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No More Drama: f/Lady Divinity
yo.....its like....all the shit we been through.....all the pain we
had to endure.....its time to make that choice.....make that decision.....that we don't have to be involved wit it no more.... choose that we don't want this fuckin drama no more....its like this...... ~Lady Divinity Turn On The T.V And Tune In The Channel, Looks Like Everybody Plays A Role Everything Seems Just Like A Drama Series Cuz 2 Much Shitz Gone Out Of Control F*ck Drama, Screw It I’ve Constantly Been Through It, Too Much People Blew It Don’t Know How The Hell They Do It, But I Thought I Knew It, Too Much Shit To It Every Guy I’ve Been With Was Wack, Infact There Were Just 2 Many Times I ‘ve Been Attacked Next Day He Had The Nerve To Come Straight To My Face And Say “Baby Gurl I Want You Back” I Look In Ya Eyes In Despise Knowing That The Truth Is Covered In Lies I’ve Tried So Hard To Make It Work But He Was A Jerk, Lost Count Of Tries….. No1 Ever Sticks To Their Word From What I Heard, Blew Ya 1st Chance 2nd And third Every Time I Went To The Mall I’d Get A Call, Couldn’t Be In Peace While Eating Always Caught My Eyes On Some1 Cheatin, Then My Close Gurlz Beatin These Actors Rollz Are Played Out So When Will They Finally Retire? Prior To My Mind Spinnin And Going Outa Control Burnin On Fire Too Much Shits Sad, Too Much Shit Gone Wrong And Bad, Want A Sample? I Think That “NO MORE DRAMA” Song By Mary.J Blige Is A Perfect Example Theres Alwayz A Saying ,You Know That Quote That Sais “Look On The Bright Side Of Life”? Like What My Man’s Ex-Wife? Stabb Wounds Still Recovering From That Day She Pulled A Knife Been Abused Verbally, Emotionally, And Mentaly With This Dramatized Shit And Envy Some Shitz Just Not Meant To Be, When Will Every1 Come To An Understanding And Agree? Too Much Jealous Bitches Trying Put Me Down And Insult Me, They Revult me Been Put On Prescription Drugz On Top Of That.. My Psychyatrist Sayin Consult Me I Rip These Fakes And Fonies That Clame To Be My Homies Thinkin They Own Me Borrowin Cash So They Owe Me, You Jus Met Me How The Fuck Can U Know Me? (((((((((((((((((NO More Drama! (repeat) Fuck Drama! Im Sick of It))))))))))))))))))) 13th Disciple From the beginning it was drama.....i was breeched at birth abused & cursed,lower than dirt..pops made me eat the earth truth hurts,from flashbacks of tribulations,trials and pains bruised brain from rape games, young child carried much shame never da same,peer pressure & rejection in the process of growth leg broke,once both,father said he had to teach me approach lost hope,gained strength,balanced out to equal confused mental abuse,externally brused,prison bound chillin wit dudes rough grooves,rough life,tried seekin joy and married my wife much strife involvin a knife,tormented and depleted of life not right,been cheated and robbed out of pleasure and goals torn soul, ironic.....Highway to Heaven wit paid tolls.. empty bowls, forced to the streets...no love and no cheese no care & no heat, no drinks & no meat,no shelter,place of retreat accepted defeat,knocked off my feet,no role playing this drama caught wifey wit no pajamas...lost that title & gained baby mama I..............DON'T................FUCKIN........ .................WANNA!.. be chained & bound, held down, forced back to lose ground break free of the slavery,lay down and sleep wit no sounds throwback the thorned crown, done wit drama i'm breakin free focus on me, planted my seed,pruned the branches now time to harvest my tree....... fuck drama.....its for the birds....... 1 |
very good lady, props ....
13 u killed this shit my brother plain out sicc as fuck.............. multies and scheme were on point throught.. very good.Props |
Yeah Thanx
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that collab was ill as fuck......lady u had a hella nice, good wordplay and flow.......but like bribeone said, i think 13th killed this.....no doubt......straight illness......great flow, vocab, and wordplay.......straight thug......overall this was a hella tight collab.....keep droppin u too, that was nice......
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greatness, that is one of the hottest collabs i have seen on a board...13th damn that shit was sick. i wanna know if you wanna co lab, hit me up on PM and we will discuss a topic....lady dont think i forgot you, your shit was blazin too....just hotness
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its straight, was feelin it tho
just still think ya'll cud come hotter tho but good drop nonetheless, props |
^ Come Hotter? DAFUKKOUTAHEA (jp)
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13th...Ain't Much I Could Say, Your Verse Was Stunning....It Just Had Everything Good, And A Nice Story. Everything Was On Point And You Just Amazed me, Dope Shit man.
Lady...I See You Have Potential As A Topical Writer, You Just Need To Up A Little More And Try To Make The Story Less Of A Personal Ordeal And Making it entertaining For The Reader, Een Though We Could Feel The Anger. |
^ Umm Get Back To Me On That One... PM Me Or Sumthin
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yeah 13th shit was tight as hell nothin he could do to mke it any better its already perfected and LD ur verse was pretty ill to so overall this collab was pure illness well peace out
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^ I thought I banned you.. Oh well, you're banned again.
