya Toungue With A Protractor U Coulnt’t Spit Percision You Couldn’t Outsmart me In Punches If You Fought Mimes With Clever Hands Dismembered Strands,Ya Talent Ain’t Seen Like Live Kids Walkin Out Michaels Neverland Getting’ Personal So Why’d U Cum To RB? Let Me see… To Tell My Man He’s Fine?& Send PPL Nude Pics2 Get Votes? Drownded Ya Chances Like Gay Navy Boats, The Only Time She Good Is When Posting Quotes Bitch Learn How To Gain Respect, Get Da Fuck Off My Clit Immidiately This Battle Is Like Ya Man He Got Busted And Locked Up So Easily I’ve Asked Around, WHOSE THE WACKEST & We All Agree, U Deserve The Crown Now You Getting Smoked Faster Then Crack Infronta Whitney Huston & Bobby Brown (Last Battle)You Robbed Me Faster Then Baggin’ Groceries For A Living @ “Stop And Shop” I ‘Snap’ While Ya Hands ‘Crackle’ Cuz They Only Good In Use When Makin A Cock ‘Pop’ I Actually Have Pitty Cuz Ur 18 And You Already Have A Kid I Hope She Wont Grow Up 2 Be Like U I’ll Rape This Bitch Worse Then The Petafile baby-Daddy Of Her Child And Say “Look What I Can Do” --==FINISHER==-- I OWN IT! Tiered Of Beating Newbies Mary~Jane Ain’t Even A Worthy Opponent Divinity Is Endin This Battle So FAST No Photographer Could Capture The Moment |
you want your second loss handed by the same girl that served ya first defeat
She heavens new angel cuz i bring a verse wit heat, and leave Divinity deceased rematch? wrong its the same match cuz im rippin ya twice battlin me you like blinds walkin in traffic, cuz u lackin the sight to you my game is black n white, cuz im turnin your day into night shootin ya down from ya height, like the taliban im endin ya flight In this race you were lazily pacing when instead of bringing beef you brought canadian bacon So I’ll leave you smoking like Jamaicans, and return the favor by making YOU the canadian bakin You couldnt propell ya self, wit tails like whales or sperm cells and you could rap endorsed by Microsoft and still couldnt excel cuz rappin aint for you girl, what you thought your lyrics were glory? Like that show Mory, ya ass is just bringin another story like your avatar, im here for nothin to but control ya world(matrix) I'll put you in the same position that yo father does, cuz your life is `over girl` !!LMAO!! i dont mean to make fun, but you know im runnin tha house and ya battle record represents ya profession if the 1 is ya mouth(LOL) you say my votes were rides last time, whats that all about? wanna talk about dicks? check whos up in ya house and whats up in ya mouth! this wins on lock, Lady gonna come wit wack lines and weak disses this hurts comin vicious, cuz like `female boxers` all your `punches are Mrs.`(misses) |
All them Cyber kids browsin,.......thinkin the can have sum LMFAO Pathetic :)
Iite Lady divin took this ,.......punches hit harder, ......and flowed nice, ...and had a nice real nice structure,......Mary,.....needs elevation, ....concepts, are way to borin , and un-original..... Better Overall Vote - Lady Divin |
the first rap rookie was accepted into the KKK...
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Rookie?...
lol Jus elevate and shut^^ :).....if u cant take a loss, .....dont battle,......She Ripped U Have a nice day....... Uppin 4 votes.. |
see the thing is.. you are really a rookie, cuz u dont even understand what I just wrote... but anyways uppin
oh by the way have a nice day yourself ;) |
Mary~Jane Had A Decent Overall Verse, She Did Alot Better With Her Punches At The End Of Her Verse. But If Alot Of What Lady Divinity Said Is True, GOTDAMN Thats Mean. But Lady Did Stay More Consistent Even Though She Lost Track Through The Start Of Her Middle Part(If That Makes Any Sense). This Was A PRetty Good Battle, But Ya Both Need To Work On Flow, Because Sometimes in Both verses, The Flow Just Went Off Somewhere. Also, Alot Of Material On Both Sides Were Played, So Thats Also Something To Look Out For.
