ShEpNeY_zAnY [vs] BlackLion
 

rules:
-NO D/R
-NO HATE
-NO BITING
-NO FEEDING
-NO BITCHING
-HE SPITS FIRST
-NO FREEPOSTING
-IF U CANT VOTE THEN DONT
-100+ TO VOTE

here is his verse

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Originally posted by BlackLion
You couldn't be shit even if you come out my ass crack/
You attack and I'll pass you hot slugs like a Quaterback/
Like a vampire I terrorize and feed on a nigga in the dark/
My flow hypnotize and niggaz too shook to strike back/
My mack barks n sparks, leave niggaz flat on their backs/
Play me nigga, I'll leave you stuck in the streets like car tires/
Lock niggaz up, Like I'm an electrical fence mix with barb wires/
You like a 10 seconds commercial, your time is about to expire/
Take yo head for a baseball, smash it with more hits than Mcguire/
You can't get over me with a ladder or a parachute for that matter/
Bastard child, your blood will serve as ink for me to write on paper/
You feather weight, threrefore, you not even close for a contender/
Your religion is submission to me, I want your complete surrender/
My flow is hot and sick, leaves you with mysery and high fever/
You go to the doctor, you won't find suggestion nor an answer/
Your flow is so cold that it freezes a whole fucking summer/
I make haters slide out of this board like lil dick in wet pussy/
I got enough anmo to declare war on all vets and roockies/

This is open for ratings and challenges. Holla.
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Ill key my shit up now Pz

couple of questions.
How many rounds we gonna for?
reason I ask is that this spit was not directed at you. It was general.

hmm do u want to use that verse or do u wanna quickly key up a 10 minute verse..????....im keyin mine now

Nah, I do want to use that verse. I was high when I wrote it and don't trust it. I'll drop another one.

then hurry and key one up

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FUCKEN BITCH WENT OFFLINE
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i thought this was suppose to be a freestyle rap battle site,
not fair for black to drop a prewritten then drop an freestyle
just asking............................................ ........??????????????????????????/
dont mind me
oh and that mark mcguire is bitten, he flipped it a lil bit, but it is still bitten

hmmm he is a bitch that dont spit....maye this a NO SHOW :)
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Dog, stop with the calling names aight. Mcguire was not bitten, fuck is wrong with you?

I already started a new thread and spit at you. Its called Black Lion VS Shepney Zany ( the real battle). What don't you look for it. Prove to me you not just a shit talker.

HERES MY VERSE PEEPS

Black spittin sick??….never gonna happen its just stupid and crazy….
My verse getting ripped???….bullshit..well maybe if he payed–me….
He knows he cant win but he say he aint tryin..he hiding the fact that hes wack….
U lyrically dyin..cuttin u slack???fuck that u got a betta chance seein shaq cryin….
You laying your tracks off….I advise you revise your rhyme….
Think…when was the last time ur train of thought arrived on time….
Making Black squeal….like a gang of obiese guys, no one is PHATTER(fatter)….
Cause on the real….your whole verse a laughing matter….nows ur time to shatter….
Beating me..u have a better chance if u cheat…gotta 0 chance of havin me beat…
No chance defeating me…like a gunman goin to a showdown wid no heat…
Scorpian Wins…yeah but remember ur names blackLION….let me tell….
If being wack was a sin…U wont be goin to heaven but straight to hell….
You might as well rap to a fuckin wall cuz really no one wants to be hearin ya..
Rip ur skin off and show ur bitch interior…man u wack..u fit the criteria….
U ain't a G just cos you're kept back in class at lunchtime kid….
Soft like a Feather Pillow….Shit..u dont even know what a punchline is….
Spits shit verses then says he was high when he wrote it cuz he knows im ELITE….
I cant wait to lyrically kill you, im like a zombie looking for fresh meat to eat….
You couldn’t make an ILL verse if u mixed ur paper with ANTRAX….
You better stand back….cuz my verses don’t come like urs u have bad raps….
Rapping just aint for you….fuck spittin again just leave RB and then try POP….
U bring more shit than a junk shop….u gon be under me like im a giant and ur frodo…
Throwin punches Nonstop….the shit that u write ud have a betta chance to win if u no-show….

and by the way FRODO is them migit guys from lord of the rings...
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opener:shepney
closer:tie
worplay:shepeny
punches:shepeny
structure:shepney
overal:shepeny


shepey murdered this cat fo' real, that other guy u need to elevate dawg,
A LOT

^^it woud be real appreciated if u could VOTE
gotdaym....

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1st UPPIN


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this was merkin if i eva seen one---shulda kept ya first verse balck..lol---i mean ya flow is all over the place in the second ya punches were horrible atleast in the first ya had more disses---work on the flow, and ya concepts and how ya form punches---cuz ya need punches to win battles---shep ya flow was pretty nice, good multi's, and couple hittin punches--lotta punches--but actually the opener was pretty coo---ya had it by the end of that line---vote=shep

yo go peep my battles out i just upped em----
plus soon as necrid drops---peep that one---
thanx----peaceeee

2nd UPPIN...DONT SLEEP
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3rd UPPIN

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uppin 4 shep...........................
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I thin Zany won this battle..............Black came strong but Zany came stronger.............his punches were stronger, whereas Blacks seemed like an open mic kinda verse cos punches were not personal

VOTE: ZANY



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THANX

yo imma go wit zany man, cut the nigga real good
good flow pretty much da whole way through
sorta lost its momentum near da end
had a real ill opener
"Black spittin sick??….never gonna happen its just stupid and crazy….
My verse getting ripped???….bullshit..well maybe if he payed–me…."
end cudda hit harder
still good verse man

vote zany

Flow-Both
PUnches-Steph
Metas-Steph

Easy, Ohter dude didnt have any lines, peace


Hit hti sup

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