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this wasnt that good. multi's were ehhhhh, made little sense really
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^wtf?! Ok dirt muncher, whatever. lol. now lets all ride 13th and put this in RB Legends cheah! fuck outta here, morons. |
Detonata......or should i say Emagdinum....or would u prefer
camarac's bitch?.....anywayz......everytime u see the name 13th disciple...u click the thread and follow me.....get off my nuts....i ain't that way.....and since u are truly a dumb jew....let me help u out.... quote: -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- From the beginning it was drama.....i was breeched at birth abused & cursed,lower than dirt..pops made me eat the earth -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ^wtf?! Ok dirt muncher, whatever. lol. now lets all ride 13th and put this in RB Legends u ever hear the saying....'ur lower than dirt'?....well....its a comparison of that saying...also mixin it wit reality when my dad would abuse me...and slam my face into the ground.....damn ur stupid..... |
DETONATA just because you have beef with 13th dont f*ckin bring this collab down.. look at your battle record...
not my fault u play spin the bottle (kiss and tell)... dont even start |
damn :( i suck
this was a great job by you 2 lady had the ill flow and her vocab was top notch 13th... umm.. nothing worth mentioning cause all was great if you would be so kind http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84636 |
Tahnk you for mentioning the fact that i have ill flow and vocab!
I'll check ya stuff out1 |
Anymore feedback?
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I liked Divinity's content and loved disciples wordplay... yall combined nicely... each touching this topic in your own little way... tight drop... and stay away from them haters bringing Drama!!
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Thats very good feedback! fa real finally some1 mentions my content! LoL
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Every Guy I’ve Been With Was Wack, Infact There Were Just 2 Many Times I ‘ve Been Attacked
Next Day He Had The Nerve To Come Straight To My Face And Say “Baby Gurl I Want You Back” I Look In Ya Eyes In Despise Knowing That The Truth Is Covered In Lies I’ve Tried So Hard To Make It Work But He Was A Jerk, Lost Count Of Tries….. No1 Ever Sticks To Their Word From What I Heard, Blew Ya 1st Chance 2nd And third Every Time I Went To The Mall I’d Get A Call, Couldn’t Be In Peace While Eating Always Caught My Eyes On Some1 Cheatin, Then My Close Gurlz Beatin These Actors Rollz Are Played Out So When Will They Finally Retire? ^Dam that got my attention. Shit was so real it gav me goosebumps. Keep ya up mami, if you need sumone i'm always here =]. Ya flow is smooth and u stayed on topic. From the beginning it was drama.....i was breeched at birth abused & cursed,lower than dirt..pops made me eat the earth truth hurts,from flashbacks of tribulations,trials and pains bruised brain from rape games, young child carried much shame ^This had my attention and never let go. The flow was off the hook and the reality behind ya words is amazing. Seriously i dunt see no flaw in ya verse. just strictly hip-hop... Tight as fuck collab, fiending for more. |
Thank you, means alot that ur there 4 me!
its nice how u noticed that I stayed on topic and smooth flow! Yea hThe whole abusive relationship part was i nthe past, now I found true love! hope to see some of ya drops! ~LadyD~ |
Oh yeah.. my bad for the bad grammar
But thats the part I wanted to stand out! so its good that it stood out 4 u mami305 |
This was pretty decent. .
overall decent collaboration, both had some really good lines & some decent flow, work on the internals & more multi`s. . |
Wack.
Get off me now!! Well..the context flowed by Divinity reflected the strong on set theme and scheme of 13th. When doing a collab you cant just get somebody to collab with you just for the heck of it sometimes the chemistry between those people collabing had this connection that would fit like as if it's one. Divinity's reality check hustled the very hard part of life. Truth about this world makes me sick sometimes and the meaning held by her words simply to show how circumstances question the very sense of living in this earth. Tragedies happen, Nobody's life is perfect but for some reason if you look at somebody's you would realize that your's is not that bad and other's has worse. Good looking at those concepts Divinity. Okay...on 13th's verse (damn...do i have to say something about it really?).. ..Fine..well all i can see through 13th's verse is garbage. I meant garbage of inner meanings. A whole Pile of it. Wordplay and terminology combined fantastically. It's funny how I can understand 13th's verse so much and other people dont. Maybe because he's my idiot syndromatic brother and merely sometimes i know what's on his mind. CLearly stated that he had been through rough times and believe me you can really call it a drama..like in those soap opera ones or worse. Love the flow of the whole verse, bro. You made me proud! (*pukes*) Well all i can say is... Fucka Drama! |
Shiz Shiz Shiz.....good breakdown.....see....people don't
understand the sibling bickering at times between us two....but when it comes down to evaluating verses and work done by one another....we come real and use our intellect to grasp the deep meaning and imagery of the concepts in the verse. like, take poetry for an example, that is a field in which my mentally challenged sister excels in...at times...people can't understand the knowledge and circumstances in her words that she uses, because they are not truly on the level of elevation in which she is....bottomline.......ur such a slut sis....but thanks for the feedback |
Damn Jen... I didnt even finish reading ur feedback its longer then the collab! LoL
but thanx |
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Deep stuff guys,liked it a lot,it was straight illness to a hard topic.
~Quotes~ EMCEE DIMEZ aka Lady>Turn On The T.V And Tune In The Channel, Looks Like Everybody Plays A Role Everything Seems Just Like A Drama Series Cuz 2 Much Shitz Gone Out Of Control F*ck Drama, Screw It I’ve Constantly Been Through It, Too Much People Blew It Don’t Know How The Hell They Do It, But I Thought I Knew It, Too Much Shit To It Every Guy I’ve Been With Was Wack, Infact There Were Just 2 Many Times I ‘ve Been Attacked Next Day He Had The Nerve To Come Straight To My Face And Say “Baby Gurl I Want You Back” ^^Straight illness,it set the mood for the whole verse props 13th>From the beginning it was drama.....i was breeched at birth abused & cursed,lower than dirt..pops made me eat the earth truth hurts,from flashbacks of tribulations,trials and pains bruised brain from rape games, young child carried much shame never da same,peer pressure & rejection in the process of growth leg broke,once both,father said he had to teach me approach ^^Good shit.Your a tight topical writter you can express stuff very well.. Overall:8.5/10 Numero Uno~ |
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