Vote-Lady Divinity, Her Punches Hit Harder, And They Were More Consistent. |
nice vote S.Dot thanks
and uppin |
actually...........i beg to differ, I think MJ took this tho
I was feeling her disses alot more, think it came out stronger This Bitch is Tryin to Be Hard, Drivin Around Lookin Pretty In Painted Flower Cars ^^^ an iiight line But She Couldnt Even Spit Two Strong Lines if Mary~Jane Ate Power Bars ^^^played out, all those candy bar type lines are played..... Guess She Thought I Was Scared A Females, Now Shes In a Mess for Women Textcees ^^nothing really hittin (Puts Skirt On MJ) Here Put This On....... Now You Can Be A-Dressed Correctly ^^^nothing really again Mary~Jane I’ll Take My Blade & Halve Ya Brain, Now Make A Split-Decision ^^^this is played and since today this is the 5th time ive seen this line Even If I impaled Ya Toungue With A Protractor U Coulnt’t Spit Percision ^^^nice You Couldn’t Outsmart me In Punches If You Fought Mimes With Clever Hands ^^not bad Dismembered Strands,Ya Talent Ain’t Seen Like Live Kids Walkin Out Michaels Neverland ^^^^^^ that shit was ill right there, no doubt about it wether the personals were true or what, it didnt hit that hard to say... the bobby and whitney line was good Divinity Is Endin This Battle So FAST No Photographer Could Capture The Moment ^^^ that was tight MJ started off okay battlin me you like blinds walkin in traffic, cuz u lackin the sight ^^^ played In this race you were lazily pacing when instead of bringing beef you brought canadian bacon So I’ll leave you smoking like Jamaicans, and return the favor by making YOU the canadian bakin (nice) the microsoft/excel was nice I'll put you in the same position that yo father does, cuz your life is `over girl` !!LMAO!! (LMAO LMAO LMAO) the [representing proffesion/1 in ya mouth] line was nice, i understood it basically MJ took this with more consistent & harder punches Flow = Both Punches = MJ Personals = Both Wordplay = MJ Creativity = MJ Metas = Lady Div Structure = MJ Consistency = MJ i think u ppl need to read MJ's verse more no hate to both, just honest feedback goodshit from both Lady Div needs to be more consistent wit it |
^ Ok..... I See How It Is
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yall stop bitchin....accept the votes....no clit riders up in this
bitch......and let the best verse win....and by the way.....L.D., *pulls down pants*...oh wait...not here?...my bad.....lol |
i dont know y u startin shit girl, its obvious u havent read the whole shit i wrote if u did, u'd see i thought u had some nice lines, but some i wasnt feelin and were played
read da vote i dropped again and stop bitchin, i bet u read like the first 6 lines and started gettin an attitude dont b trippin like that................... |
Elite Frontlines Battle Rules
2. Another solution is to stop users from users upping their battles 25 times to get votes. From now on you are not allowed to UP your own battle more than 5 times. IF YOU UP YOUR THREAD MORE THAN 5 TIMES YOU WILL BE DQ'd. With rule #1 being in effect, there will be less battles to weed through in the Front Lines, so this should not be as big of a problem as you would imagine. If you need that one last vote, or more votes in general, you are to vote on someone else's battle and simply put a link to your battle after your vote as I stated in my previous announcement. (they take this serious.......so yall be careful....) |
Thank You!~
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werd good looks 13th
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werd.
dont freepost. period. @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ @@@@ and remember that upping rule. |
werd.
dont freepost. period. @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ @@@@ and remember that upping rule. |
What Ever Happened To The Voters?
Come On Vote!Vote!Vote! .................................................. .................................................. ..... |
The Breakdown:
punchez:tie personalz:Lady D multi'z-Lady D flow-Mary~J structure-Lady D overall-Lady D and Mary~J if you really send niggaz naked pics online...you gotta hook it up girl for real... |
Aight thats 3-1...........
too bad u didnt vote on the polllllllllll ah well still uppin! .................................................. .................................................. .... |
I Say Both Of You Send Me A Naked Pic... & Whoever Looks The
Best... I Will Vote For... Send To Win... MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH |
^^ Your sick, Get Help! fo Real
But I Sure Wouldn't Wanna See You naked.... & Niether would M~J LoL .................................................. .................................................. ..... |
people stop wit that gay rumor.. what are yal 10 or something? lol
even if i did send ya naked pics yall wouldnt have the dick to use em |
^ There We Go.. So eave It At That!
Just need Sum More Votes..... Uppin Again .................................................. .................................................. ..... |
LOL naked pics eh
Punches: both Wordplay: Mary as usual Flow: Lady Creativity: Lady Vocab: Lady Metas/Similes: Mary Lady takes this by a hair, sick female battle never thought Ide see one Now Lady I see u online please hit this up honest http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...=5&pagenumber=3 |
Aww thats 4-1 plz vote on pollz
and yeah I will check ya battle out! .................................................. .................................................. ..... ~LadyD~ Still Uppin |
um.....when did this change from a battle....unto a porno?....damn
i was lookin for some votes...instead find talk about Nakedness.... |
Ye I Know, PERVERTSSSSSS LoL Jp
Cuz It Sais It In My Verse! But Anyways I Just Need 1 More Vote... Cuz Some Ppl Dont Poll Vote.............................................. .............. |
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I got a dick...and I know how to use it...;) ...I only live like 45 mins. away from you...:D |
Ok....
Well thats ur private business with Mary~Jane so NO MORE FREEPOSTING PLZ more ovte and I win... But I need Poll Votes .................................................. .................................................. ..... |
This battle was wack... Why is it not in FL..?! Vote Lady hands down... just a better verse... PERIOD...
AV HAS SPOKEN... |
LD took this with harder punches and mroe personals, flow was lacking by both verses, it was pretty close, but as i said LD edged the win with harder personals, and overall better verse.
Best Line of Battle: I Actually Have Pitty Cuz Ur 18 And You Already Have A Kid I Hope She Wont Grow Up 2 Be Like U ^LOL, harsh lmfao...... My Vote = LD pCe |
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