|
King of Thievez vs X Ecution
10 lines
40 min blind post hopefully if u see this check in lets go.....1 |
this is ma check in im waitn for king.......................
......... ......... .......... ............ .................1 |
u fuckn homo y u duckn u respond to ma callout n dont even check in wut the fuck is wrong wit u..............
ill give u till 10 pm tonite to drop and check in or else ima get another challenger who will atually spit............1 |
my fault...checkin' in...I just got back home...I went out to eat somrthin' right quick...but...I'm here now...and you still online...so...let's start now...
|
fine u gotta post like soon tho.............
............ ............ ............ .............. ............... |
you wanted to battle...but I'm still awaitin' the X Ecution...
get raped as ya retribution...this kid's great?????? but yet you losin'... after this battle you goin' end up runnin' back to ya mom... how you called X Ecution when I come off the head with an ax in my palm... you ain't an Exacutioner you just practice fetishes with ya man and a belt... we both touch kidz when we spit...the difference...I keep my handz to myself... this battle's one sided...but I'ma have this guy merked from both wayz... I'ma await the X Ecution...but I'm probably gonna die 1st from old age... dog...you may have a good record...but that only meanz I son vets... after I await the X Ecution...I'ma ask if ya wack ass is done yet... |
^^ NICE PROPS
KING PEEP DA LINK MAN ME AN U http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85463 go chec kin so we can do this no rush on da time....lets just get this dont before we both go SWeet verse Feelin it X shud come hard makin this a clean battle KING ME AN U ITS SET UP X ECUTION I want to battle u if u down Just set it up an pm me da link PC uppin for yall both |
Why you cluttering up the boards with ur 4 names and all ya trashy racket/
As an emcee, you couldn't be straight in a psychopathic jacket/ u try n perplex ma shyt but couldnt see the win thru my eyes/ Ill try and elevate ur skill... hopefully like a magician ill make the floor rise/ I think i need to realease caution tape for theives so he kno from the gate/ Cause i keep killin these kids b4 they come out, i guess im increasin the abortion rate/ I'm a spit sum shit, in time watch me eat dis slut/ Punches so hard, ur neck'll hav to send a postcard to ya head just 2 keep in touch/ u Could Stab Me Wit The Alphabet An Couldn’t Kill Me in Text/ Now I shall Sharpen My Pencil An Sentence You To Death/ |
^^^ X TOOK IT IN YM EYES
CLose battle KIng came out wit heat neevr seen him do dat before never da less X had sum coo punches sUm where fake but he took my vote vote_x http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84491 ^^ vote honestly |
Ok... King Of Thievez Said Awaiting X Ecution To Many Times
::BreakDown:: Flow-Close Punches- X Wordplay-X Multies-Neither Vocab-X Overall Vote- X Ecution |
we need breakdownz...like so...
structure- punchez- personals- flow- multi'z- creativity- overall- |
and also add vocab to the breakdown too............................................... .................................
|
Quote:
no multiez?????? look closer...every line I spit had a multi... |
king came nice...punches did'nt have much of an impact...disses were iight..flow was iight..did'nt quite feel the creativity....
X came nice also...punches hit a lil harder...disses were bout equal...nice flow...but X capped it off with his last four line which took this battle... vote X! |
aight ima say king of thievez takes this, heres my breakdown......
structure-tie flow-hella close so ima say tie vocab-tie multis-king creativity-uhhh......king punches-x personals-tie overall-king props to the both of ya, but ima say king of thievez takes this..... peace....... |
yeah well in my eyes king took this shit cause he ripped it to me cause he came marder wit the punches and had better structure and personals and shit.. i enjoyed readin his shit so yeah vote=king.
|
Quote:
indeed i agree except that both had weak usage of multies...just because u have multies in "every" line dont mean shit was ill u cant do stuff random just cuz anyway vote - x |
and just cause you Quote a vote don't mean that it counts...and if you actually read the versez you would see that I didn't just say random stuff...just about every bar was a punch...
|
[QUOTE]Originally posted by HERBAL
indeed i agree except that both had weak usage of multies...just because u have multies in "every" line dont mean shit was ill u cant do stuff random just cuz anyway now u just fittin ur name more herb, it wasnt random shit homie, start readin the damn battles before u vote.......sorry for the freepost......... peace...... |
this wasn a good battle...
x came with shitty multis started off with nice punces but got weak...the postcard punch was without a doubt the gayest i have ever heard... king had a more consistent flow but nothing that would make u asay DAMMMNNNNNN!!!!!. he was consistent and just that... vote= X for the simple fact that he mae the flow a little interesting compared to Kings whose was just.....................consistent. |
uhhh...ain't ya flow supposed to be consistent????? cause that's how you stay on a beat when you have a consistent flow and I'm an audio head...
|
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ more votes people please..............1 |
Quote:
|
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ more votes people please..............1 |
Flow-Both
Punches-X Metas/Smiles-X X Murks but yet again Only good line frum the newb was the thing about Old Age, but it was still basic Can u guys hit this u honestlyl, X dont overlookthis you Never peep my battles and I always vote yours honestly! http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85139 |
x got it
it was dumb close but i have to go wit him on this 1 structure-x flow-king vocan-x punches-x personals-x x just had hotter personals and pucnhes hit dis up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85309 |
gonna vote on dis shit. I think both drops where kinda even. King took the X Ecution thing to far. I was getting sick of it by the 4th line. Need to have more creativity with ya shit. Cause there was some good punches in there. X, well he whipped my ass once, he liked his drop. Good structure and creativity. The last four lines did it. Good to see King step up to X though and he came close. Really close..
Vote=X |
| All times are GMT -4. The time now is 05:34 AM. |